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 Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:20 pm
Rose screamed. She pulled the cellphone out and called 911 again. Between sobs she told them what was wrong.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:21 pm
Otaki fell to the ground, with a smile on his face and his eyes wide open. He was watching Rose's every move and said, "They can't do anything. Run now lassie. Run!"
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:22 pm
Kaoru turned his head in time and the bullet peirced his cheeks. The pain was immense but he kept himself up. Kaoru grabbed the gun from Otaki and threw it away. Kaoru knew Okati had no chance of survival with the blade plunged into him like that. He watched Okati lose consciousness. Kaoru ran over to rose and leaned against the wall.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:26 pm
As Kaoru had his back turned, Otaki pulled the sword out with all his might, and stabbed Kaoru in the back of the neck. He fell, and he uttered his last words...
"I want you to come with me boy... and I want her to suffer!" his eyes closed and everything went dark.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:27 pm
"I'm not letting anything bad happen." Her eyes were still closed as tears ran down her cheeks. Minutes later, she heard ambulance sirens going off. The paramedic's rushed in taking Otaki and Kaoru first. Gently, they picked her up as she ignored the pain. She didn't know what happened to Kaoru.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:28 pm
Pain exploded in kaoru's neck. He fell beside rose and looked her directly into her eyes as his world almost died
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:29 pm
((dont let teenagers around $5000 samurai swords))
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:30 pm
Torikimaru walked out of the mall and walked back to the park, where he saw the paremedic's taking people away. "Oh my god..." he said. He ran over to see Remix's friend being put in an ambulance. "What the hell happend." he said to himself. "I need to know what happend." he said as he watched the horror.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:31 pm
Rose screamed. "NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME!" Tears streamed down her face. The men put her in the back of the ambulance but she stumbled out. She ignored the agony as she tried to get closer to Kaoru. Finally she fell into the grass crying.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:31 pm
((lol jette's gonna come back and see how much we messed up the story))
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:32 pm
[yah, thanks to you. your seeming really jerky tonight. First my RP? now this.]
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:33 pm
(( blame teenage angst. plus it needed a bit of spice lol ))
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:34 pm
Kaoru woke the next day. He tried to open his eyes but closed them because the light was too bright. He tried to say something but his mouth hurt extreamly so he stoped. He decided the only thing was to open his eyes. He was in a hospital room. He moaned as he realised his last thoughts before these. He tried to say rose but it was a mumbled noise. he pressed the button that he had in his hand.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:37 pm
((pfft i stabbed you in the back of the neck. you wouldnt be waking up! MUAHAHAHAHAHA))
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:39 pm
(( Well my character didn't want to die so.......Bleh LOL ))
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