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Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 10:58 pm


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Tell me why, and what is the problem, so we can compromise.


I don't think you are quite realizing to what extent that I am actually already compromising.
Tell me so, we're on the same page. It's not a true comprosmise if only your views on the character i created are accepted, do you know that? I'm grateful for what you're doing, but that doesn't mean you can take away or add from my vision. Rather you can make it acceptable it others.


It's not just my view I am allowing you to have input. The reason I am compromising is because I am spending my personal time trying to help you when in all major respects I should just deny this profile outright. That is also a compromise and I would appreciate a little bit less stubbornness on your part.

A lot of people are saying they would have given up by now but I will never give up on you! So, help me to help you, pal. Otherwise we're going to have to part ways.


Okay..okay. I made sure the grammar and revisions were done on the section. I just need to see what you think.


Thank you, please post up the most recent version and I will look into it once i get home.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 7:45 pm


Uchiha Roxas
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I don't think you are quite realizing to what extent that I am actually already compromising.
Tell me so, we're on the same page. It's not a true comprosmise if only your views on the character i created are accepted, do you know that? I'm grateful for what you're doing, but that doesn't mean you can take away or add from my vision. Rather you can make it acceptable it others.


It's not just my view I am allowing you to have input. The reason I am compromising is because I am spending my personal time trying to help you when in all major respects I should just deny this profile outright. That is also a compromise and I would appreciate a little bit less stubbornness on your part.

A lot of people are saying they would have given up by now but I will never give up on you! So, help me to help you, pal. Otherwise we're going to have to part ways.


Okay..okay. I made sure the grammar and revisions were done on the section. I just need to see what you think.


Thank you, please post up the most recent version and I will look into it once i get home.


Quote:
Occupation: Conqueror
Sexuality: Anything with a wet hole. If male, he tell them beforehand "If you attempt to touch me, I'll cut your limbs off and cauterize the stubs."
Likes: The pure joy he finds in violence, destruction and war.
Dreams: Be The Strongest Technological Warrior in the Universe.
Dislikes: Being touched by other males. Being molested as a child has left some affects.
Fears: People trying to hold him back from power.
Darkest Secret: Arcturusn as a child was sold by his own adoptive father to be a child prostitute. It's the reason he doesn't like being touched by other men.
Favorite Food: Beer Battered Minced Female.
Favorite Drink: Moon Shine chased with Hennessey
Least Favorite Food: Peanut Butter and jelly sandwich. He will literally throw up on you, if you present one to him.
Least Favorite Drink: Beer, and other cheap disgraceful poor people drinks.
Loyalties: Arcturusn growing up on the battlefield has learned his loyalty should always be in his strength and willpower to survive at all cost.
Intelligence Level: Arcturusn is highly intelligent in the vast knowledge's gained from a constant life of war. .
Dominant Hand: Multidextrous. Arcturusn having eight arms has very proficient ability to seamlessly achieve various task at the same time.
Strengths: Arcturusn strength comes from his endurance and indomitable willpower to survive.
Arcturusn suffers deeply from Posttraumatic Stress Disorder . The experiences that (2) (1) occured in his time amogst the mercenary band still affect him , and have increased to the point . That when he enters combat and it get highly violent he will reinact the conversation he had with the mercenary leader , and attempt to kill them . In some other events he has even reinacted the molestation he faced though his suit of armor made from metal , and even modified it to perform such task .

Cherished Items: The Hammer of Arcturusn: This hammer crafted from Star metal the natural negating material to the divine, arcane, and psionic. Arcturusn keeps this hammer always at his side, as it can forge creations from the material of anything, even the gods themselves. This hammer was given to him b y his adoptive mother. She never wanted him to become a soldier, but rather a blacksmith. Her dream died with her, but Arcturusn never stop honing his crafting skills to the point he is now a master blacksmith.

Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint: If you're not for me, then motherlova you're against me! If you're not complimenting, then ninja you're offending!
Religious Viewpoint: Arcturusn acknowledges the existence of deities, but does not pledge loyalty nor faith to any of them.
Romantic Viewpoint: Arcturusn only love is the battlefield for it is where he can fulfill any of his pleasures. For on the battlefield anything can happen.

Personality
Being born from a bloody situation and forced into a life of violence, Arcturusn had hardly any time to live like a normal child. Trained at a young age to be an emotionless fighters. Brainwashed to purge information considered useless for combat purposes. Therefore, Arcturusn acts as a wild animal with only the will to kill and survive. He will use anything that he can forge as a weapon. He enters a sort of kill mode that causes his eyes to fade slightly but become very serious, thus showing his resolve and determination to kill anything in his way to achieve victory.

Arcturusn is subject to bloodlust, getting an intense bestial satisfaction off of killing other people almost to the degree that he could be considered somewhat psychotic. He will occasionally grin in such a manner that makes him appear to be a demon and loves the feeling of killing scum. He's always open for a challenge and does not mind literally crushing somebody's body and internal organs to employ his battle techniques.
Arcturusn has no morals on how he kills people and will easily slaughter anyone without giving it a second thought. When it comes to allies, he will smile and talk with them on an even level very interested in sharing his own thoughts but keeping his secrets as well.


Biography

Arcturusn was discovered as a baby crying from inside his mother intestines on a battlefield by a group of intergalactic mercenaries . Their leader beloved saw this as a sign the child was meant to live and saved him , despite the lovers claims that the boy was a omen of bad misfortune . When Arcturusn turned three , his adoptive mother was dying from a mysterious plague. Her final moments were holding onto Arcturusn' right hand and calling out his name before she died . The mercenary leader , despite his cold and arrogant personality , had deep affection for Arcturusn's adoptive mother ; her death fueled his anger towards Arcturusn , who blamed his " cursed heritage " for the death of his lover. . . But it was kept a secret for regardless of the matter Arcturusn was in his ranks , and like all he had to earn his keep . From then on Arcturusn was trained to be a warrior in the ancient teaching of The Weirding Way to fight in not only zero gravity , but any atmosphere . Which he received training from the leader of the mercenaries he belonged to . The techniques were engraved within the Arcturusn's psyche and could still be recalled many decades or even centuries later. . Arcturusn in his first battle became warped into desiring the fight , mostly to gain his leaders favor and later to satisfy his own fighting abilities . After successfully killing the first person he would in a list of thousands , Arcturusn tempered himself to become stronger and know how to hold his sword , eventually building a strong and very personal relationship with the any weapon he wields . While they celebrated Arcturusn was given for the night as a prostitute by the Mercenaries leader to a favored warrior . A thing Arcturusn would learn later on in the heat of battle as he exacted his revenge against the one who molested him , In which he learn this fact. . Arcturusn became devoted to revenge , and though he knew he could not beat his leader in a fair fight . He put a deceptive plan into order to make such a thing possible . At the first moment he gained a chance to do so by being the lone guard on watch of the mercenaries water supply he poisoned them all . As they retired from the effects he confronted the leader , and the two fought until Arcturusn came out victorious . He then collected all the weapons and knowledge found on the dead bodies that lied around and put them on a ship he still uses to travel the universe .

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 12:14 pm


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Occupation: Conqueror
Sexuality: Anything with a wet hole. If male, he tell them beforehand "If you attempt to touch me, I'll cut your limbs off and cauterize the stubs."
Likes: The pure joy he finds in violence, destruction and war.
Dreams: Be The Strongest Technological Warrior in the Universe.
Dislikes: Being touched by other males. Being molested as a child has left some affects.
Fears: People trying to hold him back from power.
Darkest Secret: Arcturusn as a child was sold by his own adoptive father to be a child prostitute. It's the reason he doesn't like being touched by other men.
Favorite Food: Beer Battered Minced Female.
Favorite Drink: Moon Shine chased with Hennessey
Least Favorite Food: Peanut Butter and jelly sandwich. He will literally throw up on you, if you present one to him.
Least Favorite Drink: Beer, and other cheap disgraceful poor people drinks.
Loyalties: Arcturusn growing up on the battlefield has learned his loyalty should always be in his strength and willpower to survive at all cost.
Intelligence Level: Arcturusn is highly intelligent in the vast knowledge's gained from a constant life of war. .
Dominant Hand: Multidextrous. Arcturusn having eight arms has very proficient ability to seamlessly achieve various task at the same time.
Strengths: Arcturusn strength comes from his endurance and indomitable willpower to survive.
Arcturusn suffers deeply from Posttraumatic Stress Disorder . The experiences that (2) (1) occured in his time amogst the mercenary band still affect him , and have increased to the point . That when he enters combat and it get highly violent he will reinact the conversation he had with the mercenary leader , and attempt to kill them . In some other events he has even reinacted the molestation he faced though his suit of armor made from metal , and even modified it to perform such task .

Cherished Items: The Hammer of Arcturusn: This hammer crafted from Star metal the natural negating material to the divine, arcane, and psionic. Arcturusn keeps this hammer always at his side, as it can forge creations from the material of anything, even the gods themselves. This hammer was given to him b y his adoptive mother. She never wanted him to become a soldier, but rather a blacksmith. Her dream died with her, but Arcturusn never stop honing his crafting skills to the point he is now a master blacksmith.

Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint: If you're not for me, then motherlova you're against me! If you're not complimenting, then ninja you're offending!
Religious Viewpoint: Arcturusn acknowledges the existence of deities, but does not pledge loyalty nor faith to any of them.
Romantic Viewpoint: Arcturusn only love is the battlefield for it is where he can fulfill any of his pleasures. For on the battlefield anything can happen.

Personality
Being born from a bloody situation and forced into a life of violence, Arcturusn had hardly any time to live like a normal child. Trained at a young age to be an emotionless fighters. Brainwashed to purge information considered useless for combat purposes. Therefore, Arcturusn acts as a wild animal with only the will to kill and survive. He will use anything that he can forge as a weapon. He enters a sort of kill mode that causes his eyes to fade slightly but become very serious, thus showing his resolve and determination to kill anything in his way to achieve victory.

Arcturusn is subject to bloodlust, getting an intense bestial satisfaction off of killing other people almost to the degree that he could be considered somewhat psychotic. He will occasionally grin in such a manner that makes him appear to be a demon and loves the feeling of killing scum. He's always open for a challenge and does not mind literally crushing somebody's body and internal organs to employ his battle techniques.
Arcturusn has no morals on how he kills people and will easily slaughter anyone without giving it a second thought. When it comes to allies, he will smile and talk with them on an even level very interested in sharing his own thoughts but keeping his secrets as well.


Biography

Arcturusn was discovered as a baby crying from inside his mother intestines on a battlefield by a group of intergalactic mercenaries . Their leader beloved saw this as a sign the child was meant to live and saved him , despite the lovers claims that the boy was a omen of bad misfortune . When Arcturusn turned three , his adoptive mother was dying from a mysterious plague. Her final moments were holding onto Arcturusn' right hand and calling out his name before she died . The mercenary leader , despite his cold and arrogant personality , had deep affection for Arcturusn's adoptive mother ; her death fueled his anger towards Arcturusn , who blamed his " cursed heritage " for the death of his lover. . . But it was kept a secret for regardless of the matter Arcturusn was in his ranks , and like all he had to earn his keep . From then on Arcturusn was trained to be a warrior in the ancient teaching of The Weirding Way to fight in not only zero gravity , but any atmosphere . Which he received training from the leader of the mercenaries he belonged to . The techniques were engraved within the Arcturusn's psyche and could still be recalled many decades or even centuries later. . Arcturusn in his first battle became warped into desiring the fight , mostly to gain his leaders favor and later to satisfy his own fighting abilities . After successfully killing the first person he would in a list of thousands , Arcturusn tempered himself to become stronger and know how to hold his sword , eventually building a strong and very personal relationship with the any weapon he wields . While they celebrated Arcturusn was given for the night as a prostitute by the Mercenaries leader to a favored warrior . A thing Arcturusn would learn later on in the heat of battle as he exacted his revenge against the one who molested him , In which he learn this fact. . Arcturusn became devoted to revenge , and though he knew he could not beat his leader in a fair fight . He put a deceptive plan into order to make such a thing possible . At the first moment he gained a chance to do so by being the lone guard on watch of the mercenaries water supply he poisoned them all . As they retired from the effects he confronted the leader , and the two fought until Arcturusn came out victorious . He then collected all the weapons and knowledge found on the dead bodies that lied around and put them on a ship he still uses to travel the universe .


If I make edits to this now... I swear that if they are then removed, we will have problems. Most of these will be coding a grammatical things. I will post up a new version when I have time. At the moment, I am currently needed elsewhere. Give me... say... an hour and a half.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 1:57 pm


[Personal Information]
Occupation: Former Mercenary, Aspiring Conqueror (I put "aspiring because he has not conquered anything yet according to your data)
Sexuality: Heterosexual (You don't like men, so you're hetero and that's that now. No more of this nonsense.)
Likes: The pure joy he finds in violence, destruction and war.
Dreams: To be the strongest Technological Warrior in the Universe.
Dislikes: Being touched by other males. Being molested as a child has left some affects.
Fears: People trying to hold him back from power.
Darkest Secret: Arcturusn as a child was sold by his own adoptive father to be a child prostitute. It's the reason he doesn't like being touched by other men.
Favourite Food: Beer Battered Minced Female.
Favourite Drink: Moon Shine chased with Hennessey
Least Favourite Food: Peanut Butter and jelly sandwich. He will literally throw up on you if you present one to him.
Least Favourite Drink: Beer, and other cheap disgraceful poor people drinks.
Loyalties: Arcturusn growing up on the battlefield has learned his loyalty should always be in his strength and willpower to survive at all cost.
Intelligence Level: Arcturusn is highly intelligent (being a soldier does not make you intelligent, it makes you good at your job. Or intelligent when it comes to your job. How many Jarheads do you know with degrees?)
Dominant Hand: Multidextrous. Arcturusn having eight arms has very proficient ability to seamlessly achieve various task at the same time.
Strengths: Arcturusn strength comes from his endurance and indomitable willpower to survive.
Weaknesses: Arcturusn suffers deeply from Post-traumatic Stress Disorder. The experiences that occurred in his time amongst the mercenary band still affect him, and have increased to the point that when he enters combat and it get highly violent he will reenact the conversation he had with the mercenary leader and attempt to kill them. In some other events he has even reenacted the molestation he faced though his suit of armor made from metal; it is even modified to perform such a task .
(A lot of grammar edits done. DON'T UNDO THEM FOR GOD'S SAKE!)


Cherished Items:
The Hammer of Arcturusn: This hammer was given to him by his adoptive mother. She never wanted him to become a soldier, but rather a blacksmith. Her dream died with her, but Arcturusn never stop honing his crafting skills to the point he is now a master blacksmith. (describe its abilities elsewhere)

Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint:
If you're not for me, then motherlova you're against me! If you're not complimenting, then ninja you're offending!

Religious Viewpoint:
Arcturusn acknowledges the existence of deities, but does not pledge loyalty nor faith to any of them.

Romantic Viewpoint:
Arcturusn only love is the battlefield for it is where he can fulfill any of his pleasures. For on the battlefield anything can happen.

Personality
Being born from a bloody situation and forced into a life of violence, Arcturusn had hardly any time to live like a normal child. Trained at a young age to be an emotionless fighter and brainwashed to purge information considered useless for combat purposes; Arcturusn acts as a wild animal with only the will to kill and survive. He will use anything that he can forge as a weapon.

Arcturusn is subject to bloodlust, getting an intense bestial satisfaction off of killing other people; to the degree that he could be considered somewhat psychotic. He will occasionally grin in such a manner that makes him appear to be a demon and loves the feeling of killing what he deems "scum". He's always open for a challenge and does not mind literally crushing somebody's body and internal organs to employ his battle techniques.

Arcturusn has no morals on how he kills people and will easily slaughter anyone without giving it a second thought. When it comes to allies, he will smile and talk with them on an even level appearing very interested in sharing his own thoughts but all the while keeping his own secrets as well.
(You're an animal or serious and calculated. You cannot be both. Based on the data I have, I went for animal.)

Biography
(This needs a lot of work dude, fancy posting it paragraph by paragraph for me?)



Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 9:25 pm


Uchiha Roxas
[Personal Information]
Occupation: Former Mercenary, Aspiring Conqueror (I put "aspiring because he has not conquered anything yet according to your data)
Sexuality: Heterosexual (You don't like men, so you're hetero and that's that now. No more of this nonsense.)
Likes: The pure joy he finds in violence, destruction and war.
Dreams: To be the strongest Technological Warrior in the Universe.
Dislikes: Being touched by other males. Being molested as a child has left some affects.
Fears: People trying to hold him back from power.
Darkest Secret: Arcturusn as a child was sold by his own adoptive father to be a child prostitute. It's the reason he doesn't like being touched by other men.
Favourite Food: Beer Battered Minced Female.
Favourite Drink: Moon Shine chased with Hennessey
Least Favourite Food: Peanut Butter and jelly sandwich. He will literally throw up on you if you present one to him.
Least Favourite Drink: Beer, and other cheap disgraceful poor people drinks.
Loyalties: Arcturusn growing up on the battlefield has learned his loyalty should always be in his strength and willpower to survive at all cost.
Intelligence Level: Arcturusn is highly intelligent (being a soldier does not make you intelligent, it makes you good at your job. Or intelligent when it comes to your job. How many Jarheads do you know with degrees?)
Dominant Hand: Multidextrous. Arcturusn having eight arms has very proficient ability to seamlessly achieve various task at the same time.
Strengths: Arcturusn strength comes from his endurance and indomitable willpower to survive.
Weaknesses: Arcturusn suffers deeply from Post-traumatic Stress Disorder. The experiences that occurred in his time amongst the mercenary band still affect him, and have increased to the point that when he enters combat and it get highly violent he will reenact the conversation he had with the mercenary leader and attempt to kill them. In some other events he has even reenacted the molestation he faced though his suit of armor made from metal; it is even modified to perform such a task .
(A lot of grammar edits done. DON'T UNDO THEM FOR GOD'S SAKE!)


Cherished Items:
The Hammer of Arcturusn: This hammer was given to him by his adoptive mother. She never wanted him to become a soldier, but rather a blacksmith. Her dream died with her, but Arcturusn never stop honing his crafting skills to the point he is now a master blacksmith. (describe its abilities elsewhere)

Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint:
If you're not for me, then motherlova you're against me! If you're not complimenting, then ninja you're offending!

Religious Viewpoint:
Arcturusn acknowledges the existence of deities, but does not pledge loyalty nor faith to any of them.

Romantic Viewpoint:
Arcturusn only love is the battlefield for it is where he can fulfill any of his pleasures. For on the battlefield anything can happen.

Personality
Being born from a bloody situation and forced into a life of violence, Arcturusn had hardly any time to live like a normal child. Trained at a young age to be an emotionless fighter and brainwashed to purge information considered useless for combat purposes; Arcturusn acts as a wild animal with only the will to kill and survive. He will use anything that he can forge as a weapon.

Arcturusn is subject to bloodlust, getting an intense bestial satisfaction off of killing other people; to the degree that he could be considered somewhat psychotic. He will occasionally grin in such a manner that makes him appear to be a demon and loves the feeling of killing what he deems "scum". He's always open for a challenge and does not mind literally crushing somebody's body and internal organs to employ his battle techniques.

Arcturusn has no morals on how he kills people and will easily slaughter anyone without giving it a second thought. When it comes to allies, he will smile and talk with them on an even level appearing very interested in sharing his own thoughts but all the while keeping his own secrets as well.
(You're an animal or serious and calculated. You cannot be both. Based on the data I have, I went for animal.)

Biography
(This needs a lot of work dude, fancy posting it paragraph by paragraph for me?)




Former Mercenary, Aspiring Conqueror is cool with me. Heterosexual, if you mean in the way men who force themselves on other men to prove dominance in prison still consider themselves heterosexual. His intellect doesn't comes from being a soldier, but a mercenary. A mercenary works for whoever gives them the best off based on what they want at the time. Therefore he is very intellectual in marking and business. A mercenary cannot be a prisoner of war, and are usually people of great combat skill and at escaping. Mercenaries are not tied when sent on missions are sent on the circumstances that whatever they do cannot be tied to anything. Therefore, these people know espionage, assassination. Another thing is mercenaries aren't just combat oriented...the character is a blacksmith he can forge you something for the right price, or get information. Private companies are considered mercenaries because they work for the right price, but are not tied to a nation or party. Cool on describing the hammer ability in the weapon section. You can be a animal and be serious and calculated. Ivan the Terrible is a perfect example of that, and so is this character.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 10:42 am


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Former Mercenary, Aspiring Conqueror is cool with me. Heterosexual, if you mean in the way men who force themselves on other men to prove dominance in prison still consider themselves heterosexual. His intellect doesn't comes from being a soldier, but a mercenary. A mercenary works for whoever gives them the best off based on what they want at the time. Therefore he is very intellectual in marking and business. A mercenary cannot be a prisoner of war, and are usually people of great combat skill and at escaping. Mercenaries are not tied when sent on missions are sent on the circumstances that whatever they do cannot be tied to anything. Therefore, these people know espionage, assassination. Another thing is mercenaries aren't just combat oriented...the character is a blacksmith he can forge you something for the right price, or get information. Private companies are considered mercenaries because they work for the right price, but are not tied to a nation or party. Cool on describing the hammer ability in the weapon section. You can be a animal and be serious and calculated. Ivan the Terrible is a perfect example of that, and so is this character.


Well, he's a former mercenary with the aspirations to conquer territories so... Yeah, I thought it would fit your profile well if we said stuff along the lines of: "Earth is the first step to his Galactic Empire etc." I'm glad you like that bit.

As for the heterosexual part... Dude, pick one. You say you don't want men even touching you and then you're willing to stick your character's d**k in them. That doesn't make sense and even if you use the prisoner example those sorts of things are actually very rare and often occur within people of conflicting sexual identities/ desperation. That isn't a common thing.

There is no difference between a soldier and a mercenary really. One gets paid more to do stuff. That's pretty much it. You don't need a business degree to be a Merc nor do you need to be all that clever or not be a POW. Those things are bogus.

Ivan the Terrible was a warrior in ancient times and he was a cold and calculating but merciless man. He wasn't animalistic. He was just a beast in terms of proficiency and prowess and harshness. You don't get both ever. Even Atrocitus, the leader of the Red Lantern Corps has difficulty unleashing complex and long plans! So, no.

We can compromise on some stuff if you really wish but I don't think there's a lot to stand on in the arguments for some of this stuff.

Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 4:28 pm


Uchiha Roxas
One_Being

Former Mercenary, Aspiring Conqueror is cool with me. Heterosexual, if you mean in the way men who force themselves on other men to prove dominance in prison still consider themselves heterosexual. His intellect doesn't comes from being a soldier, but a mercenary. A mercenary works for whoever gives them the best off based on what they want at the time. Therefore he is very intellectual in marking and business. A mercenary cannot be a prisoner of war, and are usually people of great combat skill and at escaping. Mercenaries are not tied when sent on missions are sent on the circumstances that whatever they do cannot be tied to anything. Therefore, these people know espionage, assassination. Another thing is mercenaries aren't just combat oriented...the character is a blacksmith he can forge you something for the right price, or get information. Private companies are considered mercenaries because they work for the right price, but are not tied to a nation or party. Cool on describing the hammer ability in the weapon section. You can be a animal and be serious and calculated. Ivan the Terrible is a perfect example of that, and so is this character.


Well, he's a former mercenary with the aspirations to conquer territories so... Yeah, I thought it would fit your profile well if we said stuff along the lines of: "Earth is the first step to his Galactic Empire etc." I'm glad you like that bit.

As for the heterosexual part... Dude, pick one. You say you don't want men even touching you and then you're willing to stick your character's d**k in them. That doesn't make sense and even if you use the prisoner example those sorts of things are actually very rare and often occur within people of conflicting sexual identities/ desperation. That isn't a common thing.

There is no difference between a soldier and a mercenary really. One gets paid more to do stuff. That's pretty much it. You don't need a business degree to be a Merc nor do you need to be all that clever or not be a POW. Those things are bogus.

Ivan the Terrible was a warrior in ancient times and he was a cold and calculating but merciless man. He wasn't animalistic. He was just a beast in terms of proficiency and prowess and harshness. You don't get both ever. Even Atrocitus, the leader of the Red Lantern Corps has difficulty unleashing complex and long plans! So, no.

We can compromise on some stuff if you really wish but I don't think there's a lot to stand on in the arguments for some of this stuff.


That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 8:40 am


One_Being


That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.

Uchiha Roxas

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One_Being

PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 2:52 pm


Uchiha Roxas
One_Being


That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.


I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.
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That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.


I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 3:29 pm


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That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.


I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.


That like if you said an actor is their actual role. For example Morgan free must be a god because he act like god in the movie Bruce almighty.
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That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.


I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.


That like if you said an actor is their actual role. For example Morgan free must be a god because he act like god in the movie Bruce almighty.


Read back what you are writing and you will see that that is not what I mean.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 3:55 pm


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That can be true of a young mercenary, but what about an experienced one that has fought on different fronts across the universe for 700 years. Don't you think such a successful person would have devised various protocols and procedures to deal with many foes would be considered highly intelligent. Even you yourself knows that you can't tackle every problem in life with the same solution, and I'm saying this character possesses that. Forget Ivan, and compare this guy to King Bradley, and you'll see its achievable to have brutality like an animal, but be refined by wisdom due to age.


That's common sense. Not intelligence. Unless you have spent time studying (but by the sounds of it you haven't due to wandering from bloodbath to bloodbath) then you can't be a genius level intellect just because you fight. That would make you good at what you do. Not a genius.

Also being Animalistic and having the ferocity of an animal are actually two different things. Being ferocious, that's to be expected but becoming an animal is different. Animals work on pure aggression and instinct, they abandon logic. You can be ruthless but I don't see how you could be like... a complete animal one minute and then fine the next.


I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.


That like if you said an actor is their actual role. For example Morgan free must be a god because he act like god in the movie Bruce almighty.


Read back what you are writing and you will see that that is not what I mean.


I didn't use the word act metaphorically I used it by its literal definition, when I wrote he acts as an animal. Meaning he impersonates a wild animal in combat. Do you get that?
PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 11:56 pm


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I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.


That like if you said an actor is their actual role. For example Morgan free must be a god because he act like god in the movie Bruce almighty.


Read back what you are writing and you will see that that is not what I mean.


I didn't use the word act metaphorically I used it by its literal definition, when I wrote he acts as an animal. Meaning he impersonates a wild animal in combat. Do you get that?


Impersonating is more Metaphorical than literal; if it's an act, it is a metaphor, a living breathing metaphor. Acting is metaphoric.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 8:33 pm


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I didnt say he is a wild animal in combat. I said he acts like a wild animal. That doesn't mean he is a wild animal. It means he impersonates a wild animal, meaning that if situation demanded he could show who he really is in combat.


He acts like a wild animal and therefore, metaphorically, he is a wild animal. Which wouldn't work One.


That like if you said an actor is their actual role. For example Morgan free must be a god because he act like god in the movie Bruce almighty.


Read back what you are writing and you will see that that is not what I mean.


I didn't use the word act metaphorically I used it by its literal definition, when I wrote he acts as an animal. Meaning he impersonates a wild animal in combat. Do you get that?


Impersonating is more Metaphorical than literal; if it's an act, it is a metaphor, a living breathing metaphor. Acting is metaphoric.


How are you going to tell the writer what they meant when they wrote something? I know what I meant when I wrote that, and your interpretation of my work is wrong. This is like you walking up to Edgar Allen Poe or Shakesp rare and telling them you know what they meant after the tell you what their work meant.
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