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 Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 5:29 am
~cold~
It's cold here, I cannot breathe.
It hurts here, I cannot see.
Passed all the tears and all the pain,
Beyond the waste you'll rise again.
So you said, so many times.
So you told me all those lies.
Passed all the hurt and all the pain,
Be free of you to live again.
My heart's froze, I cannot breath.
So numb now, I cannot see.
Passed all the sorrow and all the tears,
Beneath the hidden shame and fears,
falling, spinning, towards the light,
what was once frozen, lost in night,
Is now reavealed what can I say?
I've tripped along this narrow way.
It's cold here, at my core.
Must I live here evermore?
Passed the tears and all the pain,
Is a little soul drenched by rain.
((I made that up just now... I know it sucks but.... yeah. Expression. lol))
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 10:56 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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El Lubricabre Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 12:15 pm
oooohhhhhh shiney! heart You're a good poet Sotaru. Though the last part kind of threw me off for a sec. Very good.
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 6:46 pm
Everyone here has such good poems. It's a thrill to be reading them.
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 5:30 am
i can't write poems for s**t. here, see: A very bad haiku by T.W.: I cannot write poems.
I suck at writing haikus.
So Batman is fat. Yeah. see?
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 11:34 am
YAY! AKUME HAS THE BEST ONE YET!!
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 6:22 am
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 11:01 am
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 9:59 pm
Rem Severem First: Kai lies. (^_^) Second: Sure go ahead and use it Yamako. Otherwise it's useless and just a waste of breath. I'd be honored. I'm beginning to consider if I should stop giving compliments now...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:01 am
Kai... I was joking. See the happy face? (^_^) it means I'm smiling when I say it and laughing. I'm sorry.
Thank you for your compliment.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 6:56 am
*pokes Rem* So was I, baka. Sorry. I should have put a happy face too. *mouth twitches into an awkward grin* See? Happy face! ^^"
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 7:31 am
*pokes kai's cheek* happy face, my a**, woman.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 1:05 am
Hahaha, you three are soo funny. . . biggrin smile neutral . . damnit. . . .now I started thinking and now I am depressed.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 6:37 am
Aww, don't be depressed!
wait....
why're you depressed in the first place?
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:22 am
I would rather not say publicly. . .its nothing gutterminded or anything, but if ya really wanted to know then send me a PM
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