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Punx_Spike
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:19 pm


PyroBiker
Funky Time Dancy Jam p***s p***s
p***s:

Baby I wanna
ooh
yeah
funky time
dance

hip hop hip hop
yeah
funky time
dance
yeah

p***s p***s p***s
I pwn n00bs
p***s p***s p***s
p***s!


rofl rofl rofl rofl lol lol xd whee sweatdrop xp
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:29 pm


lolz, I changed It to a horrible song I wrote three years ago In math class.

SkaBanana
Crew


Punx_Spike
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:47 pm


Alright guys, Ive been writing alot lately, especally with the new band starting up, so I want some honest oppinions here.

Nevermind the Bullshit

Ill sit here and pretend like I give a ******** you sit there and pretend to give a ******** about me
I dont give a ******** either way
Neither of us do
So lets sit back and Ill ignore your bullshit
While you stand there just like you always do
I pretend to listen
You pretend to care
Eitherway Im growing bored
So nevermind the bullshit that we both put out
Ignore the normal, regular rules this time
Lets just say whats on our minds
The laws of structure and form dont matter
Just sit back and enjoy the show
Its time for the classic sitcom with the classic story
Comedic startoff
Conflic arises
Happy ending
So nevermind the bullshit that we bot always pull
Take a break from the lies and fakeness for once
And just speak whats in our heads
Its time for the classic sitcom with the classic story
Comdic startoff
Conflict arises
Happy ending...


Idiot Box

Stare into your TV set they tell you what to think
How to act and how to dress
Even how to speak
Comercials sending hidden messages into your mind
Brainwashing the public just another social crime
Mass media teaching about the way things should be
Feeding lies into your brian, blinding so you never see
Keeping truth in the dark, hiding it from sight
Primetime televisions teaching wrong from right

CHORUS
Give yourself to them
They hand you back a mask
They sell there look to you
You fell into there trap
Now they own your soul
Soon you will see
You sold yourself to them
ITS CALLED CONFORMITY!

They start it at an early age by sending you to church
They teach you how to hate the different, then they send you off to work
Next thing you know you stop thinking for yourself
The system now has your brain sitting on the shelf!
The news feeding propaganda into your brain
Sending hidden messages, trying to make us think they same
Distracting from reality so the truth will not be heard
The FCC is silencing our every ******** word!

CHORUS



The Wake Up Call

You ignorent c**t!
Take a look around you
Realize that your realitys untrue
Things arnt as black and white as they make them seem
Wake up!
See whats in front of your eyes
Hypocrits and bodies piling to the sky
How can you not see this s**t happening?

Im sick of all the ******** ignorence
I tired of the peoples false happieness
I wont just stand by and take this
Its the wake up call
ITS TIME TO ******** CHANGE ******** you!
You walk around zombiefied
Your a sheep with a blindfold covering your eyes
Following the rest of the heard right off a cliff
Is if because
You cant face reality?
Waisting away, lost in the TV screen
You ******** ignorent bliss makes me sick!

Im done with all the ******** bullshit
Im finished with this s**t I have to witness
I wont just sit back and deal with it
Its the wake up call
ITS TIME TO ******** CHANGE THIS!

Stand up
And speak out
Wake up
It changes now
Look around
See nothings ******** ignorence
Its time to fight
ITS OUR WORLD!
WE WANT IT BACK!

Im sick of all the ******** ignorence
Im tired of the peoples false happieness
I wont just stand by and take this
Its the wake up call
ITS TIME TO ******** CHANGE THIS!
Im done with all the ******** bullshit
Im finished with the s**t I have to witness
I wont just sit back and deal with it
Its the wake up call
ITS TIME TO ******** CHANGE THIS!



Do You Have Corn In Your Ears, Mister?

Are you talkin to me?
Coz all I hear is bla bla bla
Your lips keep moving I see
But all I get is bla bla bla
I am falling asleep
While I listen to your bla bla bla
You think that I agree
As I nod to your bla bla bla

CHORUS
Your words are falling on def ears
Stupiditys all I ever hear
Sorry did you say somthing?
Hypocritic, Pathologic
Harms been done I cant forget it
Sorry did you say something?

You start to move your lips
And out comes bla bla bla
And still you insist
To preach your bla bla bla
I really couldnt care less
About your bla bla bla
But still you persist
To go on with your bla bla bla!

CHORUS

Ok, thats all of em so far. Tell me what you think!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 4:40 pm


I told you last night and I'll say It on here. Awesome lyrics. <33333333333


Someone censored our lyrics. D:

SkaBanana
Crew


SpazistIdealist
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:39 pm


I'm really passionate about this song... my views on religion are probably the single strongest views I have. i'm pretty much anti-christ to the extreme, so this song reflects on that. but ya, I really like what i've done to this song, so i'm going to be adding to it and editing it. I dont have a recording, but the guitar to the song is kind of similar to what i'd say sounds like a slightly more pop-punk version of Bad Religion-Let Them Eat War. its all done length wise, but when im done revising things i'll just make a new post with the revised version so that way comments on this song will still be valid incase a comment is made on a part of the lyrics I change. Seriously... I poured my heart into this song. Tell me what you think, if you have any questions for what i mean at certain parts, or whatever, just ask. I have nothing better to do than answer... plus, i like talking about this kind of stuff. also... im having trouble coming up with a name, i dont want to be something simple like a few back to back words in the song. if its words in the song thats fine, but im pretty much looking for a name that is similar to some words in the song, but worded different. right now it just has the name ive decide on now that'll probably change

An Illusion's World Order

1st stanza
In a world with superstition, false vision
Followers of religion are at fualt for social division
And now in a search to spread false hope
Some won't ever take a no from those who refuse it

One nation under God can never be
The land of the free!

Chorus
They call it Satan when your senses creep in
The world's ********, with one thing to believe in!
Why do you have to force this s**t!?(With no right, I hope you're happy!)
2,000 years of lives wasted, 2,000 pounds of opression breeded
Why is the fire in the midst of hope and fear
Too strong to be doused by all the tears over the years?

2nd stanza
Why do we build our lives on creed?
And discourage concern for "worldly things"?
Running in place, a cripling disease, but they say it's ok "if God is pleased"
And you don't care if it hurts anything, other than your imaginary friend!

Until our hearts and minds can see
And until our eyes and minds open, liberty will never be achieved!

Chorus
They call it Satan when your senses creep in
The world's ********, with one thing to believe in!
Why do you have to force this s**t!?(With no right, I hope you're happy!)
2,000 years of lives wasted, 2,000 pounds of opression breeded
Why is the fire in the midst of hope and fear
Too strong to be doused by all the tears over the years?

3rd stanza
No matter how harsh it may be
It's time we face reality!
*speeds up*[In order to forgive,
we must live, based on consequence!]x3 (1st. soft guitar only 2nd. add drums 3rd. the guitar picks up to normal speed)
*talking*I can't convince you of the suffering from your convictions
but if you'd only think for yourself...*sings again*you'll find contradictions!

Chorus
They call it Satan when your senses creep in
The world's ********, with one thing to believe in!
Why do you have to force this s**t!?(With no right, I hope you're happy!)
2,000 years of lives wasted, 2,000 pounds of opression breeded
Why is the fire in the midst of hope and fear
Too strong to be doused by all the tears over the years?

Bridge
Is the fire in the midst of hope and fear
Too strong to be doused by all the tears?
(They're in denial!)Their selfish need for hope to conquer fear
May one day be drowned by all the tears
*talking*Whether the tears are...
*screaming*silent, or loud!
invisible, or shed out!
*singing*Social slavery comes from your fears
It will always be here while brainwash is held deer!

Chorus
They call it Satan when your senses creep in
The world's ********, with something false to believe in!
Why do you have to force this s**t!?(With no right, I hope you're happy!)
2,000 years of lives wasted, 2,000 pounds of opression breeded
Why is the fire in the midst of hope and fear
Too strong to be doused by all the tears over the years?
Freedom and equity must grip humanity's race!
I know we're strong enough to overcome the challenges we face!
*Talking, drums stop, but light guitar continues*For a second, just a second, drop your arrogance and confidence, and think what if, just for a moment think what if, "what if christianity isn't true, would the world be a better place without it?" If you examine EVERY aspect, you'll find your answer.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:53 am


Crazy In The Drunk Tank

Watch your back,
Donʻt drink alone.
Get in a fight,
Or get your a** back home...
The moneyʻs tight,
But youʻre not scared,
ʻCause all your friends ,
Will buy a round of beer...

Well I donʻt wanna go.
And see the pictures end.
Salute the days gone by,
Cheers to all my friends.
Good deeds to those in need,
Bad times have gone away.
To all my hooligans,
Enjoy another day...

Soooooo......

You can drink the whiskey, and Iʻll just drink the beer.
Weʻll march around the bar all night, pretend weʻre not alone.
The drunken destination weʻre seeking is escape
From all our daily problems and descisions that went wrong.

When everything is all right,
Weʻll just sit back, pretend not to forget about it...
When everything is all wrong,
We throw our fists to fix it...

Crazy in the Drunk Tank!
(tilt your head back)
Crazy in the Drunk Tank!
(throw your head back)
Crazy in the Drunk Tank...

(( you can listen to this song @ http://www.myspace.com/theuglysticks ))

Throwaway Style


xMQx
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 6:55 pm


I got a song up on MySpace. It's not a punk song, but I like it.

http://www.myspace.com/freshnutz
PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 8:41 pm


<******** WORK

Wake up, 9AM...
Go to work,
Got to bed.
Get up.
Do it ******** WORK!!!!

*repeat as ******** WORK, I QUIT!!!!!!!

((check it out@ http://www.myspace.com/theuglysticks ))

Throwaway Style


`Undead

PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:25 am


Scrotum, scrotum its just a piece of skin! Scrotum, Scrotum It keeps my balls in!

PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 3:39 pm


`Undead
Scrotum, scrotum its just a piece of skin! Scrotum, Scrotum It keeps my balls in!


rofl rofl rofl

Max Glycine


SkaBanana
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:43 am


xANTI-HUMANx
`Undead
Scrotum, scrotum its just a piece of skin! Scrotum, Scrotum It keeps my balls in!


rofl rofl rofl

rofl



A crappy song I wrote inspired by people who think Sublime is Ska, with nothing better to do:


Walkin' round in my Reel Big Fish Shirt,
checkered hat and wrists bands too!
Telling everyone I'm a Rudeboy
Some say, "We wanna be like you!"
I like my Sublime,
and my checkered skate shoes,
I listen to two-tone, like The Mephiskaphiles
I go out skanking at AFI shows,
to show how rude I am, SO RUDE!

I'm rude, ruder than you
and you'll never catch up, even if you try
See I'm rude, you'll never be like me
and that's the way it's supposed to be
Cause i'm rude, ruder than you
If you try to catch up,
I'll flash my checkered boobs
See I'm rude, ruder than you
and you'll never catch up,
no matter what you do.

I'm not ignorant, no not at all
Gonna go out and have a ball
If anyone tells me Sublime's not Ska,
I'll throw out some insults and show off my chekered bra.


I'm rude, ruder than you
and if you want really want,
I can teach you to
be rude, but not ruder than me
cause that's an impossibility
I'm rude, hep hep ruder than you
who says i'm not
I like to skank alot
So rude, in my checkered hat
Where are my Sublime wrist bands at?
So rude, ruder than you
come on, i'll show you my checkered boobs!
I'm rude, mm so rude
Skank to Reel Big Fish when we order our food
PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:38 am


Now I will attempt to write a song, as I go along (Like I usally do)

(Dramatic orchestra music)

DOMO! (AH, AH AH AH!)
DOMO! (AH, DOMO AH AH)
DOMO! (DOMO! DOMO! DOMO!)

Con El DOMO DEYO!

Alleluia!

Glorium Domo Ejus EJUS DOMO!

DOMO! DOMO! DOMO!

CON EL DOMO

VERBUM CARO DOMO ES!

DOMO VITO! DOMO VITO!

HURRAH!

AMEN! domokun

SkaBanana
Crew


TigerArmy666

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:00 pm


PyroBiker
xANTI-HUMANx
`Undead
Scrotum, scrotum its just a piece of skin! Scrotum, Scrotum It keeps my balls in!


rofl rofl rofl

rofl



A crappy song I wrote inspired by people who think Sublime is Ska, with nothing better to do:


Walkin' round in my Reel Big Fish Shirt,
checkered hat and wrists bands too!
Telling everyone I'm a Rudeboy
Some say, "We wanna be like you!"
I like my Sublime,
and my checkered skate shoes,
I listen to two-tone, like The Mephiskaphiles
I go out skanking at AFI shows,
to show how rude I am, SO RUDE!

I'm rude, ruder than you
and you'll never catch up, even if you try
See I'm rude, you'll never be like me
and that's the way it's supposed to be
Cause i'm rude, ruder than you
If you try to catch up,
I'll flash my checkered boobs
See I'm rude, ruder than you
and you'll never catch up,
no matter what you do.

I'm not ignorant, no not at all
Gonna go out and have a ball
If anyone tells me Sublime's not Ska,
I'll throw out some insults and show off my chekered bra.


I'm rude, ruder than you
and if you want really want,
I can teach you to
be rude, but not ruder than me
cause that's an impossibility
I'm rude, hep hep ruder than you
who says i'm not
I like to skank alot
So rude, in my checkered hat
Where are my Sublime wrist bands at?
So rude, ruder than you
come on, i'll show you my checkered boobs!
I'm rude, mm so rude
Skank to Reel Big Fish when we order our food
haha, that was awesome pyro. cracked me up.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 10:00 pm


Thanks. razz

SkaBanana
Crew


Status Quo Joe
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:54 am


PyroBiker
Thanks. razz

But SuBlImE iz T0tally TEH SKA!1!1!!!
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