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Willhellm
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:11 pm


"Dennouncement"

Have you ever seen God?
I have never seen God!

Brought about by my lunicy
There lives a great fantasy
Exstasy and lust
Sin on mortal levels
Brought about by deity's
Design

Have you ever seen God?
I have never seen God!

Ripped from humanitys lofty heart
Now the mind is just a cancer bengen
And all thats left rots on earth
Awaiting the faith I have lost

Have you ever seen God?
I have never seen God!

Sin on cosmic levels
Murdering all our lives
And then she speaks to me
In her many tounges
Just to say in all her many tounges
"All you want, will never come true!"
And I lost all my convictions

Lost all my love of life
Made me see the malignacy in man
Then I saw the destruction, of our world
all is lost and exsistance became bengen

Do you believe in God?
I will never believe in God!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:29 pm


"Behind Blind Eyes"

You play the martyr
Crawling upon your cross again
Never dead but (always) diing

Hidden upon the window
Out of sight again
Just behind our eyes

Too blind we are to see
Why (bother) hide at all
From our covered eyes

You play the martyr
Strung upon your cross again
Never dead but (always) diing

You claim (to be) the victim
Yet (you're) too blind (to see)
It's your fault again

Hung upon the tree (by tears)
You fail to see (the real me)
So you play the martyr (again)

Hidden upon the windo
Out of sight again
Just behind (blind) eyes

"Never Let Go"

Sometimes, when I'm alone
I can feel you
Your lips, on my neck
Your voice, in my ear
And I wish you were here

Down where I am past the river
Where the river's rusted me away
Leaving only my love
Armor coroded away
Left me defenceless

Longing for you, in my arms (I'll never let go)
Wanting to hear your voice
To say my name

Sometimes, When I'm alone
I can feel you
Your hands, on my back
From our last embrace (I'll never let go)
The key to my lock

Show me your everlasting love
My soul lost, in your breath
Holding onto you, forever (I'll never let go)
Your lips, on mine an eternal bliss
Holding tight onto you (I'll never let go)

I'll never let go

"The End of Times"

They say taht time will mend bone
but who's to say that bones heal strait?
Mental wounds never fully heal
And the scars will forever show bright pink
Glowing like newly branded burns

As the many become the few
The soft eaten by the hard
The dumb outlived by the smart
And the humans replaced by machines

Soured by age, blood runs cold
Clotted by depression, blood runs slow
Hearts beating like drums
Just to maintain the flow

Full assult, battery, barrage
Dessimation
Now warmachines begin to kill

The last resistance of man is lost
Only few remain and they are cold

Like the machines they created
The machines they fight
The machines that succeed them

And in the end, time will go on
But the wounds too great
Bones heal in bends
And men die

Then only dust remains

"Worthless"
This one just has to be read the way it's supposed to be read, and I cant do that on here, so I'll just link it to my DA account.
http://willhellm.deviantart.com/art/Worthless-82102263

There are more... but this is good for now.

Willhellm
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:36 pm


Haven't finished reading them all, but...

-I like "Worthless" and "The End of Times"

-So far your rhythm/meter seem to be prefect.

-Did you use spell-check? diing should be dying unless you had a reason to spell it differently.

-What do the parenthesis indicate?

That's all. Thanks for posting your poems, I liked reading them.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:58 pm


thanks. No, I havnt used a spell check.. I'm terrible with that. sweatdrop

parenthesis generaly for me indicate things said in another voice or just hinted at. When i write these things in my head there are two voices going at once. the parenthesis are the seccond voice.

Willhellm
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roguethe


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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 1:51 pm


Ooh, I like the "Never Let Go" and "The End of Times" The best.
Your rhythm is good. I like how your writting is at times dark and proˈvocative yet pretty Eloquent.
I like.
PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 7:55 pm


Thanks Rogue. It's funny... rhythm is one of the few things I never really cared about that much...

here's a few more.

"Loss of Intelligence"

The eyes, are blind!
Man's corruption, is wide!
Go ahead rant and rave
Whine, bemoan, and cry!
For all the good it'll do you

Hit the floor the bomb does come
Just like the lie off a politician’s tongue
Man's integrity has been falling fast
Followed by shattered humility

The war will end with an era
Intelligent design beaten to a pulp
Man's stupid folly scarring all the earth
Ground seared, body's burnt

Don’t look back, just hold fast!
The eye's gloss over
Don’t look back, just hold fast!
The eye's gloss over

Nature wages bio warfare
Man falls to the pelage
In the end they do laugh
Black death cannot kill stupidity

Don’t look back, just hold fast
For in this war all will end
Don’t look back, just hold fast
The final wave broke the ranks!

When you die
They will conquer, over the weak
The imbeciles shall rule
You can't kill stupid

"Safe"

Constant in memory
I've never seen with my own eyes
You would never believe
How many times I've lied

Constantly in pain
I must remove my own skin
All for the sake of life
This exsistance we call conformaty

Oh how I bleed
With the explosion of dark bodies
I am but one in many
But I have my own mind

Invisible to the whole world
I am what you long to be
Incompleat, but toataly free
Never to be sold into your slavery

Reborn each day with the sun
I have begun to see
You have no power over me
And I am no longer blind

Cybernetics now run through my blood
I can see with my own eyes
Transistors fueling the light
There is no place in mortality

Can this feeling be real?
That there is no one but me
I am alone but no longer lost
Even if humanity left me behind

"Dark Eyes Gleaming"

Figures floating in dark water
Frozen in the sun
Unconscious in their brilliance
I saw my reflection, in her eyes

And I saw, my own face, on the figures
Empty darkness, surrounding me
And I saw, in her eyes, a loneliness
Just another figure floating in darkness

Our dark bodies floating in water
Reflections seen in her eyes
And I saw, in her eyes, my own eyes
Then I knew the way

Our bodies drifting in the sea of darkness
Skies so black, stars are golden
She’s so close, yet so far away
Life so cruel, could I be dreaming?

We are floating in darkness
So close, yet so far away

Willhellm
Captain

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