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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:47 am
Thanks for the compliments and help everyone!
Haha, and now for the edits!
In terms of Cossette, some of the details I left out were simply my stupidity since I did have those details down at some point or another and don't know why I deleted them. ^_^ She was indeed home-schooled and moved from New York at the age of nine. I really wanted to give a sense that Cossette's decisions came from being sheltered as a child. And the surgery actually was caused from a combination of an unnaturally small waist due to cinching and a well-endowed chest. As a porn-star, however, she can't necessarily have her best "talent" reduced, so spinal surgery was necessary. I'll definitely make a note of that in the next draft.
And the term insanity was definitely a poor choice of words on my part. Insanity would be a word used by her Au Pair to describe the young Cossette, which was why I used it, but in retrospect, I can definitely see it as a misinterpretation of Cossette's free-spirited character.
And now Caleb...
Actually, I'm quite fine with Caleb not being a Host. ^_^ Originally, I really only wanted him to be a side-character that continues to reflect the quirks of Cossette rather than actually be a Host or Eve. The issue was that I didn't want Cossette having a sudden rampage and killing Caleb. I know his death might be necessary in terms of making Cossette vengeful, but I was hoping that Cossette's drive comes from wanting to protect Caleb. Sort of like "You tried to make me kill my son, now I'll kill you," sort of motivation. She knows what she's capable of and needs to protect the one thing she cares about.
Thanks for all your help by the way! ^_^ I hope this clarifies everything?
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:56 pm
[Character has been removed by Author.]
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 1:53 pm
Okay, thank you for letting me know. I'll wait =D
School was crazy for me too these past couple of weeks with midterms and whatnot >_> Glad it's over for now!
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:27 pm
All righty, here we go! Firstly, thanks are in order for our own Isa-Sama. It is true that I appointed her to be my lieutenant in all things regarding the acceptance of Hosts, and she has done a phenomenal job. Thanks, chica. Next up, all who were accepted already (Yuri and Michure, so far) can be expecting an entry from me as soon as possible. Keep an eye on the Announcements thread, where I will let you all know when you are able to begin posting. To the Eves, I'm sorry, but I can't be the one to approve you. Still, I hope that the other players in the community will help to criticize and improve each other. Thank you to everyone for the interest and the help!
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:50 am
MICHELLE!!!!!! You should join OiM! Great characters, by the way.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:13 pm
. . . . no feedback from anyone.
Is my guy really that bad. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 11:18 am
No, don't worry. It's just that the person in charge of veiwing and okaying EVE profiles is a bit busy right now. They'll be with us eventually... wow, sounds like a doctor's office haha
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:03 pm
The Ballad No, don't worry. It's just that the person in charge of veiwing and okaying EVE profiles is a bit busy right now. They'll be with us eventually... wow, sounds like a doctor's office haha You're not going to move me from the waiting room to a smaller room where I can wait some more are you? I hate that little room....
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:39 pm
No, you can go to the children's waiting room where we play Disney Channel and have lots of broken toys, and puzzles with missing pieces. At least it will spare you the old magazines, right? =D
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:08 am
The Ballad No, you can go to the children's waiting room where we play Disney Channel and have lots of broken toys, and puzzles with missing pieces. At least it will spare you the old magazines, right? =D I love those Puzzles I can make a field with a dog-fish-windmill in it and those broken toys are awesome if you bring tape with you to make a monstrous Transformer wannabe razz
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:30 am
Yay! I like you. Come play with me! We can make mud pies while Mamaa makes cookies and rice crispee treats!!! haha Wow, I really do feel like a little kid when I say that O_o
Well, first day of the New Year! A late Happy New Years to everyone.
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:06 pm
Jakey-poo!
Ah, I can't make any promises, mostly because I don't know if I'll have the time. And thankies! ^_^ Saw your character design and really liked it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:06 pm
Grr, you really should XP. I won't blame you if you don't, though, college is busy business I suppose. Haha, thanks.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:32 pm
Alright!
Sorry about being so absent from this place, gonna catch up on profiles. Only reading profiles I haven't seen, reviewing those. Gimme some time.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 10:07 pm
So. Brief reviews.
Ballad, love the profile. Love it. Powers, a little overpowered. The concept is great, the lack of limits not so much. Energy limits are assumed, but I wanna see something else.
Jack, well-put together profile, wanna see some powers. Brainstorm in here, ask for help!
Zahth, a little more personality? Everything looks pretty decent - a little confused as to how you got your Sigil powers, will be discussing that with you folks in a moment. Powers - I like the concept just fine, and the limits are good - I'm just going to impose something right now. First: Resistance requires focusing of powers. If you're not prepared, you're hit. Second: You have no extra resistance to cutting force. On the one hand, if you're prepared, you can block a blade with bare flesh and focused energy same as any of the Eves. On the other, if you're trying to absorb energy and you get cut, you get cut. No second guesses. This also applies to piercing, like spikes or knives.
Finally: The receival of powers. Actually, I'm going to let you guys get off easy on this one. You don't have to know how you got them, for reasons I will reveal later. Most critically, however, you need to figure out why you're joining these groups. Read up if you must, or ask anybody what's going on, but figure out a way. Once all this is taken care of, you're all accepted!
Finally: If I missed someone, repost your profile and I will deal with it appropriately. I'll catch up with the RP itself tomorrow.
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