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PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 4:00 pm


Ezekiel Wolffe
Rate my current avatar. ;3
The Dark Ice legs hinder this avatar from fully matching. Next that scarf is not the same shade of blue as the hat has. It is slightly lighter and it kinda bothers me. I like how you took notice to the purple stripe in the hat and made the eyes the same color and the purse-or whatever it is- has some of it in the stitching. Since it is such a clunky white item I would suggest using a G-LOL skirt and then adding more of the other colors on the legs. the finishing up with some black, white and grays one the feet. But seriously I hate the dark ice legs.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 4:07 pm


Yumi The Strange
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Um none of the colors match. Most of the colors that are the same are different shades. Like you have light and dark blacks. light and dark grays mixed with some dirty whites. I would stick to one shade of red, one shade of black and one shade of gray/white.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:27 am


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Ezekiel Wolffe
Rate my current avatar. ;3
The Dark Ice legs hinder this avatar from fully matching. Next that scarf is not the same shade of blue as the hat has. It is slightly lighter and it kinda bothers me. I like how you took notice to the purple stripe in the hat and made the eyes the same color and the purse-or whatever it is- has some of it in the stitching. Since it is such a clunky white item I would suggest using a G-LOL skirt and then adding more of the other colors on the legs. the finishing up with some black, white and grays one the feet. But seriously I hate the dark ice legs.

You changed your avi before I could reply. Post it and I'll tell you my opinion.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:28 am


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Um none of the colors match. Most of the colors that are the same are different shades. Like you have light and dark blacks. light and dark grays mixed with some dirty whites. I would stick to one shade of red, one shade of black and one shade of gray/white.

This one is also different.
Sorry ><

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:42 am


How about this one? xD
I won't change it until tomorrow, I guess. xD
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:19 am


Yumi The Strange
How about this one? xD
I won't change it until tomorrow, I guess. xD

I think you need a missy lavender ribbon
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 12:33 pm


how b'out this one?
forget the white-non-matching xD
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 12:33 pm


k.k.razy
Yumi The Strange
How about this one? xD
I won't change it until tomorrow, I guess. xD

I think you need a missy lavender ribbon
3nodding


tried it on already, doesn't really match the nightfall soiree
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 12:49 pm


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Rate this tektek please? (Would it be alright to get a rate from both of you? hehe)
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[It was better until I found out most of it didn't layer on gaia. . . arggg. gonk ]
I well first of all I think this avatar has much potential. You do need to tweak a few things. I think you need to add black to the feet. I can't think of an item off hand but you have tektek ;].

Now the arms are screaming,"Put cardshark bands on me please!"

Also if you could remove the angelic pendant. First of all it is glaring and doesn't match. If it shows gold on the bow then just find a different pink item for the neck ;]. Or just don't. The Gaia on the shirt should suffice. Next I would like you to add a touch of black around the waist. If you can.


I <3 this avi
Under the bow is a really dark sharp pink and its worse than the pendant
so I say keep the pendant or loose both

cardshark bands and a tad of black on the feet like defe said wouldn't hurt

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Thanks guys, those are great tips!
I have no idea what to do about the pendant/bow issue though. I'll work something out. lol
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:34 pm


Yumi The Strange
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Yumi The Strange
How about this one? xD
I won't change it until tomorrow, I guess. xD

I think you need a missy lavender ribbon
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tried it on already, doesn't really match the nightfall soiree
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well the nightfall doesn't really match anything else
so theres just one thing to do

OFF WITH ITS HEAD
srsly though just get rid of it?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:00 pm


Little Sacar
how b'out this one?
forget the white-non-matching xD
The reds don't match as well. Also you need your skin tone on your legs please. And then add in what you said to forget.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:02 pm


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Little Sacar
how b'out this one?
forget the white-non-matching xD
The reds don't match as well. Also you need your skin tone on your legs please. And then add in what you said to forget.

Even though it doesn't match perfectly it still has nice curves and flow
and its cute

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:17 pm


k.k.razy
Yumi The Strange
k.k.razy
Yumi The Strange
How about this one? xD
I won't change it until tomorrow, I guess. xD

I think you need a missy lavender ribbon
3nodding


tried it on already, doesn't really match the nightfall soiree
>:

well the nightfall doesn't really match anything else
so theres just one thing to do

OFF WITH ITS HEAD
srsly though just get rid of it?


But it was a present and I really wanted to use it emo
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:40 pm


What do you think of my current avi? I've been trying to find something for the legs but I haven't had much luck yet > sad
I know it's missing something else, but I don't know what. Advice?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:57 pm


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What do you think of my current avi? I've been trying to find something for the legs but I haven't had much luck yet > sad
I know it's missing something else, but I don't know what. Advice?
Well I would change your skin to the african american one. Then pick one shade of green. I mean you have so many shades. Please pick one or two. Also do the same with your blacks.
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