Your profile is pretty good so far.
I suggest that when you RP, you put your post into word first so that it can catch some of the spelling mistakes.
sweatdrop It won't catch every thing, and your profile is still readable... it just makes me want to ask how old you are or if English is your second language. Haha, but don't worry-- I've actually RPed with people before who had a learning disorder that affected their spelling. So as long as I know you're trying, I can tolerate some mistakes.
wink Now, about your profile. Here are some questions that might help you fill it out a bit more, and then once you answer these I can start scheming about how to put you into the story:
1. Do you want Jack to have grown up on another compound before coming to Eldic Estates? (then he might have been picked on more)
2. What kind of job do you want him to have? (there is a list of jobs on the first page, but if you think of something else we can try that)
3. What type of magic do you want to have? (read
this)