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 Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:01 am
I'm going to post all the poems that I've written over the years.I hope you all like them.Most of them start out kinda dark,and end on a light note.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:03 am
My Vow
To The One I Love,
I give you my heart,
my soul, and my
eternal love.
I know that I will love and
cherish you forever.No
one can break the special
bond we have.I know that
we will be together until
the very end.
I will be there to catch
you when you fall.I
will love you forever
and always.You
are the light of
my life.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:07 am
~The Darkness~
I all I can see is the darkness
It's rushing down on me,the pain is just too much
It's overwhelming me,so much that I can't breath
I can't scream,I'm choking on the darkness
I can't move,it's holding me back and pulling me down into
the darkness
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:08 am
~Friendship-Best Friend~
You're my best friend,you've always been there for me.
You cheer me up when I'm feeling sad.
I could never stay mad at you for very long,all I want is your happiness.
I'll never stand in you way,just as you would never stand in mine.
I care about you like would a brother,a cousin,a best friend,which you already are.
I'll be the light,your best friend,keeping the darkness at bay.
Never letting you down,holding you as the light(me),destroys all that would ruin our friendship.
~For my bestfriend,Sise~
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:13 am
~Light Vs. Darkness~
The light is shining in this world of darkness.
I can see it staring back at my,it's useless.
It's just a figment of my imagination.
I must be going crazy,it's like a celebration.
What's that I'm seeing,it must be the light.
Not at all my imagination,I gotta stand up and fight.
Gotta stand up and fight in this world of darkness.
I can see the light,it's no longer useless.
All around me,the light becomes you as you standby my side in this fight.
It's over now,all that's left is me and you,my shining light.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:16 am
I'm lost in the endless sea of darkness.
But I'm not alone,you're here with me.
You're holding me tight,never letting go.
My arms wrapped around you,lost in your eyes.
Never noticing that we're floating,flying
through the dark and into the light.
You'll never let me go,you're always with me
because our love never fades,it goes anywhere.
I know that I'll never be alone,because
you're always there,always in my heart,
my mind,and my soul.
You're the shining light,my love,you cast
away the darkness that tries to destroy our love.
I'll fight by your side until the very end,we'll always
be together,I'll never let you go.
I love you more than anything,and I know in my
heart that you feel the same.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:57 am
Those are beautiful! They aren't all that dark either, just slightly sad. I loved the way you use imagery, and your phrasing is beautiful.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:10 am
Thanks you so much. xd Yeah,I guess.Thankies.^_^
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 6:18 am
~Dream~
Sitting in a forest all alone,wind whipping through the trees.
My hair tie comes undone,as the wind blows,
my hair sways gently around my face,caressing
me just as you will soon do.
Blinking,I suddenly find myself in a beautiful meadow
full of flowers in full bloom.
Standing up,laughing,I start to twirl around barefoot with the
wind blowing and the flowers tickling my feet and face
as they fly all around me like a mini tornado.
As I stop to catch my breath,I notice that
the sun is setting.
It's gorgeous with it's orange,red,yellow,an pink hues.
It takes my breath away.
I hear a masculine laugh from behind me,
as strong arms wrap around my waist.
You whisper in my ear,telling me that you
love me your hot breath on my neck sending
shivers of pleasure up my spine.
As we lay down gently on the grass,the wind blows,
making my hair sway between us as time seems to stop,
all we can hear is each others heartbeats.
I tell you I love you as you kiss me softly,
licking my lips,begging me to open up to you.
Moaning,I open my mouth to your loving demand.
Our tongues battle for dominance,
exploring every inch of our mouths.
My hands fisted in your hair,breakign the kiss to nibble on your neck,
as your right hand explores every inch of my body
while the rests in the grass next to my head.
You trail your hand gently down my arm,
kissing me harder than before,hungry for more.
~By:Naughtygirl_333/Shannon 2/26/07~
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:59 pm
Shannon, these poems are excellent. Aria was right about the phrasing, you make pictures with your words. I really love them, Shannon.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:20 am
Thank you both.I'm really glad you guys like them.I'll try to post more.
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