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 Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:29 pm
{{Guys, please save some of us the pain and check your work! Read it over once or twice or some of you are going to continue making the SAME ERRORS! I'm not in any way the "leader" of the roleplay, that position remains strictly in the hands of my cousin, pop226, but I just had to speak up about some horrible grammar that some of us really do not want to endure!}}
{{little list of tips, enjoy:
~cursing more than once MAYBE twice is acceptable, but doing it to the point where your whole entire post is full of *'s is absolutely annoying
~please don't change tenses (if you don't know what tenses are that explains EXACTLY why you have a problem with them!)
~"gel" with eachother! this shouldn't be just a bunch of individuals, form relationships with fellow characters}}
pop226, if you wish to pull me out of the roleplay for this post then I would just like to say that I had to do it or I would have ABSOLUTELY BLOWN MY BRAINS OUT! sorry.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:35 pm
Ikazuchi Arashi:
Yes, everything went exactly as I planned it to. Lets see, I called MidMorninng Express to tell them that they were going to crash unless they went off onto other track the led to us, which means we would crash. Then by jumping in the air,I wouldn't get hert as bad. The only injury is my broken arm and it doesn't hert unless I move it, bend it, or put pressure on it.
When I first got into the room ,that I will be in for a few days, I noticed a strange painting that was hung on the wall that my bed faced. On this painting was a centaur holding a bow and arrow with a cross through it. The painting was in the shape of a sheild, so it was quite odd.
Conguard Eco:
Well, this sucks, my bed isn't even comfortable it hard as a volcanoe, as long it doesn't erupt I'm fine. That isn't even the worst part I in a room with someone with annoying old women who thinks she done everything, I don't know what she's even here for becuase the insane asylum is down the street.
Hana Hosku:
Why didn't I kill myself when I had the chance. My bed is so cofortable though, I feel bad for who ever has a lumpy hard one. I don't think the hospital would be that mean. I ate some wonderful chocolate pudding which I had dipped a banana into it. I never thought it would taste this good.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 2:00 pm
Niji Asumi:
Slowly, I opened my eyes. The sight was horid. The worst thing I had ever seen in my life, I was dead. All I saw was white walls, I was lying in a bed, I was wearing a hospital gown. "I'm so stupid," I mumbled to myself, "I'm not dead, I'm in the hospital." I looked down and saw a cast around my arm. I also noticed some bandages on my legs, from were my fork and knife hit me. My head had a bandage, too, on the same side as my arm. I am guessing when we crashed I fell onto one side. There were many bruises and scrapes. I started to look at my suroundings. A balloon and a stuffed animal were to the right of me. To the left was another bed. In the bed was a sleeping girl, she also had a head bandage. After thinking for a while I got it, she was the girl who was face painting. I laughed at the memory.
Kiki Hasuri:
I screamed in terror as I fell off my bed. The floor of the hospital was cold. I would of got up but I felt too helpless. I felt like a mouse under a tree with an owl. I knew I could get up, I just didn't feel like I could. I had a falshback of the first time I was in a hospital, I was six. I have a photographic memory. It was the first time I had baked. They were Christmas cookies, I got burned, bad. I was taking cookies out of the oven and I didn't put the glove on. "Ouch!" I screamed again. I was hurt from falling on the floor and from remembering the worst christmas ever, but at least my parents brought the cookies that I baked. They weren't even that good. The doctors rushed in asking me what had happened.
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:20 pm
My eyes blinked open up to the intense light that hung above. I could almost feel my pupils dialate as I went from the eternal darkness to the illuminated hospital bed. I turned over on my side and saw a lady propped up on a pillow, her wide eyes gazing onto me, the sound of her chuckle fading. "Do I look funny to you?" I asked abruptly. My immense happiness was depleating quickly as I saw how joyfull she was, how barely damaged and undisturbed she seemed. That was supposed to be me giggling and enjoying herself in such an unlikely place. "Where's the nurse?" I demanded. "I need to check out." My body ached just thinking about getting on my feet, but I couldn't just sit there letting myself wither away. A plump dark skinned woman walked in with a tray of pills in her hands. "Hon', you aint' goin' nowhere like that!" she said, placing the tray on the woman next to me's lap.
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:33 am
Niji Asumi:
I was walking through a forest on Christmas eve. I was supposed to be in the hospital. Why am I here? I nooticed the eerie path in front of me, it had no end. I started to run thinking maybe something would be there. Noting. I was passing the same thing again and again. I fell to the ground blood dripping, but no pain. I began to scream louder each time, "HELP!" I cried, "SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!" No reply. Now I was crawling on my stomach. Now I just screamed as loud as I could. I awoke screaming, five nurses next to my bed. "Where am I?" I asked no one in paticular. One said, "You had a bad dream, you're in the hospital calm down." I did, I calmed down. I didn't want to close my eyes again. Of coarse it was a dream, I remember falling asleep when the girl next to me asked me something.
Kiki Hasuri:
I was lying in my bed smiling for no reason. Well, Christmas tomorrow cheered me up. I had a huge pile of gifts next to my bed. "Christmas in the hospital, fun." I said sarcasticaly. I hate the hospital, I am perfectly capable of taking care of myself. I guess no one cares that I don't need special treatment. People are giving me more than I need and I have to pay for it. "Stupid hospital bills," I growled. I gave up and fell sound asleep.
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:03 pm
Ikazuchi Arashi
I got out of my bed today, it was Christmas Eve. I went over to the painting of centaur , but when I placed my cold fingers upon it, I had noticed that it was a real sheild, who knew?
Conguard Eco:
I took the first bite of ice cream since the crash of coarse. It tasted horrible. I threw away and flung the garbage can out the window. The only bad thing is that I was on the top floor and the owner was standing exactly over the can, It all fell on top of him. It was kinda funny.
Hana Hosku:
I ate a BIG piece of apple pie and a some-what big piece of peach pie in about three or four minutes. I don't know how I don't gain weight from any of this.
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:08 pm
Niji Asumi:
"I'm so bored!" I complained to Remon, "Bored, bored, bored!" Now she looked annoyed. "I wanna go home," she ignored me, "I want to see my parents again." I began to tear up and threw my head into my pillow, crying, like I did when they actually did die. My tears continued to make my pillow wet. "I don't even know how they died, they just left." I choked on my words. "Have you ever lost anyone?" I asked her.
Kiki Hasuri:
I slurped my soup, dipping a cracker into it. I was very cold today and my scars hurt much worse today. I wasn't having the best of days. No day in the hospital is good. At least I got Christmas presents, good one at that. My dad sent me a new laptop, it was pretty cool.
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:40 am
Ikazuchi Arashi:
I walked out of the hospital into the outer world much more pleasing then a boring hospital. I walked over to a little covinent store on the corner. I opened the door and walked in. I grabbed hold of some candy and cat food and went up to the counter and paid for it, then I grabbed my gun out of my pocket and shot everyone and took all of the money and took the security tape, like this never happened.
Conguard Eco:
I turned on the TV to channel 5, the news. The covinent on the corner was attacked by someome this evening, only one survived. He said "After he shot my wife I tried to run away but he shot me just missing my heart then I passed out for a little while, luckly I knew who it was,AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. He yelled until his entire chest exploded!
Ikazuchi Arashi walked into my room with a smerk on his face. "How could you, IKAZUCHI!?" "Their prices were to high, I didn't like that store much, they didn't have my favorite type of candy.Now that you know to much, I'll KILL YOU CONGUARD.
Hana Hosku:
I walked into Conguard's room, there I found Ikazuchi Arashi and Conguard. I didn't notice the gun in his hand and they didn't notice me.
I tilted my head and saw the gun. I wrapped my arms around Ikazuchi ''Don't Shot!" My eyes began to tear. Ikazuchi Walked out of the room without a word very angered. I ran to get him, I ran towards his room. He was behind the door awaiting me, but I couldn't see that. I stepped in and he grabbed me, holding a knife beside my neck he then wispered "You work for me know."
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:50 am
I felt alot better latly since I've been taking my meds. Its like I swallowed pure happiness. I had my operation so my spine doesn't hurt one bit! I just have to rest for the next couple of days. Maybe I'll go visit Niji later I havn't seen her since the crash. I get her some flowers first.
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:08 am
Niji Asumi:
I walked into an icecream shop. I was wearing a cute little dress, like I used to wear when I was younger. As I walked in I saw my parents. Just as they looked before they vanished. I ran up to them to hug them. "What are you doing here?" I happily asked, "Why aren't you dead?" They looked at me, tearing. "We are." they said. Now I was confused, "So are you, this is heaven, look around. Everyone is dead." I was sobbing, "no." I whispered, "No, no, no, no" It got louder this time, "No!" Now I was screaming. Then, I opened my eyes, breathing deap. Kitsune was at the door with flowers, looking at me like I was an alien.
Kiki Hasuri:
I was feeling better so I decided to take a walk around the hospital. As a joke I was gonna check out the mental hospital. I peaked in and laughed. A lady started towards me, she looked mad. "Mi-mi." she said to me, "Why are you always sneaking off like that? Now get in here now!" Whoops. I laughed "No, there must be a mistake, I'm not Mi-mi. My named is Kiki and I have to get back to my hospital room right now." This can't be good. "Mi-mi stop lying I know those eyes from a mile away." This will be interesting.
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:45 am
Lulu:
I woke to the strong lights of a hospital room. I moved my hand over my eyes and tried to remember what had happened but nothing came to mind. 'Ivory!' My daughters name jumped into my head making me sit-up to fast. I felt dizzy after that and tried to keep myself from falling over. Once the feeling faded away I looked around the room with my eyes. There was Ivory in the bed next to. A big smiled of joy crossed my face. She was fine. Nothing really horrorible had happened to her, but wait were is Ally. I got to my feet and looked around. "Ally?" I called out to the little kitten.
Over on the bed Ivory laid on, a little head popped out from under the covers. "Ally." I smiled at the kitten with sleepy eyes. She meowed as she stretched out. I took back to the bed I was in before after Ally had jumped over to it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:44 pm
Ikazuchi Arashi:
I released her as I put the knife to my side, she agreed to my offering even though she was not proud of her choice. She ran out of the room. I opened up my crystal box which held my crystal eggs. I had 14 well until the crash and one broke. I opened up my suit case were laid the other bomb ( the first one I put in the guy from the store's chest, he was one of
my students last year he was almost as smart as myself.)
Conguard Eco:
I got out of my bed as Hana ran past my door."Hana!"I ran out of the room into the hall but she had already turned the corner. I ran over towards her room but a doctor stopped me in my tracks."This is a hospital not a high school track, return to your room immediately." He insisted.
Hana Hosku:
I ran into my room thinking of what I had just agreed to.
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:06 am
Conguard found me in my room swallowing all my pills. He didn't look quite happy more like a little suprised, but not in a good way. We began to chat. He gave me the information about Ikazuchi, now I have more of a reason to dispose of hiim quickly before he sturs up more trouble, but for now I'll try to stop my drug problem.
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:20 am
Ikazuchi Arashi:
Another day at Asumi hospital, how fun! It feels I'm in more pain then when I arrived, so boring, never anything to do. I jumped out of bed and walked slowly over to my wardrobe, inside was my clothes, I guess I'll change now. I moved over a couple pieces of clothing until a blue sheet of paper caught my eye.
I read the paper, every second I got happier and far more delighted,
finally something exciting!
Conguard Eco:
I wonder how Hana is doing I haven't seen her since the other day, maybe I should leave her alone. I wonder what Ikazuchi is planning. I wonder how Ms.Asumi is, I haven't seen her or Kitsune since the night of the crash. Since I haven't heard any bad news ,I guess they're most likely fine
I walked down the hospital halls until I found an elevator.I couldn't seem to find one though, not one single elevator. I think I should hed back to my room when I noticed a door to a couple flights of stairs. I opened the door and began my journey down the terrible stairs of bad fortune. There at the the bottom of this single flight was the door to the fifth floor of the hospital. I entered, I looked around to see if I saw Kitsune's room, but no luck. I looked in every room until I found him sitting on his bed swallowing the whole capsule of medications.
Hana Hosku:
I was laying down in my bed all day today without a happy thought come into my mind, all I could think about is the day, that day. He told me every, why, who, what. I was in a deep state of depression, nothing at this point could possibly cheer me up, not even ten cakes and twenty pumpkin pies.
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