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Hakuei Shirei
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Friendly Lunatic

PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:04 pm


Ok, so I've been thinking of posting this, but since it's not really complete, and I'm not sure people would want to read this, I'm just gonna post chapter 1 and put up a poll.

So, if ya want to keep reading, vote people~!

Comments and reviews please~  
PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:16 pm


D Gray Man

Dance with Darkness

A/N

This is a DGM fanfic I thought up of, while I was reading the manga. Unfortunately it is now on hiatus...

crying I hope it gets updated soon...

DGM is NOT mine...

as much as I would like it to be... 3nodding

But Stole, Shadow, and all the OCs ARE mine! And so is this story idea!

And just a warning... This may or may not contain Yaoi, depending on how the story goes, but just in case, if you no like Yaoi (Boy/Boy love) then DON'T READ IT!! evil

Oki's whee You may proceed now~

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~Prelude~

The sound of panting filled the midnight air, as the small body of a child ran through the empty streets of london...

"Otou-san... ka-san...nii-san~!!" the little boy cried as he ran, panting, as tears streamed from his eyes, "Minna... Minna... doko~?!" he cried out, tripping.

The little boy sobbed, "Why... has everyone... left me... alone...?" he sat sobbing in the empty streets, as the shadows advanced...
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~Act One~

--Nightmare Dream--


"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaagghhh!!!"

Lightning cracked and thunder boomed. It was about 2 am, and a loud yell could be heard throughout all of the Black Order's new headquarters...

"Hah-!" In his room, 15 -and-about-to-turn-16 year old Allen Walker clutched the sheets to his chest, panting and sweating heavily, he gasped for a second having felt suffocated.

His left eye, cursed, seemed to be searching for something frantically. He covered it, just as his door burst open.

"E-eh?" he blinked. The scene just looked so odd...

"W-where's the fire?!" panted Lavi, the red haired apprentice of the 'Bookman'. He was just a step behind the long, blue haired samurai Exorsist, Yuu Kanda.

Both Exorsists were wearing their 'nightclothes', he noticed, as Kanda sheathed his Mugen-tou, 'tche'-ing.

Right behind them, a girl with short, sea(weed coloured)-black hair appeared, almost slamming into the other two, "Allen, what's wrong?" she asked, obviously concerned.

"Nani-ka?!" and right behind her appeared some other familiar faces.

"Ah..." Allen sweat, and there was a pause as the others took in the situation.

Ah, Yuu~! You're wearing a... a nightgown! kahahahaha~!" Lavi, the bookman jr. was the first to recover.

Other stiflings of mirth ould be heard, but the others dared not show it -at least, not so obviously as Lavi.

"G-wah?!" the red-head jumped back as Kanda's sword now pointed to his neck, a slightly pink Kanda glaring at him. Lavi shrank back a little as the cold, pointed steel touched his throat...

Kanda growled menacingly, which was quite effective with the glare he was giving him.

"What is going on here?!" demanded Inspector Rouveur, who just happened to be staying temperarily at the new Black Order HQ.

"Eep-!" Lenalee hid behind the others, as she had a long-time fear of this man.

"G-gomen..." Allen laughed nervously, "I guess it was just... a nightmare..." he said, and the others dispersed, half grumbling, half relieved...

Lenalee was the last to go, "Are you ok, Allen? Your eye..."

Allen grinned, "Of course I'm fine!" he smiled, "Good night, Lenalee..."

"Good night, Allen... Sweet dreams..." by the time she closed the door, the boy named Allen Walker... was already asleep...
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Translations~
(or those of you who aren't fluent in the language of Anime/Manga~
Otou-san: Father, respectful form

Ka-san: Mother, respectful form

Nii-san: Brother, respetful form

Minna: Everyone

Doko?: Where?

Minna Doko: Where is everyone?

Mugen-tou: the name of Kanda's innocene weapon

Nani-ka?!: What happened/What's going on?!

Tou: sword

Gomen: Sorry/I'm Sorry, is less respectful than 'gomenasai/gomenazai'
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A/N


Ok, this is all I have posted so far. The Prelude and the first chapter have been put together because I think that just one of them by themselves is just too short, anyways...

Oh, and I shall post new chapters as soon as I get a good read on how many people want it posted, and I soon as I finish writing if the chapter's not done.

Please Review so I know if there's anything I need to fix, and such. Also, I shall be posting Chapter two as soon as I get a good feedback! ^^-

By the way, I'm gonna make the Post Style different from regular ones, so thy're distinguishable if people wanna comment, So...

Thanks for your patience. And just as a treat~ Here's a little preview:


"Meow~" the small black cat blinked, the pupils of its yellow eyes partly slitted as it looked up at its master, almost as if urging him to hurry.

"What's wrong, Shadow?" the black hooded figure asked, hands in the pockets of his zip-up hoodie. A fog was rolling in...

"Mreow~!" the cat answered, swishing its tail. The cat's eyes flashed green like the color innocence, its protruding claws flashed silver.

"Ah..." the slim male figure clothed in black looked up, grey eyes flashed on his pale shadowed face, "Akuma...ka...?" the youth clutched the satchel he wore closer, one hand slipping slowly into it, to pull out a crystalline orb with black swirl-like etchings, it had the illusion of silvery fog within...

"Shadow," he called, as the cat hissed.

"Innocence... Activate...
 

Hakuei Shirei
Vice Captain

Friendly Lunatic


Ryeder

PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:17 pm


Eh....it's ok. I'd continue it just to see where things are going to go. The writing style is pretty good, but a few things could be changed. While I was reading, I noticed that things went from one thing to another quite quickly. Maybe fixing that would be nice. ^_^
PostPosted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:18 am


D Gray Man

Dance with Darkness

A/N
DGM has finally been updated~! X3

Yay~!

Disclaimer: DGM is NOT mine! But Stole, Shadow, and all the other OCs ARE!

Spoiler Alert! If you haven't read up to the very latest chapters, you may not know some of this stuff, and -obviously- there will be MAJOR spoilers!

Wel-p, enjoy~

And again? If you don't like boyxboy love? Don't read it, and don't flame just cuz of that...

And thanks to
Ryder For your review~ I shall take your words to heart~
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~Act Two~

--The Black Order: HQ--


"Meow~" the small black cat blinked, the pupils of its yellow eyes partly slitted as it looked up at its master, almost as if urging him to hurry.

"What's wrong, Shadow?" the black hooded figure asked, hands in the pockets of his zip-up hoodie. A fog was rolling in...

"Mreow~!" the cat answered, swishing its tail. The cat's eyes flashed green like the color of innocence, its protruding claws flashed silver.

"Ah..." the slim male figure clothed in black looked up, grey eyes flashed on his pale shadowed face, "Akuma...ka...?" the youth clutched the satchel he wore closer, one hand slipping slowly into it, to pull out a crystalline orb with black swirl-like etchings, it had the illusion of silvery fog within...

"Shadow," he called, as the cat hissed.

"Innocence... Activate...

"Gin-Seijun!!!"

____________

..."Ohayo gozaimasu~" Allen Walker greeted everyone cheerfully as he walked into the cafeteria. Several answered back, but he froze at Kanda's glare.

"Ahahaha~ What's wrong, baKanda~?" he asked, looking just a tiny bit nervous. Uh-oh...

"What's wrong?" asked Kanda, a killer aura ensuing, "What's wrong?! You're what's wrong, do you realize how much trouble you've caused?!" he roared, as he caught the white haired boy and shook him violently...

"Na-Now , now, Kan-chan, we all get nightmares sometime..." said Lavi, trying to appease that normally gruff and silent Samurai's taut nerves.

"S-So... di-zzy..." Allen felt the world spinning, "Need...food...Je-rry...san..." he called weakly. His stamina was quickly running out due to the lack of food.

"Hai hai~ One breakfast order, coming right up, Allen-kun~" called the Central's...unique 'master cook' from the kitchen.

Kanda hmphed and sat back down, "Whatever," he muttered, "baka moyashi..."

"Aha...ha..." Lavi sweat, as Jerry-san set a huge platter of food on the table for Allen.

"Hai, eat up, Allen-kun~" he smiled, watching as Allen dug in...
____________

"So uh... what kind of nightmare was it that had you screaming so loud?" asked Lavi, as Allen continued to clean the food off his plates like a vacuum...

"Eh?" Allen froze, and his eyes clouded for a second, then, "Ah, te/well... jitsuwa/Actually..." Allen put his fork down, "I... can't really remember," he said, sweating slightly, "Weird, right?" he laughed, just a little nervously...

"...Allen..."

Silence.

"Ahahaha, well, it's normal, right?" he grinned, finishing his food, "Well, time to head off on our next mission~" he grinned cherrfully and stood, returning the platter of empty dished to the kitchen with complements to the chef.

Link was absent at the moment, and had been for the past two days though...

Allen walked out of the cafeteria cheerfully, waving as he went, but as soon as he was out of sight, and hearing range, his mask slipped, and he frowned, clutching his trembling left hand. It had been a good thing no one had noticed, he thought...

Tim followed behind his friend, trailing slowly behind. He knew Allen wanted to be alone for the moment...
____________

"Hmn~..." Director Kamui Lee, sat in front of his desk, frowning down at the papers in front of him, as he twirled the quill in one hand, the other supporting his head, "Ah~! Le-na-lee~!" he whined, "I dun wanna work on this~ Can't I do something else?" he asked petulantly.

Said sister of said complainer seemed to ignore his behavior, pouring a fresh batch of coffee into her brother's mug, "Absolutely Not" she said forbiddingly, without even a glance at her brother.

"B-But~!" he made puppy dog eyes, but still, she did not waver.

"No, means no brother! You have to finish this work! It's due tonight!" she chided, "And besides, its your own fault for leaving it off to play around all this time!" she scolded.

Kamui sobbed comically, "Yes ma'am..." he said dejectedly and started writing again.

Honestly, thought Lenalee, what would he do without her...?
____________

Allen walked slowly down the hall, he didn't really want to see anyone yet... But he knew he had a duty to save the poor souls bound to the Akuma...
____________

Secretary Leverrier sat in his seat, sipping tea, a slice of the cake using the newest recipe he'd invented sat on the coffee table before him, as he looked out the window, watching, as the rain fell...

A door creaked behind him, and a shadow fell onto the lit ground beside him, "You're late," he said simply, without even turning, as the light disappeared from the door, and the shadow with it, and the sound of bootsteps came closer.

"Sorry, there was a little delay..." a soft, and low tenor voice that hardly seemed used came from behind him, and the steps stopped, right beside him.

Leverrier looked up, and help a plate up to the silver haired boy, "Would you care for some cake? It's a new recipe," he said, "There's milk for your cat," he added, when bright green-gold eyes stared at him from the boy's shoulder. "There's a free seat right here."

"Thank you," he said, and took the plate, and sat in the seat indicated to him, cutting into the soft spongy cake with the fork as he did so, and offered some to the cat, it sniffed the cake, then turned and jumped down onto the table, lapping the milk from the dish set especially for it, "It's good," he said, as Leverrier watched him, though his face showed no change in expression, much like Leverrier most of the time.

The Secretary nodded, "Of course," he said simply, "Now, down to the important matters..."
____________

...Director Kamui Lee stood by his desk -which still held stacks of papers which he had not yet gone through... but at least it was neat and tidy, thanks to the efforts of Lenalee Lee. His expression for once, was serious, as he stood at attention, hands behind his back, as he watched the Secretary warily. He had not been expecting to see the man again, so soon, but he knew enough to hold his tongue.

"...So he will be added to your branch of the Dark Order... Is that clear, Director?" he said.

"Yes.... sir," said Director Lee, "I understand perfectly."

"Good, he should be arriving soon. I know he could have as easily gotten here by the arc, as I had, but he wanted to check out the surrounding area, though all is well. To memorize it, and to get used to it sooner," he said, completely serious.

Kamui nodded, "Wise decision sir, since there is a lag in the number of Akuma attacks lately," he answered.

Leverrier gave a quick, sharp nod, "Very well, and how is the boy doing?" he asked.

"Allen? He is doing fine, and there have been no signs of the Noah taking over, whatsoever," he said defensively.

Leverrier nodded, "Good... Good..."
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"Ahaha haha!" Allen and company walked down the hall, laughing at a joke Lavi had said to brighten the mood, as the general mood within the building had been as gloomy as the air outside.

"So, anyways, I hear there's a new Exorcist being assigned to our branch," said Lavi, "And I hear Leverrier reommended him, too! Wonder what kind of person it could be?" asked Lavi.

"Really? But what kind of person would Leverrier suggest?" wondered Lenalee.

"Dunno, maybe someone as stiff as he is!" grinned Lavi.

"..." Allen said nothing but smiled when the others spoke or looked towards him.

"What do you think, Allen?" asked Lavi.

"Allen...?" Lenalee leaned over slightly so he could see his face better, "Is something wrong?" she asked, smiling slightly.

"Eh? Oh! Uh, no, no, sorry, I guess I was thinking about something else, haha," he said sheepishly, "Sorry."

"Nah, s'ok, man," said Lavi, but they all looked a little worried about him.

So Allen tried to lift the mood that had dropped because of him, "So, we were talking about Leverrier?" he asked.

"Oh yeah! What kinda person do you think Leverrier would approve of? Especially an Exorcist?" asked Lavi, as they walked on...
____________

He walked into the building confidently, it had taken a while to get here, but at least he was still on time, he walked past a group of people that were laughing, a group that didn't notice him, just as he did not notice the white haired boy in the group. And the white haired boy him, at least, not at the moment...

Not yet...

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Translations~
Gin-Seijun: literally, "Silver Innocence"
baKanda: a nickname for Kanda, mixing "baka" for idiot/fool, and Kanda, to create baKanda! (An insulting nickname)
Kan-chan: another nickname, this time given by Lavi, chan is a suffix for familiar -and this is usually for- females, though guys who are really close can use it too... Or it can be used insultingly at certain times...
-san: respectful suffix which an mean any number of things. i.e. Miss, Mr, Mrs... etc
Hai: Yes, of course, basically things along this line..
baka: Again, idiot/fool... things along this line...
moyashi: bean sprout -a nickname Kanda gives Allen -supposingly insulting
te: sometimes means "well..."
jitsuwa: actually


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A/N


I'm thinking of adding the links to pix so you can see what Stole and Shadow-when using his innocence- look like...
So that's what I'm gonna do! Here we go!:
First! Stole!
User Image
And now Shadow's Activated Innocence form~
User Image

And since it has been decided that I shall continue to post, so I just thought you'd all like to know. This story is posted on fanfiction.net, and I will probably end up updating that one first. Actually, I'm working on chapter 3 right now, and I'll probably have it done by the end of the week~! XD So anyways, here's the link to my Fanfiction account in case you want to see any of my other fanfics~
Fanfiction Account Link

Anyways, a preview for the next chapter~

The Silver haired boy walked on, making his way to the cafeteria, he was a bit late waking up today, but then again, he had an entire day off, to get used to the headquarters here -not that it was needed. No, he didn't need the extra day at all, as he had already memorized the map of the building that Leverrier had given him, though seeing it for real was more of a help. Some of the hidden routes and exits had been neglected on the map, as he had found out the night before.

He walked on, passing a group of people on their way out. It had been the same group he had passed the day before, he noticed, but this time, one member of the group stood out to him...

A certain white haired boy, a white haired boy who had stopped as well, seeing him. They stared at each other, unsure, but knowing somehow, that they were right that this person was the exact same as that time, of those times before. They knew that this had to be that person, that person which had disappeared so long ago...

And unconsciously he spoke, eyes wide, disbelieving, yet at the same time, full of hope that he'd be right...

His lips moved, forming the words... "Brother...?"


Ok, I know this may disappoint some, but actually, I've decided not to post the next chapter unless people want it up, otherwise it's just a waste of time, and I have so much other stuff to do. So, yeah, either vote or Review please people~  

Hakuei Shirei
Vice Captain

Friendly Lunatic

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