an animal in the antartica

[1serene]

this is a poem on an albotross, its a bird that lives in Antartica, and i made this for social studies with a painting.


Flying Over Antartica:

Im an Albotross,
I can fly for many years,
Over sea and ice.  

[Umi Pryde]

I believe this is a Haiku, right?
nicely done - though I'd suggest taking the a off the end of the title and adding punctuation to your "I'm"

I think it is a nice haiku, and I wish I could see the artwork.