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 Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:29 pm
death ax no jutsu i did a little update on it, but now i don't feel too sure about it anymore. (not your fault) i can see multiple holes in the story, and then the issue with summoning....this will take some time oh! goes to see
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:31 pm
Dirk_Roland Reaper Elyse Well lets see~... Your a summoner and your focus of summoning isn't based on a magic seal that appears independently on the surface of air or on some other surface, but rather is affixed to cards. Really this nature is what makes your summoning specifically different and potentially far greater in mass(as in the number of creatures summoned) than other summoning magics around the guild. by changing the name you don't conflict with the logic of their being the varied summoning magics as seen about the guild in other pro's now. I think your magics name should play off the cards, but i'm really muddeling things around right now.
1. being that I'm doing this off the top of my head...
2. I don't know a lot of ways to reffer to cards and tye it in with summoning.
Maybe~ " shuffle summons", or "summoning decks", or somthing along those lines. Also your summoner race could use some distinction, it's really simply a human group with a special magic inclination, and a separate culture. It's more of a private group than a race or a proper culture. Usually cultures are built around several things such as, arts, philosophy, religion...etc. You know where I'm going with this. To be quite honest.... you just lost me with that hahaha. My sugestion/preception is this. Thies cards that you use as the "medium" each need to have a definition. Yes we all want a sense of mystery to our characters however for the most part every one is quite descriptive with what exactly are their true powers/ weakness. And in turn we don't use the knowlede against each other in the role play. not unless our characters are; 1- afiliated with each other, or 2- have interacted with each other long enough to know what they are capable of. So far number two has not happened yet. the guild has just simply not been active enough for this to happen. Yes you do have varied explanations of each area and you have put a limit as to how far you can take your character with said power. that is good. the admins like to see that. by all means it is your character. I hope that we get to interact in the future! I like the way you are going with it. infact I wouldn't do any thing with it. I was just giving you an idea of what the admins may look at. you just reminded me of something. i forgot to post that, because he isn't a master yet, he has to summon within the circle.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:39 pm
death ax no jutsu i did a little update on it, but now i don't feel too sure about it anymore. (not your fault) i can see multiple holes in the story, and then the issue with summoning....this will take some time
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:43 pm
Reaper Elyse death ax no jutsu i did a little update on it, but now i don't feel too sure about it anymore. (not your fault) i can see multiple holes in the story, and then the issue with summoning....this will take some time no, i like all sorts of feedback. for me. both positive and negative feed back helps me grow into a better person. its because you brought it to my attention before an admin saw it, i can at least fill in some holes and make it look just that much better. in fact i should thank you for tell me about the holes i had
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:49 pm
You really don't have to thank me, and I agree with your attitude about it. I feel the same way when I get feed back from people in ether way. As long as it helps the end result be that much more sound I say lay on the the judgment. Though I don't expect this attitude of everyone around me, so that's a part of why a felt sorta bad about it.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:06 pm
Reaper Elyse You really don't have to thank me, and I agree with your attitude about it. I feel the same way when I get feed back from people in ether way. As long as it helps the end result be that much more sound I say lay on the the judgment. Though I don't expect this attitude of everyone around me, so that's a part of why a felt sorta bad about it. dont make me start yelling at you about felling bad about something you shouldnt. XD you dont need to feel bad about it. the real judgment is when an admin looks at it so i can edit it up till then
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:37 pm
No~! don't yell! Well I hope you get those wholes filled, as for now I'm signing off. Night. =3
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:43 pm
well. im going to let the admins do thier work. im off. lets hope i filled in enough holes
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:05 am
Hey everyone. What are you all up to?
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:05 am
well were mostly trying toget reapproved. Which makes me ask if you fixed up your pro to the small changes the guild set up. Other than that I'm trying to shake off how tired I am. I've had a really long week. Though that's beside my point. So how are you?
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:31 am
Working on it. Having a minor.....Scratch that. A major problem. I can't figure out how to fit the Magic Seals into my Character's magic. I've already taken this problem to our captain though. So, don't worry about it to much. Anyway, off to bed with me now. Nighties everyone!
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:13 pm
I'm gonna try and make another character and see if I can't do anything to revise Va'an. I feel like something's missing from him or I could have done better...something to make it feel new I mean.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:27 pm
for the love of god, why is my patients so short today....must be the stupid people i had to deal with...i better stay away from this guild for a bit, that is until my profile gets looked at so i don't rant about it....THIS IS WHAT WORK AND COLLEGE DOSE TO YOU, KIDS
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:35 pm
i just looked at someone elses profile and i just found out that i may have started something.... i found another summoner who uses summoning magic. so...what will happen if we meet?
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:55 pm
Yeah well that's one of the reasons i pointed out the whole summoner thing. since there are people who are already using some form of it an some have a specific use of it as you do, so it would be better to define your self as a different type of summoner and identify the points that make you a summoner, but the points that you specialize in and or have an extended ability or connection with you summons.
Anyways, which profile did you look at that's got you asking this question? I'd say if the two of you meet it would just be a show down of who RP's better and has set up the better system of summoning. also you guys may just turn out as pals in the fact you share the same magic.
My main character as of now has a void affinity. It's not some private thing, but it's rare and only found in people with what you'd call a celestial ancestry. You know like angels or some kind of creature pertaining to the after life, even some demons.
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