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PostPosted: Mon Apr 10, 2017 1:28 am


Draconis Valos

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Age: Appears 21 but is actually 219 in human years.


Gender: Male


Eye Color: Gold


Hair Color: Black


Height: 6'1"


Weight: 170lbs


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Voice: Kazuya Nakai | Zoro


Scars, Markings, or Accessories: A scar across his face.


Race: Half Demon/Tainted Dragon


Bio:

Odessa the mighty shadowy black dragon and Kaido a very powerful demon whose strength seconds the demon king had an offspring. Draconis, was destined for greatness, but like a lot of great stories it has a tragic beginning. Kaido was attempting to destroy an army single handily as work for a king. Because of his reputation the opposing army hired Odessa to protect him from them. Although she ultimately couldn't protect them from the epic battle that would take place. Odessa and Kaido fought for several days neither one giving an inch to another. Kaido, impressed with her incredible strength, fell in love with the female dragon. However, the demon Kaido left shortly after impregnating Odessa leaving her to raise their offspring. In order to raise her child efficiently she sealed half her power into a stone.

Now having a human form and a baby Draconis to look after, Odessa, would have to try to adapt to human the lifestyle. Knowing of her husbands notorious fame she did not give her son his surname. This was in order to protect him.However, this didn't stop the gossip of Kaido Yokai laying with a dragon turned human. As a result of Odessa and Draconis sudden appearance they had to escape. Aware that in order to protect her son she would need to find the stone she sealed her power in and destroy it. While traveling to the location of her stone she trained Draconis in the chance they may be separated. About a year into their journey they were approached by a group of men. Normally he would be confident but his mother knew she would be no match for them in her weakened state.

Transforming into her dragon form confirming their suspicion. A young Draconis watching as his mother was being badly beaten by the group. Shifting into his dragon form he attempted to save her but she let out a loud road stopping everyone. She yelled out to him to escape and to live on a survive for her sake. Her last words before she was slain was that she loved him. With his life Draconis was able to escape without them knowing who he is. Many years Draconis lived as a wanderer; honing his skills for those that dared cross him. Now a grow man the half demon tainted dragon lives as a wandering mercenary.


Personality: Draconis can be a bit complex to people who don't know him. An introvert by birth he normally keeps to himself and lets people talk more than he would while he gathers information. Depending on the persons character Draconis may open his self up to the person if he trust them. With friends he can be more talkative, friendly, laid back, and just an overall nice person to be around. When around people he does not know or like he is a bit more aloof or mysterious until he deems the person worthy of his friendship. Once he sees you as a friend, you have a good friend for life, he will stay loyal to you and see you as family. Besides his loyalty his biggest trait is how headstrong he is no matter how the odds are stacked against him.


Family:
Mother - Odessa Deceased
Father - Kaido Yokai Unknown


Likes (At least 3)
- Adventures/Traveling.
- Women.
- Training
- Drinking.
- A good fight.

Dislikes (At least 3)
- Unnecessary bloodshed.
- Confrontational pricks.
- Petty bitches.

Occupation: Mercenary | Adventurer | Merchant


Loyalty towards: Vagabond


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Powers:

Demonic heritage
Decelerated Aging: Due to his heritage he has an extended life-span.
Enhanced Agility: Draconis can go from one motion to another effortlessly, effectively dodge attacks, swing from things easily, sprint, do back-flips and numerous other gymnastic, athletic and martial implements with little effort.
Enhanced Athleticism: Draconis possesses athletic abilities beyond even most dedicated training.
Enhanced Brain Capacity: Draconis can use/access his brain capacity far above the maximum level, gaining extended knowledge and usage of his brain.
Enhanced Combat: Draconis is unbelievably skilled in most known forms of fighting.
Enhanced Reflexes: Has a drastically enhanced reaction speed.
Enhanced Senses: Draconis has extremely accurate senses, allowing them to see, hear, smell, taste, and/or touch more than an average member of their species.
Enhanced Stamina: Has the ability to function for long periods of time without tiring or straining his self.
Enhanced Strength: Draconis haves an incredible ability to defy weight limitations of the member of their race, but not completely break them. He is able to easily uproot trees, break walls , and punch through steel.
Enhanced Jump: Draconis can jump incredible distances and land safely, he can as some say scale the tallest mountains.
Enhanced Dexterity: Draconis can precisely control his movements and muscles, making them unable to be clumsy or fumbling.
Natural Weaponry: Has the ability to enhance his bite, grow retractable claws, growing a prehensile tail, and horn growth if he needs to stab.
Hell-Fire Manipulation: Draconis can generate and manipulate the cursed flames of Hell. Will create a moves list once I make some moves.
Regenerative Healing Factor: Draconis can heal at a cost. In other words, he can recreate lost or damaged tissues, organs and limbs(does not include head).
con: requires stamina and concentration
Partial Transformation: Draconis can partially transform his body, either by transforming certain parts his body independently of the rest of it or into a "half-state" between two forms.
Shape-Shift: The ability to transform into his dragon from, demon form, or hybrid form.

Draconic Form
Atmospheric Adaptation: Draconis lungs acclimatize and breathe in/on any gaseous mediums, whether hostile or deficient, users lungs also filter away non-gaseous substances such as dust, asbestos, etc.
Scale Manifestation: Draconis has thick strong scales
Elemental Breath: Draconis is able to generate and manipulate fire, smoke, and energy in bursts, streams, spheres, even a mist of it from his mouth.
Enhanced Roar: Draconis is able to shout so loud that he can blow away objects or break objects with their ferocious vocal cords which can cause vibrations in a 2 KM radius .
Flight: Can fly with the wings on his back.
Magic Resistance: Is highly resistant to dark magic.
Natural Weaponry: Claw retraction, enhanced bite, prehensile tail, and prehensile tongue
Omnilingualism: Ability to instantly learn, speak and understand any language fluently.
Thermal Resistance: Ability to survive in extreme temperatures. An example, would be tolerating lava from a volcano.

Demon Form*
Demon Soul: The ability to have the soul of a Demon
Demonic Arm: Draconis has a physical manifestation of demonic power as an arm, which grants various abilities
Demonic Attacks: Draconis can release/use demonic energy to attacks of various shapes and/or intensities, either projected, used as a part of melee attacks, etc. Will make a move list once techniques are developed.
Demonic Aura: The ability to surround oneself in wretched demonic energy.
Self-Power Augmentation: Draconis is able to empower his existing powers to higher levels, if not highest possible levels. This can only for two post before having to revert forms.

Hybrid Form**
Demon Physiology: Ability to use: Scale Manifestation, Flight, Natural Weaponry, and Elemental Breath
Dragon Physiology: Ability to use: Demonic Arm, Demonic Attacks, Demonic Aura, and Self-Power Augmentation
Flight: The power to fly without any outside influence.

* - Unstable in this form and prone to aggressive behavior unless trained
** - Highly unstable unless trained and can only hold this form for five post.



Weapon of choice: Dual Wield Katanas


Strengths: (At least 3)
- Powerful physical fighter.
- Healing factor.
- Intelligent n' strategic.

Weaknesses: (At least 3)
- Loses control in demon & hybrid forms.
- Loyal to those he trust.
- Light weapons/powers are super effective.

Fighting Style:
Depends on the situation. Usually if he can't take on his opponent in his human form then he goes from the following: dragon form, demon form and hybrid form. While battling if he figures out the enemies way of fighting he will devise a strategy.

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(Music themes you want for your character)
Theme: Draconis Main Theme

Battle Theme: Draconis Battle Theme

Battle Theme: Draconis Battle Theme pt2

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 1:48 am


Draconis Valos
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 1:53 am


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 10:37 am


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Pros:

Cons: So his powers and weaknesses are a little lack luster. Don't get me wrong, theirs a lot of stuff there, but its a little too vague. For instance, in his hybrid form, you say he has the 'power to use the abilities of demons and dragons'. What does that mean? Its a little too open ended if you get what I'm saying? Instead of saying he can use all demonic powers, you have to list the demonic powers he can use, because if you leave him open to using every demonic power and every draconic power he could end up becoming unintentionally over powered.

As for weaknesses, I don't see like a really threatening weakness. Losing control sucks and all but if you don't have allies with you then that doesn't matter. Being loyals not really a weakness in most situations (but most people, including myself, tend to list things similar to this so no harm done). And while not being a long ranged fighter is a weakness most of his forms have some sort of fast gap closer like flight or increased agility to easily dodge ranged attacks , making this sort of a moot point. The easiest way to add weaknesses is to work them directly into your powers. If you need some examples of that there are quite a few profiles that have good balanced powers.

Additional Comments: Anyways! Yeah, not saying that you're trying to make an over powered character, but the captain isn't a huge fan of vagueness when it comes to powers. So if you could just clear that up a little bit by giving him a few set abilities in each form and adding some weaknesses we should be good. : )


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 10:54 am


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Pros:

Cons: So his powers and weaknesses are a little lack luster. Don't get me wrong, theirs a lot of stuff there, but its a little too vague. For instance, in his hybrid form, you say he has the 'power to use the abilities of demons and dragons'. What does that mean? Its a little too open ended if you get what I'm saying? Instead of saying he can use all demonic powers, you have to list the demonic powers he can use, because if you leave him open to using every demonic power and every draconic power he could end up becoming unintentionally over powered.

As for weaknesses, I don't see like a really threatening weakness. Losing control sucks and all but if you don't have allies with you then that doesn't matter. Being loyals not really a weakness in most situations (but most people, including myself, tend to list things similar to this so no harm done). And while not being a long ranged fighter is a weakness most of his forms have some sort of fast gap closer like flight or increased agility to easily dodge ranged attacks , making this sort of a moot point. The easiest way to add weaknesses is to work them directly into your powers. If you need some examples of that there are quite a few profiles that have good balanced powers.

Additional Comments: Anyways! Yeah, not saying that you're trying to make an over powered character, but the captain isn't a huge fan of vagueness when it comes to powers. So if you could just clear that up a little bit by giving him a few set abilities in each form and adding some weaknesses we should be good. : )


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I think you took it the wrong way. I can edit the hybrid form, but saying my powers are vague is unfair. I literally explained his powers to you guys how is it vague? As for my weakness it's a legit weakness I am traveling with people not to mention what about the people i rp with? I used the powers from this site and I didn't even use the full power list due to overpoweredness. I will edit my powers and add a limitation on a few but I disagree with my powers being vague.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 11:10 am


Done. Although I don't see how my character is overpowered when someones rpc can literally not die.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 12:58 pm


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Done. Although I don't see how my character is overpowered when someones rpc can literally not die.


Alright well you did make some changes which is good. However since you seem to be upset with me for looking over your profile and pointing out what I believed to be issues I'm not going to be continuing your profile approval process. I'll make sure to quote some active crew members once I can get to a computer so one of them can continue the process from here.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 1:54 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 5:06 pm


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Done. Although I don't see how my character is overpowered when someones rpc can literally not die.


Alright well you did make some changes which is good. However since you seem to be upset with me for looking over your profile and pointing out what I believed to be issues I'm not going to be continuing your profile approval process. I'll make sure to quote some active crew members once I can get to a computer so one of them can continue the process from here.

I don't appreciate you assuming how I felt and taking what I said how you did. I'm not upset but I was a little annoyed. What you did makes me feel more annoyed though because you took what I said wrong without even clarifying. I wasn't upset with before I sure am now because I have to wait for someone else to look at my profile when you could've done it.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 8:32 pm


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Done. Although I don't see how my character is overpowered when someones rpc can literally not die.


Alright well you did make some changes which is good. However since you seem to be upset with me for looking over your profile and pointing out what I believed to be issues I'm not going to be continuing your profile approval process. I'll make sure to quote some active crew members once I can get to a computer so one of them can continue the process from here.

I don't appreciate you assuming how I felt and taking what I said how you did. I'm not upset but I was a little annoyed. What you did makes me feel more annoyed though because you took what I said wrong without even clarifying. I wasn't upset with before I sure am now because I have to wait for someone else to look at my profile when you could've done it.


i did not say you did anything wrong, I didn't even say you were trying to make an overpowered character. I said that your powers weren't clear enough, which they weren't clear at the time. I tried to be as kind as I could with it but you took offense to it and it felt like you were giving me some attitude. So to be fair I thought I'd pass your profile to someone else so if I am indeed wrong about your profile they can clarify my errors and approve your profile. This'll be my last post on your profile forum, good luck with your profile.

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PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2017 8:28 pm


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