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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:26 pm
Dork? My feelings are hurt. emo
What do you think of my character profile? It isn't even close to perfect and is kind of jumble together in places, but I think it is decent for my first online RP character profile.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:33 pm
They should be. twisted
The grammar is a bit lumpy and hard to follow sometimes, and the phrase "the pupils seem to dance in playfulness " makes me giggle inappropriately, but otherwise it's good, I think. XD Nice and thought-outish (what do you want from me? It's 9:30!).
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:35 pm
I want perfection!!!
I can't get over the fact that this llama looks so drunk. dramallama
And stop yer whinin' I wrote most of that between 1 and 1:30 in the morning!
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:42 pm
TOO BAD! D:<
AND, WELL, I HAVE THIS THING CALLED A LIFE, AND I LOVE THIS THING CALLED SLEEP, SO THERE.
[/CAPSLock]
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:45 pm
I wish I had a life. sad
Hehe.
bigfoot kickboxes.
Ranger gord is awesome.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:18 am
Dema, YOU were supposed to pick xp BUT I will - so join this thread http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=2102071&page=5You can run into Fabel as she clears the hall -- maybe your character will get a glimpse of something, but she will order you to leave. Then later, since you are in maintenance, Isabel (leader of the compound) will order you and a few others to repair some damage to the premise caused by the dragon. There is another character in the works (SECRET!) that will be at the compound and we'll arrange it for you to meet her.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:21 am
Hehe. Sorry I am still either a newbie to this or just a noob. I really hope it is the former.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:37 pm
I wouldn't know quite yet.
And yes, I agree with Phantom. It is hilarious. What you said. Yes. Hilarious.
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Hilarious.
I am not a fan of that kind of description, honestly. I find that description based on actual movements and actions for mere appearance is a little too far. I mean, "dancing"? That is pretty cwazy. Very cwazy. What kind of eyes dance? Well, mine can. But I was told it was more frightening than happy.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:23 pm
Don't ask ask him to do it. ;_; It makes me cry purple sparklie poo tears that seep from somewhere... like, gloomy and stuff. Yeah. Freaky.
So, what's the posting order now?
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 8:34 am
The posting order is not set in stone. You can either wait until Fabel comes back to you, or you can try to talk to the huge lizard in her absence biggrin
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:36 am
And now I wait. I have posted, and I must be patient. Yes . . . patient. OMG! INSANITY! RAWR! ROFLMAO! ROX TEH UBER HOUSE!
-cough-
Sorry 'bout that. My inner n00b broke out of me for a moment. He is locked away in a cage over lava in a dark cave under the ocean found on Saturn's liquid core. I hope he will not get back to me soon.
Anywho, how is everyone?
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 9:14 pm
LOLz april fools!
I'll prolly respond to the RP during class tomorrow! hahaha!
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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:47 am
Behold, a member of the Tok Royal Family!
Name: Vania
Gender: Female
Age: 36
Magic?: Of course! Her Emerald Dragon, named Smargadus. He is a powerful, masculine dragon who specializes in planting illusion and ideas into the minds of others through subtle techniques. If the arcane-guided charisma and subtle entry does not work, his magic can manifest into a more powerful force that can alter parts of a person's reality. In essence, it is a mental and completely believed illusion. Vania and Smargadus have often used their magic to allow Vania to infiltrate circles, groups, guilds, and organizations. Now with the task of infiltrating Feretris, Vania hides under a handful of guises to protect herself from the rival nation's spies and to gather her objective.
Appearance: Vania has taken many forms using her draconian ally's magic, and favors a few. In Feretris, she has taken the form of a tall, thin woman with long sable hair that flowed freely from her delicate-looking head. Her face was well-proportioned and balanced, boasting a petite nose and auburn eyes. She often wore a long and flowing, but modest, crimson dress. It covered her arms, legs, and body quite well, allowing Smargadus's magic to only have to extend to her visible portions of her body.
When not impersonating a member of Feretris's heirarchy, she takes the form of a small, dark-skinned and fragile looking slave. She uses this inconspicuous disguise to explore the compound, using her mysticism to convince those who see her that she is a slave, and one who's name is on the tip of the tongue.
Without magic, Vania stands at about five feet and around nine inches. Even though she isn't particularly tall, her regal demeanor makes her seem much more imposing, contrary to her frail-looking frame or somewhat simple features. She has brilliantly blue eyes and white-blond hair that is often tied into the back. Her skin is naturally pale, but has tanned in the sunlight that she often has to travel in. She almost always wears a mightier-than-thou expression that reveals no emotion.
Her dragon is a thick-bodied, muscular dragon that shimmers with the light around him. Because of his hue, he is actually transparent and seemingly forged out of raw, living emerald. His green hue stands out in almost all situations, even making fresh grass seem brown in comparison. His eyes are forged out of Emerald as well, but they don't seem as jagged and crystal-like as the rest of his body. In fact, they seem to be solid emerald orbs globes. He has two very large wings that fold neatly around his body and spikes running down his spine, separated by about a yard or so.
Personality: Vania, being raised as a member of the royal family, is quite haughty and egotistical. She believes that her status must be recognized (except for covert missions) and that she must receive the respect she deserves. As well, her training as a Three-Star Agent has made her impersonal to those around her during a mission as she tries to resist any bond being formed. Of course, she might pretend to be bonded so that she could get further into the group, but that tends to be a last resort.
When not on business, she is truly a hopeless romantic. All her life, she dreamed of being stuck in a tower, locked away by a dragon or something, and have a daring love-interest save her. Of course, the dragon portion of her dream has changed a bit, but knows that Smargadus would lock her in a tower for love.
Smargadus is a stern, level-headed creature that often seems insightful and wise but truly states the obvious. He knows a lot about personal illusions and deception, so he values the few concrete and static landmarks in his life. Under his tough and somewhat egotistical demeanor is a true love and caring for Vania and shiny objects.
History: Vania was born as Cedric's younger sister by about four years. She always looked up to her brother, and when approaching her child-age, dreamed of a knight who mirrored her brother to save her. To her, he was the quintessential image of nobility and virtue (which wasn't actually true). As she grew older, she dreamed more and more of her tower and draconian warden during her training as a member of the royal family and court. However, when she was at age thirteen, Cedric was captured. As her world began degrading around her, she slowly started (and was unsuccessful) a search for her lost brother and dear friend. Years past as she trained as a Three-Star Agent (a knowledge-gathering guild who's purpose was to inform and protect the royal family) so she could join the elite force that was meant to save her brother.
Years have passed, and on her twenty-first birthday, she underwent the aging ritual and awakening of her draconian bond. In the ceremony, she named the new ally "Smargadus", which meant precious in the ancient tongue. For thirteen years, she used her new ally's gifts to perfect her intricate skills. At the age of thirty-four, she entered Feretris in search of her brother and any marks he might have left. She quickly found information about a pale-skinned slave name "Cedric" who was a slave that slept with many of the mistresses as a love slave. At first, she rolled her eyes at Cedric, and then realized the weight of that news. If this was indeed her brother (which she truly believed it was), then he might have created children, and these children might have the draconian bond that was limited to the royal family for ages! Feeling a mix of fear and dread, she ran off to now find and bring freedom to all of Cedric's children.
Every slave she was about to reach managed to be bought out to a place called "Elric Estates", and she immediately ran off to that location to try and save the offspring of Cedric and his unions with the women.
Poor Vania.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 1:44 pm
demadaha New member!!! Name: Sverrir Elric Gender: Male Age: 20 Magic? Dragon-bonded to a male green dragon named Calen'loki . Calen'loki is extremely energetic and is willing to jump into any task that is assigned to him. Rather than lazing about Calen'loki would rather go out to explore or do something constructive. He has a very playful attitude and will often joke with the other dragons. Calen'loki works to make others happy because it is what makes him happy. Calen'loki is not very intimidating for a dragon, when it comes to a confrontation he would rather let the bigger and more ferocious dragons go through the process of intimidating others and only come into view when it becomes clear that there is going to be a fight. In battle Calen'loki prefers to take the enemy by surprise. When he is in battle Calen'loki is able to put up a fair fight but he depends on his magic to overcome his smaller stature. This is the reason why he tries to avoid any situation where he is forced into an air battle as his magic does him little good in flight. Calen'loki is able to use his magic to manipulate earth and usually uses this ability to hide himself or force his enemies in a situation where they are in a confined space. Appearance: Sverrir is about 5’ 10” in height and usually wears either a slightly mischievous smirk or an unsettling smile that makes whomever it is turned upon feel as though they are soon to be the subject of an experiment of some sort. His back, which he keeps as covered as possible, has many scars from the punishments that his second mistress inflicted upon him. A careful observer will note that whatever mood he is in will often influence his physical appearance; when he is in a good mood his deep blue eyes seem lighter and his face seems to assume a childish quality. When he is angry or troubled over some matter his eyes will become leaden, when in a bad mood he will let his hair become a disorderly mess of dark blonde strands rather than carefully grooming his hair to sweep towards the back of his head; this disorderliness will leave him with an almost comical appearance and makes the glare that he focuses on people make him seem to be little more than a upset child. In the presence of any female his demeanor changes dramatically, he immediately begins to seem as though he is sulking, his shoulders slump, his eyes become entirely fixated upon whatever task is at hand and he only do what is required of him, should he be at a loss for tasks to do he will stare blankly at the wall with his face completely emotionless deliberately making himself seem completely devoid of all intelligence. Personality: Sverrir has his own personal brand of humor that many people fail to understand. Sverrir rarely takes time to consider the feelings of others and will make a joke at another’s expense so long as he is able to get a couple laughs out of it. Sverrir does not go out of his way to help others unless there are consequences for not doing so or he stands to make a profit in some way from it. Although he does not believe men to have a natural tendency towards good or evil Sverrir has gotten to a point in his life where he believes that women are inherently evil. Because of this he is slightly paranoid and doesn’t trust anything a woman says and will often come to conclusions that are far from the truth and will often find some way of blaming a woman for any problem that arises in his life unless there is undeniable proof that the cause was the choice of a male. He has no interest in giving women an opportunity for redemption and long ago lost any hope that he may one day escape but has many times considered trying to murder some of the women in the compound. History: Sverrir is a son of Cedric but is unaware of it. The first woman that he served had a taste for Sverrirs sense of humor she even would laugh at his jokes provided, of course, they did not bring harm to her in any way. When his first mistress left to another compound she did not view Sverrir as valuable enough to bother transporting and decided to sell him off. This led to Sverrir being under the control of a particularly cruel mistress who took joy in making Sverrir suffer. While under the control of this woman Sverrir lost all hope in others, always believing that there would be no help for him and that the only way to improve his own life was to work for himself and only do things that further his own personal interests. Eventually this woman grew tired of Sverrir and sold him to another woman who sold him to yet another and so on and so forth. Ever since his first mistress Sverrir has dreamed of having a mistress so kind yet again, because although she still punished him regularly she was the only woman to enjoy his humor. He has come to view a woman with a sense of humor the best mistress he can hope for but does not believe it is in a females capacity to be kind. Sverrir has started having the dreams through his bond with Calen'loki but has not identified them as anything more than dreams. Note: I drastically edited this post. I reworked Sverrir to make him better, I hope it is better. -points at profile- Be better! I know that it still has grammatical problems and I am sure there are a hundred ways that it could be better but this is what I am changing it to. I hope that is ok and I hope that this doesn't make things to confusing.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:53 am
Hmmm . . .
Hmmm . . .
Yes, I like it. Its purdy.
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