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 Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:51 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:11 pm
Ugh, can you guys head out soon? I wanna post again.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:23 pm
Yay for sugar induced spasms! x3
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:41 pm
We're on our way soon, Keeper. 3nodding
And Laz, you're really going to need to buff up your posts a little. That one-liner isn't going to cut it under the 'at least one paragraph per post' rule. It also makes coming up with a decent sized reply extremely hard.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:24 pm
I understand writer's block, but two one-liners in a row is kinda pushing that excuse too far. What is Bishop thinking, hearing, seeing, feeling? How does he feel about having to work with scientists? Is he still angry at Austin? What about having a reporter coming on the trip with them? How does he feel about that? He hasn't even acknowledged Price has his superior yet - will he have trouble taking orders from a woman?
There's so much you can write about, and in doing so, it makes your character more real to the rest of us that have to rp against him. Slow things down a bit, think about how you want your character to come off... and be careful with your grammar, okay?
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:31 pm
sorry, i was a bit rushed when I did it. I'll write more guys, its just with studies and stuff... sorry.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:40 pm
Almost done with post trying make longer this time
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:45 pm
Same here, I edited my post to make it longer and more interesting. oh, and Malthus is a NPC character. I don;t really care what happens to him you can all use him as you will.
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:05 am
That's good! Pushing yourself to do better will be helpful in the long run.
Hope you guys like my idea of going to the old Hometree. It was kinda the base I made my character for. Afterall, that's what it was attacked for in the first place, right?
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:54 pm
It makes sense to me. :]
Sorry my post was a little useless, my brain is fried. I wrote it after I got back from the ACT test. x__x; There was really no point in taking it, I'm destined for a remedial math class it seems.
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:20 pm
Just wanted to say you guys roleplay is really awsome. Love reading it.
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:29 pm
I need to post more -.- mine are really short sorry... :/
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:53 pm
@ Daimon: Thank you! You're welcome to join if you like.
@Tina: Your posts are fine, really!
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:54 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:01 pm
Igneous Angel @ Daimon: Thank you! You're welcome to join if you like.
@Tina: Your posts are fine, really! I'd love to, but it so good to read I feel like I'd mess it up if I join. LOL
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