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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 10:15 pm
Penden Monteagueo Name:Monteagueo Gender:Male Age:unknown Magic:Able to create portals leading where ever he wants to go,Can transform in to different animals also able to speak that animal's language,Able to shoot fire,ice,lightning,portals[same portals as above],summon food,creatures,weapons. Appearance:Like avi except most times sadow spirit walks next to me as and identical clone. Personality:Shy,In battle almost fearless,very protective of comrades. History:A bounty hunter. I'm sorry, no. I can't accept someone who can barely use punctuation. There is also no evidence that you read the first page. There is nothing that makes your character belong in this RP. I also can't accept a profile where most of the appearance is that it is "like avi". Your character also has too many abilities. Thank you for your submission but this profile would take too much work for me to help you with for this RP. You might want to check this thread out. Fine then. *quits guild*
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:35 am
[Shikamaru] Nara Penden Monteagueo Name:Monteagueo Gender:Male Age:unknown Magic:Able to create portals leading where ever he wants to go,Can transform in to different animals also able to speak that animal's language,Able to shoot fire,ice,lightning,portals[same portals as above],summon food,creatures,weapons. Appearance:Like avi except most times sadow spirit walks next to me as and identical clone. Personality:Shy,In battle almost fearless,very protective of comrades. History:A bounty hunter. I'm sorry, no. I can't accept someone who can barely use punctuation. There is also no evidence that you read the first page. There is nothing that makes your character belong in this RP. I also can't accept a profile where most of the appearance is that it is "like avi". Your character also has too many abilities. Thank you for your submission but this profile would take too much work for me to help you with for this RP. You might want to check this thread out. Fine then. *quits guild* Good for you. We don't need brats here.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:42 am
dun-dun-duun 1. Well, actually, even if Tok does have rules or policies against it, Cain would probably do it anyway. However, he only did it after he left Tok, when he reached Feretris. However, I would expect that they would have something against homosexuality (Wouldn't any country have?).
2. I won't mind RPing it out. However, he primarily used aliases and different identities to actually make the trades themselves, and a lot of the time not making the transactions in person. 1) Oh! I was probably trying to read too fast. Yes I would imagine that they would have laws against it, as they remind me of England back in the day of Oscar Wilde. However, this is a fantasy world and not England, and since it would have affected your character the most (I thought), I let you decide. And of course, Feretris would be much more pissed off about cross dressing since it screws with their social order so much. 2) So what you mean, is that he appeared as a woman and had a false paper or two, and was able to con people that way? That makes sense. It's up to you whether you want to RP this part out. One thing about this RP is that you can RP both the past and the present at the same time because events are contained in separate threads. Now where to put you... We have 1 slave leaving Feretris, 1 slave stuck there for now, a slave and a dragon flying out of Feretris, a woman and a boy coming over on dragons from Tok after some naughty escapee young dragons... Hmn. I'm thinking about it, but if you have your own ideas...
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:31 am
School Of Dedicated RPers [Shikamaru] Nara Penden Monteagueo Name:Monteagueo Gender:Male Age:unknown Magic:Able to create portals leading where ever he wants to go,Can transform in to different animals also able to speak that animal's language,Able to shoot fire,ice,lightning,portals[same portals as above],summon food,creatures,weapons. Appearance:Like avi except most times sadow spirit walks next to me as and identical clone. Personality:Shy,In battle almost fearless,very protective of comrades. History:A bounty hunter. I'm sorry, no. I can't accept someone who can barely use punctuation. There is also no evidence that you read the first page. There is nothing that makes your character belong in this RP. I also can't accept a profile where most of the appearance is that it is "like avi". Your character also has too many abilities. Thank you for your submission but this profile would take too much work for me to help you with for this RP. You might want to check this thread out. Fine then. *quits guild* Good for you. We don't need brats here. I'm confused. Why did that person quit? You weren't even critiquing his profile. confused
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:35 pm
Roka_Shotar School Of Dedicated RPers [Shikamaru] Nara Penden Monteagueo Name:Monteagueo Gender:Male Age:unknown Magic:Able to create portals leading where ever he wants to go,Can transform in to different animals also able to speak that animal's language,Able to shoot fire,ice,lightning,portals[same portals as above],summon food,creatures,weapons. Appearance:Like avi except most times sadow spirit walks next to me as and identical clone. Personality:Shy,In battle almost fearless,very protective of comrades. History:A bounty hunter. I'm sorry, no. I can't accept someone who can barely use punctuation. There is also no evidence that you read the first page. There is nothing that makes your character belong in this RP. I also can't accept a profile where most of the appearance is that it is "like avi". Your character also has too many abilities. Thank you for your submission but this profile would take too much work for me to help you with for this RP. You might want to check this thread out. Fine then. *quits guild* Good for you. We don't need brats here. I'm confused. Why did that person quit? You weren't even critiquing his profile. confused Because they didn't get their way.... They probably didn't want to take the work into their profile and just wanted to start role playing. Unlike you and me, where we think about the profiles and the character more than just the role play itself, some people just think about the role play, and like to try and skip all the character creation steps. Some people purposely try to make vague profiles as well, so that they can do what ever they want with their character on a whim. Also from reading the profile, this person wanted their character to be all powerful and able to do anything/everything. Far too many powers for one character, and doesn't even match any of the powers/races of this role play was well.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 3:02 pm
I try not to be surprised any more. One person quit the guild a while back because I deleted some spam they posted. A big part of RPing is just getting along with people, and some people either can't or don't want to do that. If they were just having a really bad week and change their mind later, they'll be reaccepted into the guild. So I don't worry about it. We don't need people who don't want to be here.
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dun dun dun -- I've got an idea for your character! That is, if you don't mind letting him get captured by Feretris police, under the OOC promise that he will be immediately released. mrgreen How's that sound?
Tetsunie -- I'll try to get to your thread tonight or tomorrow morning smile
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 3:27 pm
Name: Mælily Blæd Gender: Female Age: 15 Magic: Blæd magic of speed and illusions Appearance: Mælily is short for her age, only a measly 5 feet tall, but won't easily be thought younger than 14. She is pale, practically white due to the fact she is active mostly at night and stays in the shadows. She has long black hair with a hint of purple that she keeps pulled up in ponytail braids (Pulled up starting off like a ponytail then is braided) on the either side of her head. Her eyes almost appear completely black due to the fact her irises are an unusual dark purple so they blend in well with her pupils. Unlike most in the Kiyap Turea, Mælily covers her whole body with black clothing, a tight fit woolen shirt, black breeches, leather boots, and a black cloak over everything. Her white skin tone never helps while on missions (Her skin is so pale that even when a new moon is out she can seen her hand in front of her face when it's pitch black out) and she hates the feeling of body paint covering her whole body, another oddity among the Kiyap. Personality: While on duty Mælily acts how one would imagine a spy, quiet, patient, stealthy, nimble, follows orders exactly as told, and very calm, however that is the Mælily on duty. Off duty Mælily is a completely different person. She is loud and obnoxious, acts like she is on a 24/7 sugar rush, talks goofily and makes up words with ease, has the attention span of a monkey, too curious for her own good, rebellious, a complete klutz (she could and would find a way to trip on a perfectly flat surface), and has an attitude that seems to say, 'It's my pleasure to piss you off.' In other words, she is a hyper active brat. Her two different personalities usually stick to the idea of On Duty Calm and Off Duty Hyper, but sometimes if a job is real boring or she's on a mission just not doing it at the moment Mælily's hyper self comes out to cure her boredom. Even if On Duty Mælily is patient she still does get bored, it just takes longer for boredom to affect her. There only two similarities between off duty and on duty Mælily, one is that despite the fact off duty Mælily is a klutz she is a nimble klutz (yes it is possible) and two is that both personalities never show what Mælily is really thinking. She is always hiding behind some type of mask, be is calmess or hyperness her true feelings are locked away in a little box with multiple locks. History: Mælily has been born into the Hælt family. Everyone woman on her mother and father's side (they claim) had been a Hælt (Either born a Hælt or became one) and had were naturals when it came to healing magic, so both parents were more than confident she would follow in the family footsteps. Their confidence started to waver when they realized that she had no friends among the Hælt, her only friends were in the Blæt. In hopes of making sure Mælily would chose to stay a Hælt her mother taught her whenever she was free about healing magic and the human anatomy. What her mother didn't know was that she was sneaking out at night starting at age 6 and was being taught how to be a good spy from one of the older children of the Blæt. When Mælily came of age to decide what her profession was she was told by her mother that if she left to become a Blæt she was no longer her daughter, but that did not stop the teen and ever since then she has yet to speak with either of her parents. Mælily went through her training for being a spy quickly and made a few more friends in the process. Then for a year she was partnered with an older veteran spy and worked with her, it was almost like finishing school. Once on her own she was started off with smaller missions like all of the other new spies, but she moved on to bigger and better missions after proving that she deserved a challenge. Throughout her years of being in the Blæt she has gotten on Craze's bad side frequently, but since she was so good at doing her job she somehow always returned to being on Craze's good side.
Finally. After.. like three days of trying to learn everything I need to know. It's done!
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 4:04 pm
Penden dun dun dun -- I've got an idea for your character! That is, if you don't mind letting him get captured by Feretris police, under the OOC promise that he will be immediately released. mrgreen How's that sound? Sounds good. mrgreen ...I hate living in different time zones. x.x
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 4:44 pm
Tesunie Roka_Shotar School Of Dedicated RPers [Shikamaru] Nara Penden Monteagueo Name:Monteagueo Gender:Male Age:unknown Magic:Able to create portals leading where ever he wants to go,Can transform in to different animals also able to speak that animal's language,Able to shoot fire,ice,lightning,portals[same portals as above],summon food,creatures,weapons. Appearance:Like avi except most times sadow spirit walks next to me as and identical clone. Personality:Shy,In battle almost fearless,very protective of comrades. History:A bounty hunter. I'm sorry, no. I can't accept someone who can barely use punctuation. There is also no evidence that you read the first page. There is nothing that makes your character belong in this RP. I also can't accept a profile where most of the appearance is that it is "like avi". Your character also has too many abilities. Thank you for your submission but this profile would take too much work for me to help you with for this RP. You might want to check this thread out. Fine then. *quits guild* Good for you. We don't need brats here. I'm confused. Why did that person quit? You weren't even critiquing his profile. confused Because they didn't get their way.... They probably didn't want to take the work into their profile and just wanted to start role playing. Unlike you and me, where we think about the profiles and the character more than just the role play itself, some people just think about the role play, and like to try and skip all the character creation steps. Some people purposely try to make vague profiles as well, so that they can do what ever they want with their character on a whim. Also from reading the profile, this person wanted their character to be all powerful and able to do anything/everything. Far too many powers for one character, and doesn't even match any of the powers/races of this role play was well. But that isn't even his profile! That is Monteagueo's, not Shikamaru's.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 6:28 pm
Haha, yeah that's why I don't worry about people like that. xd Black-- awesome! and thanks so much for talking to me in PM. You can jump in this thread any time like we talked about. smile This is me remembering to add you two's profiles to the front page... I'll start your thread tonight, dun, and respond to Tesunie
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:16 pm
Name: Hano Seishou Gender: Male Age: 14 Magic?: Able to enchant weapons and can blast black waves from enchanted weapons Appearance: Hano's look, was that of an sixteen your old, because he matured fast, year-old with a katana on his back. He wears a long black jacket. ((like high school long jacket)) His pants are that of a shinigami and so are his shoes. He has white spiky hair and medium sized brown eyes. Under the jacket he wears a weighted red vest that carries five peices of licourish((sorry, its a conusing word)). He has four pouches along the vest. He wears a brown supply belt that carries a krazr that he always has with him. Personality: Flirty, jokes around, but serious when it comes to a fight History: When he was a child, one of his parents died of Heart attack, so he doesnt eat much junk. He lived in a small house in the Boondox, and his mom was the only ting to protect him, and when they were robbed by a wanderer one day, his mom was crippled for she was shot in both arm a bit below the shoulder rendering her helpless. She has been in the hosplital since he was ten so he took up wandering. As he walked around Feretris, he found someone who called themselves the magic bringer. The Magic Bringer said that if he could bring a self beating drum, he would be granted immortality. He studied for a long time and finally decided to use his intelect. He went to a beehive and hits into a drum and trapped bees. He used a katana he found on the road to kill the remaining bees. The bees tried to get out and it made the drum beat. Because of the intelect, The Magic Bringer, brought out his magic. Over three years he learned what he could do.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:24 pm
Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Name: Hano Seishou Gender: Male Age: 14 Magic?: Able to enchant weapons and can blast black waves from enchanted weapons Appearance: Hano's look, was that of an eighteen year-old with a katana on his back and a scythe crossing behind it. He wears a long black jacket. ((like high school long jacket)) His pants are that of a shinigami and so are his shoes. He has white spiky hair and medium sized red eyes. Under the jacket he wears a weighted red vest that carries 500 needles per pouch. He has one hundred pouches along the vest. He wears a brown supply belt that carries a sake bomb gun, one of his creation Personality: Flirty, jokes around, but serious when it comes to a fight History: unknown, beware I'm sorry, but there's just no evidence that you read the front page at all. Your character would not fit in this RP. He's too dramatic with his 500 needles and his red eyes. You have no history for him. He looks 18 but is 14? This is completely unacceptable for this type of RP.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:27 pm
Penden Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Name: Hano Seishou Gender: Male Age: 14 Magic?: Able to enchant weapons and can blast black waves from enchanted weapons Appearance: Hano's look, was that of an eighteen year-old with a katana on his back and a scythe crossing behind it. He wears a long black jacket. ((like high school long jacket)) His pants are that of a shinigami and so are his shoes. He has white spiky hair and medium sized red eyes. Under the jacket he wears a weighted red vest that carries 500 needles per pouch. He has one hundred pouches along the vest. He wears a brown supply belt that carries a sake bomb gun, one of his creation Personality: Flirty, jokes around, but serious when it comes to a fight History: unknown, beware I'm sorry, but there's just no evidence that you read the front page at all. Your character would not fit in this RP. He's too dramatic with his 500 needles and his red eyes. You have no history for him. He looks 18 but is 14? This is completely unacceptable for this type of RP. Im working on it, at the moment and actually people do have red eys.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:33 pm
Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Penden Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Name: Hano Seishou Gender: Male Age: 14 Magic?: Able to enchant weapons and can blast black waves from enchanted weapons Appearance: Hano's look, was that of an eighteen year-old with a katana on his back and a scythe crossing behind it. He wears a long black jacket. ((like high school long jacket)) His pants are that of a shinigami and so are his shoes. He has white spiky hair and medium sized red eyes. Under the jacket he wears a weighted red vest that carries 500 needles per pouch. He has one hundred pouches along the vest. He wears a brown supply belt that carries a sake bomb gun, one of his creation Personality: Flirty, jokes around, but serious when it comes to a fight History: unknown, beware I'm sorry, but there's just no evidence that you read the front page at all. Your character would not fit in this RP. He's too dramatic with his 500 needles and his red eyes. You have no history for him. He looks 18 but is 14? This is completely unacceptable for this type of RP. Im working on it, at the moment and actually people do have red eys. I know that. Right now your profile is unacceptable as a whole, but I have no problem with you working on it until it is. Usually people don't post until they are most of the way done, so I thought that you were. Good luck!
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:37 pm
Penden Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Penden Captain_Kyoraku_Shinsui Name: Hano Seishou Gender: Male Age: 14 Magic?: Able to enchant weapons and can blast black waves from enchanted weapons Appearance: Hano's look, was that of an eighteen year-old with a katana on his back and a scythe crossing behind it. He wears a long black jacket. ((like high school long jacket)) His pants are that of a shinigami and so are his shoes. He has white spiky hair and medium sized red eyes. Under the jacket he wears a weighted red vest that carries 500 needles per pouch. He has one hundred pouches along the vest. He wears a brown supply belt that carries a sake bomb gun, one of his creation Personality: Flirty, jokes around, but serious when it comes to a fight History: unknown, beware I'm sorry, but there's just no evidence that you read the front page at all. Your character would not fit in this RP. He's too dramatic with his 500 needles and his red eyes. You have no history for him. He looks 18 but is 14? This is completely unacceptable for this type of RP. Im working on it, at the moment and actually people do have red eys. I know that. Right now your profile is unacceptable as a whole, but I have no problem with you working on it until it is. Usually people don't post until they are most of the way done, so I thought that you were. Good luck! Cant write a book in a day, wink
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