Ryu_Yin
Moonlight_Mage
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2179204/1/
Review mine please
It's really... well, everything's too easy for Yami. Sorry, but that kind of bothers me ^.^; It's not even physically possible to make hologram chips that fast, even if you knew the smallest detail.... -.-
Although I can't say making DM come alive is a bad idea, but I'm really picky so I get put off easily
what about mines? damn computer some letters didn't come right. yami finds it too easy okay? i got to read it now..
okay i read it..umm it's very weird for yami to develop such talent for computer considering he never saw one in egypt. the mahhado part was funny...bakura didn't killed him he tried to, but mahhado let himself to be sliced in the underground temple where he fought againts thieve bakura.
so i agree on ryu-yin...^^' sorry kiddo. yeah reply soon if you like mines ryu-yin it's above this message well a bit more.