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 Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:12 am
A little while back, I went through a very dark phase. I know some of you probably won't care to listen... cry ... but here's what I got out of it. I'll be working on dredging up my stories, artwork, and attempts at poetry from the vaults of my closet and posting them here... please, i want criticism, but be kind. This was a hard time for me. Some of it never completely left my heart.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:14 am
"Traitor"
She stands by your side by day,
joking, laughing,
acting as a friend.
She shares her secrets with you, and you with her.
Only acting.
Then, she turns,
a knife in your back.
Lies, betrayal,
taking what she wants,
and what you want.
Bleeding, dying inside,
they only scatter the shards of your shattered heart.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:21 pm
Here's a little something I drew up. Sorry if it's a little big:  Basicaly, it's a curse I put on my friend after she BETRAYED ME! scream
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:52 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:17 am
The poem, or the curse? Either way, thanks. xd Pain gives me my best inspiration,sometimes... emo
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:50 am
Whoa. o.o
Well, firstly, I don't want to offend you. I know exactly what you're going through.
But the truth is, remaining angry won't get you anywhere.
We all betray other people, even in the smallest way imaginable.
I don't know why anyone would betray another just for betrayal's own sake.
And you should also keep in mind that "those who curse will be cursed."
However,
"those who bless will also be blessed."
So.
Onto the works.
The poem itself is a bit cliche, but I know that's not what you want to hear. It's good to get your feelings down on paper.
It's not something I would submit in a competition, though.
The sketch is good, I like it.
Not as a curse, of course, but just on its own.
It looks cool.
@_@;;
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:57 pm
Thanks. I know my poetry is crap. I can't rhyme, or put rhythm to words to save my life. redface Well, It's all better now (mostly). But I will put up some more stuff as soon as I find it... sweatdrop
Oh, and If you're wondering what happened, all will be explained when I put up what I'm looking for. But if you're wondering, just ask. xd
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:54 pm
Thats a really good drawing of a dragon. I love to write, seeing as I am writing a book. If you like Fantasy/action/adventure/magical/romance/fictions
lol I really like my book so far and for now I have writiner's block but I hope to break through that and move on the finish my book. You should check it out, it is within the first couple entries of my journal. I know how you feel and I really hope you see that if you can get past the negative and focus on the posative then you will really find your self more happy. I am sorry, your probably like "Why the heck are people giving me advice when I really wanted to just have a writing forum," Well I will give you one of my poems in my next entry okay?
BYE
lylas919
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:07 am
Eloquence, flowing
It can be merry, or sad
Eloquence, flowing
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