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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:22 pm
That looks good. Make your thread.
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:31 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:30 pm
Rey Muniko  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Rey Muniko
Nickname: R.C.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Birthdate: 7/31/95
Age: 15
Blood type: O
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Occupation: Goes to school
Mode of Transportation: He uses his feet to walk around
Hobbies: Likes to read and draw
Motto: Moon always changes it's color once.
Appearance: [A detailed description of how your character looks]
Has dark purplish hair with red eyes and a cute smile. He has two stripes on his nose that are scars.
Personality: Shy, protective, and not really a dating person. In all these years he only went on two dates in his whole life.
Background:
Rey was always such a loner, but when he became 11 he was scared for the rest of his life. Due to the ignorance of a alchemist warrior a Humunculus killed his family but Rey got saved just in time. Ever since that day Rey swore to get revenge on the Humunculus.
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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist
Rank: "Warrior in Training"
Team: have not been assigned yet
Rival(s): Every one except his friends.
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Kakugane Serial Number: XLI
Name of Primary Kakugane: Kakugane; example: Buso Renkin: Shadow buddy
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Allows me to copy and create shadows that can explode and enter someones body. The Shadows can be created without light because that's what my Buso Renkin those, makes it seems like some one is there. When I create the shadow It has the ability to explode due to sesitivity of it and as soon as someone touches it or goes throught it boom! For the last ability of the shadows I can use I can make a gient buddy made of rock by morphing it with my exploding hadows to make Shadow Buddy the gaint I named my Buso Renkin after.
Image of your Buso Renkin:
Other Equipment: Nothing but my bare hands.
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Theme song: Feel good inc.
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:29 pm
When it says add a "detailed description" I was more or less looking for a little more than two-three sentences. A paragraph is preferable, especially in the background.
Anyway, your Buso Renkin can copy and create shadows that explode? Okay, haven't heard of shadows exploding before, so I guess that's kinda cool. Entering someone's body? Haven't heard of anything like that either, and it really doesn't make sense. I don't see how the picture comes into play either. What does a stone giant have to do with shadows?
I suggest expanding on the detail in that before I accept it. Copying shadows? I really don't know what that means. Creating shadows? The only way a shadow can exist is if something gets in the way of a source of light. Tell me how that works. And as for the "entering someone's body" and "exploding" tell me exactly how that works. What were you going for?
Once you take care of that I'll look into approving it. All you really need to do is to add on to it. Remember, this is your character. You're giving him life. Tell as much as you can about him, but at the very least, clarify your Buso Renkin's ability.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:23 pm
I edited my profile so have a look.
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 6:04 am
Okay, you did expand the ability, which is good. I now have a better understanding of what you can do. I'd've liked it if you did the same with his personality and background, but this'll do. So the primary weapon is that giant "shadow buddy" rock guy, and the ability is what he can do with shadows. That'll work. Make your thread.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:58 pm
Kashikoi Hitoshi  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Kashikoi Hitoshi
Nickname: Midnight
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Birthdate: September 14
Age: 17
Blood type: O +
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Occupation: Student
Mode of Transportation:In-line skates
Hobbies: Studies video games, reads comics, surfs the web
Motto: “Violence should be avoided at all costs.”
Appearance: Purple hair down to his neck. Two stands on the side in front of his ears go down to his shoulders. Pale skin. Purple eyes. Almost always depressed looking. Is seen in t-shirts and jeans when not in school uniform.
Personality: generally shy and reserved, Hitoshi is the type of person you see eating alone at the lunch table. He tends to avoid people for fear of making friends with a homunculus, but that does not mean that he will not talk to new people . He dislikes violence but does accept that sometimes it is necessary. He will only open up to those he knows, others are generally ignored. It takes a great deal of effort to get Hitoshi’s attention and once you do you better have reason or he will ignore you.
Background: Born and raised in a small town, Hitoshi used to be a very active person. He was, and still is, a very smart person. He was the vice president of the local science club. When the president found an old book hidden in a locked storage box along with a small hexagonal stone. They studied it. In it told of creating a creature that extended the life of a human. An ultimate being like no other. The next science project was set. The team made and set up all the necessary equipment to create a “homunculus”. They used a spider they had found in the corner of the room as a base and created the embryo. Just as the embryo was completed, the president started acting strange. He took the embryo and swallowed it. He changed quickly and devoured the rest of the team. Hitoshi had hidden under a desk, but that didn’t hide him for long. The president found him and tried to devour Hitoshi. But he remembered something he had read in the book about the weird stone. It was described as a demon stone meant to kill the ultimate creature. At the time, that’s exactly what he wanted. He grabbed the stone trying to figure out how it worked when the president pinned him against the wall. Just as he was about to be devoured a word popped into his head. He called out for a Buso Renkin and a large flash filled the room. The president was launched to the other side of the room as Hitoshi stood fiercely with claw like armor on his hands. He shredded the president without a thought. He soon realized what he had done and ran from that town. He was found near starvation by one of the Alchemic Army and taken in for training.
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Who you Fight for: Alchemist Army
Rank: Warrior in Training
Team: [The which you have been assigned to you]
Rival(s): N/A
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Kakugane Serial Number: V (5)
Name of Primary Kakugane: Soul Shredder
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: The Soul Shredder allows for superhuman agility and flexibility allowing Hitoshi to flip and attack similar to that of a cat.
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: Hitoshi keeps a small bag of medical supplies at all times.
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Theme song: “Breaking the Habit” by Linkin Park
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:15 pm
Ah, this is good. I love the background. Good profile, very good. Make your thread, dawg.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:14 pm
Yoshiro Tanaka _______________________________________________________________Name: Tanaka Yoshiro (Yoshiro Tanaka, Western Fomat)
Nickname: Yoshi
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Birthdate: 7/29/86
Age: 23
Blood type: AB+
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Occupation: Warehouse Supervisor
Mode of Transportation: Public Transportation
Hobbies: Collectable card games, photo booths, arcade games, cooking, and poetry.
Motto: "As long as you don't panic, these things tend to work out."
Appearance: Half American, Yoshi has medium-long blond hair and brown eyes. His eyesight is a little poor up close, and he has to wear glasses. Standing 5' 9.1" tall, and slender, he gives most people an impression of health, but not of great strength or ability. In a word, his appearance is "average". He has a light tan, slightly almond shaped eyes, and a pleasant smile. His expression can change quickly, and when he shows emotion, it is often intense. Whenever possible, he prefers to wear simple, businesslike clothes, but favors comfort over image. Usually, he pays little mind to things like wrinkles, and tends to wear slightly looser fitting clothes than necessary.
Personality: Normally, Yoshi is a fairly easygoing type. He likes to have things his own way, but prefers to take a gentle approach with others, rather than trying to force things. He's a generous person, with a heart of gold, but also very stubborn. In Yoshiro's world, right and wrong are as different as day and night, and sometimes this black and white world view can cause him trouble. He never gives up on something he believes in, and sometimes has trouble listening to people with different views. Deep down, though, he really cares deeply about those around him, and would rather laugh than fight. Still, he has a strong sense of honor and duty, and puts the good of others first.
Background: The son of a Japanese woman and an American sailor, Yoshiro never knew his father. To make matters worse, his grandparents considered his heritage a disgrace, and cut all ties, leaving he and his mother quite poor. In spite of this, Yoshi did well in school, suffering through poverty and the harsh words of others without complaint. His grades and hard work got him into a small but well run university, and he quickly found employment at a warehouse facility as an assistant manager, sending his mother what money he could.
Eventually his mother passed away, leaving him without any real ties. Though he had some casual acquaintances, he had not found time to make any lasting friendships. Without familly, Yoshi was essentially adrift, a lone island in the world. He continued to do his work diligently, even becoming promoted to site supervisor, but his life remained without direction.
All that changed in one instant, when he had his first encounter with Alchemy. It happened on a day like any other. Having found that one of the rented units, belonging to the Chouno family, had not been paid on, it was Yoshi's job to handle the initial inspection. Inside, he found strange equipment, and signs that a great deal of structural damage had been repaired. He also found a strange metal object, seemingly discarded on the ground. The object seemed odd to him, so he pocketed it to examine later.
However, as he left work that evening, he was attacked. The creature that had attacked him was some strange clawed thing, which looked like a cross between a beast and a man. Afterword, he could never quite remember how he had survived the attack. Blind instinct had taken over, pushing reason aside. He remembered holding a weapon, and wounding the creature, but details were hazy and few. All he knew was that somehow he had escaped.
It was not until two days later, when an alchemist warrior approached him, that he learned what had happened. He was told that the object he had found was a Kakugane, the creature a Homunculus. Then he was given a choice, having already awakened the power of his Buso Renkin, albeit on accident, he showed the potential to become an Alchemist Warrior. He could join the Alchemist Regime in their fight against the homunculi, or surrender the Kakugane and be moved to protectid custody in a new location. Moved with the desire to help mankind, he chose to fight.
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Who you Fight for: Alchemist
Rank: Warrior in Training
Team: Unassigned?
Rival(s): None.
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Kakugane Serial Number: XIX [19]
Name of Primary Kakugane: Fierce Zephyr (Cross Spear Buso Renkin)
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Fierce Zephyr is able to alter its mass and momentum, allowing it to be as light or heavy as the user wishes. This allows Yoshiro to swing or thrust the spear with great speed, then allowing the increased power of the weapon to carry him along.
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: None.
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Theme song: The Last Unicorn
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:39 am
That would be an example of a good profile--in fact a great profile. Make your thread.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:17 pm
A great profile, really? Wow.
Why thank you!
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:03 pm
Zander Okaku
_______________________________________________________________ Name: Zander Okaku Nickname: Nothing, he does not like attachments. Gender: Male Race: African Birthdate: 3-12-93 Age: 16 Blood type: O _______________________________________________________________ Occupation: student Mode of Transportation: Bike Hobbies: Reads books, magazines, dictionaries, web pages, etc. Motto: ...I out did you... Now, checkmate! Appearance: he is 5 ft 7 inches. Wears blue jeans and a black t-shirt. He has a bald fade haircut. Personality: He is extremely reclusive. Zander will not speak unless asked to. Even though he is quiet, Zander has a strong sense of justice. Zander does not act like a know-it-all even though he is one. Background: Zander was raised on an island a few hundred miles off of the African coast. It was a small house that his parents who were both genius scientists built. Also, under the house was a large laboratory where his parents observed the rest of the world using cutting edge tech. He was able to watch the goings of the world in total seclusion. From an early age he noticed an odd factor. he noticed events that made no sense, and decided to figure it out. Until he was twelve, Zander scoured the internet, news, and many more sources to find the missing components of different happenings. One day, Zander finally made a break through and discovered a mysterious group called the alchemist warriors. The source he used was an internet page. Little did he know that a homunculus had designed the page to find anyone who had info on the warriors. It was about a week when the same homunculus attacked his home expecting to find an alchemist base. When he saw the lab he was put under the impression that his parents were alchemists and tried to glean information from them. Zander heard shouts from the lab and ran down. He saw his parents huddled in a corner and sprinted towards them. The problem was he ran right in front of the homunculus who promptly snatched him up. The Homunculus then started to use him as an incentive for their cooperation. When they could give him nothing, he killed them both and decided to turn the boy into a homunculus, and take the lab as his new base. Stricken with anger and grief, Zander called out a voice command to the lab's computer. It activated the lab's self-destruction protocol. as the twenty second count down began the homunculus hurled Zander to the ground and ran out of the lab. By the time Zander recovered, he only had ten seconds to get to a bunker that would shield the explosion. He did not get inside quick enough and the blast threw him inside the bunker, and he was knocked out. When he came to he was in an infirmary. While he was trying to regain his senses, a man walked in. He explained what had happened to his home, and the past of the alchemists, and homunculi. Then, the man asked him to join them. He said they needed a young mind like his for research and development, but Zander didn't want that. He wanted to fight. To track down the homunculus that killed his parents, and maybe end his pain. After that day, he was trained to be a warrior. He became bitter and angry at the world those four years, and did not talk to anyone except when he was called upon. He shined at collecting and analyzing data, and learned some of the most secret information there was to know in the organization. He quickly became a 3rd class warrior, and was dispatched on the Tokushi case. He is currently stationed as a student at Ginsei Academy. _______________________________________________________________ Who you Fight for: The Alchemists Rank: warrior 3rd class Team: none Rival(s): none _______________________________________________________________ Kakugane Serial Number: 66:LXVI Name of Primary Kakugane: Data Reformer Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Takes the form of a holographic eyepiece over his right eye. It can scan his opponents and pull up info on all of their stats (physical abilities, existing files, known buso renkin powers, etc.). After completing the scan, he can form two items of equipment to fight with. He can form armor parts and weapons. They have no special abilities. Image of your Buso Renkin:  Other Equipment: A necklace with an amulet of the mythical creature Wadjet. _______________________________________________________________ Theme song: In the End by Linkin Park
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:11 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:54 pm
Tomoshibi Inai Ankoku _______________________________________________________________Name: Tomoshibi Inai Ankoku
Nickname: Tomo
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Birthdate: 08/08/1991
Age: 18
Blood type: A+
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Occupation: Student
Mode of Transportation: Bicycle
Hobbies: Going on long walks while day dreaming, singing while on a long bike ride, or sketching next to a sparkling body of water.
Motto: Those who care don't matter, and those who matter don't care.
Appearance: Tomo is 5'7", her body is a slender/athletic build, she has long black hair that reaches her middle back, electric blue eyes, she usually wears either her school uniform or a white kimono, and her defining feature is the cross-shaped scar on her left cheek.
Personality: Tomo is shy around new people, but warms up to them quickly. She is a dreamer and more often than not has her head high in the clouds. She is usually very warm and trusting, but as soon as you've betrayed her trust she turns cold. She lacks some commonsense, but has a very quick mind when it comes to problems and solutions. She can be very resourceful and she has long since ceased to be naive, but she prefers to be seen as the child of the group.
Background: Tomo was born into a very normal family in the sweltering summer of '91. She lived happily in Okinawa, Japan together with her father, mother, and younger twin sister Haku until White Day of '99 when she was eight years old. She and her family had gone hiking together in a wooded area and were attacked by humonculi. Both her parents were killed right in front of her and she still isn't sure if her sister died then or not. The only reason she survived was due to a lone alchemist warrior who was near enough to come to her aid, though, he was to late to save the others.
Weeks after the incident, Tomo was still very weak and suffered from paranoia and nervous breakdowns. The warrior who saved her had offered a place for her, a home, with the alchemist warriors and she was eager to assist in their mission, but she was finding it hard to keep her sanity let alone train for an active duty. She was placed in a asylum of sorts, a special mental health facility for those affected by the humunculi, and for awhile it seemed as though she would spend the rest of her life there. However, after ten years time, she found away to "lock away" the part of her that had become so utterly paranoid of the world and took her place as a warrior in training. She has long since forgotten the name and appearance of the young warrior who save her, but she will never forget what he did for her.
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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist
Rank: Warrior in Training
Team: N/A
Rival(s): N/A
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Kakugane Serial Number: XC (90)
Name of Primary Kakugane: Angelique
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: High tech armor with a small tracking ability (Can't see what isn't in sight), due to having wings can fly, sharp edges of the wings are used to attack. Takes a large amount of physical and mental ability to use. Usually, Tomo only uses the eye piece and wings to preserve energy.
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: Pocket knife, scissors, and paperclips (not necessarily for fighting)
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Theme song: Gravity by Vienna Teng
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:17 pm
Do I know you? Anyway, good profile. I like the bio. Her ability is pretty cool, too. Like Warren from X-men. Nice profile. Make your thread.
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