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 Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 6:09 pm
'Til Death
Will you go to Heven,
Will you go to Hell,
You'll never know 'til death.
Will your spirit stay here,
Will your spirit leave earth,
You'll never know 'til death.
If you want to know,
If you have to be told,
You can always find out right now.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 2:07 pm
Wow. This is pretty good. I'd say it will have to be a 7/10
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:27 pm
Yeah I did it real fast at school so it isn't that good.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 5:40 am
for some reason, it gave me chills
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:27 am
Sorry if I'm wrong but this reminds me of something.
See I used to get bottled up with alot of strong depressing moments out of thin air. So I wrote little things like that, they didn't sound great but they where okay... But then when I took it later and my feelings where more thought out and calm, yet I could still remember how upset I was, I would rewrite it in a way to express it the same yet make it so that you could feel what I felt... you know???
I like it, but I would look forword to seeing a rewrite... just a thought.
HEY EVERYONE!!! Don't forget to visit the new birthday subforum. Just click the subforum, click your month, and post your date.. I'll fit you into the spots. whee
blesses be all
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