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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:42 am


A True Story
by Daisy Plindusta


I ran through the garden, yelling and screaming
But when my mother came out, I said I was only kidding

She threw a fit, and yelled at me
I said "Mother, I'm only 3"

She sighed and walked away
Then I smiled, and felt okay

I started running again, feeling alright
Then a branch popped out of nowhere
And I woke up in my bed late that night

My mother was sleeping on a chair beside me
I started crying, hard, harder than I hit my head on that tree


I know the end kinda....... doesn't work out, but I liked my poem, especially cause it really happened to me
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:33 am


Daisy Plindusta
A True Story
by Daisy Plindusta


I ran through the garden, yelling and screaming
But when my mother came out, I said I was only kidding

She threw a fit, and yelled at me
I said "Mother, I'm only 3"

She sighed and walked away
Then I smiled, and felt okay

I started running again, feeling alright
Then a branch popped out of nowhere
And I woke up in my bed late that night

My mother was sleeping on a chair beside me
I started crying, hard, harder than I hit my head on that tree


I know the end kinda....... doesn't work out, but I liked my poem, especially cause it really happened to me

I really like that ^-^ but unfortunatly the contest ended already >.< sorry. I sure you would have won because my poem sucks and yours comes with feeling. Feeling of when you first hit your head on the tree. The feeling of being there again. Bringing that feeling up into your poem makes it great. Sorry if that doesn't make any since >.< but i guess what i'm trying to day is that your poem has feeling in it when mine does not. I just kinda made up mine out of my love for writing not a personal expirience. Also mine was made up from the top of my head like 3 months before i posted it on here.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:35 pm


Wahhh....I wanna restart the contest. xD But but....I don't know what to give away. crying
PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 1:51 pm


how about

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all of which I am willing to donate. they are not the best but you have two inks that are not common, one cheesecake you can sell and a necklace that is not available anymore. they could all be the prize.

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