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TheRiversDepths

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:48 pm


Basic

About contest: this contest is to test your skills for the darkerside of poetry(while not breaking anyrules.) I will not give you pictures to go by for I think it limits creativity. I honestly don't enjoy happy upbeat poems(no offence to anyone) so if you want to win this contest you must write a poem with sad or depressing mood. It could also be a what if poem, as in would the cat still be alive if her owner didn't leave the door open. (if your confused on a what if poem message me and I'll give you an example)

The deadline: If you want to enter you must do so before october, 13th. I will be judging the poems on that day. I wont exept any poems after this date.

To enter: I' to nice to charge an entry fee ^^ lucky you. You must post your poem here then PM it to me right away IF YOU ARE NOT A MEMBER OF The Guild of Competitive Writers then you cannot post, so only send the poem to me and I will post it on here for you.

PRIZES: 1st place winner will earn 500, 2nd 400, 3rd 300 sorry I'm a poor person and paying the winners myself so sorry if your not happy with prizes.

NOTE: ANYONE WHO DOSE NOT POST THERE POEM HERE AND PM'S IT TO ME WILL BE DISQUALIFIED YOU MUST DO BOTH NOT ONE OR THE OTHER! UNLESS YOU ARE NOT A MEMBER OF The Guild of Competitive Writers

RULES


1. folow the rules from Gaia's main forums and This Guilds main rules as well.

2. The poem you submit must be one of the moods I discribed above in the about section. If it is not you will be disqualified.

3. No spamming or bumping!

4. If you have questions message me don't post the question on the contest.

5. No cussing, no rape or sexual acts may be preformed directly onto the poem.

6. You do not have to join the guild to enter this contest athough It is preffered by me and the forum owner, Annetia. (If you have questions about the guild contact Annetia)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:49 pm


WINNER CIRCLE

Winners are in blue. Please dont get angry with what place you are in >,< If you end up flaming me I will reject any future entries from you. all money will be traded tommarow.

1st place is icepriestess375 with Waiting for You
2nd place is Koishii No Kotonashi with Colors unwanted
3rd is Pouring_Blood_In_My_Heart with Bleeding moon

4th place is Sylvesterine with emptyness
5th is SavagePhase with face of stone
6th is Nisora with So Jealousy May Disipate
7th place is luvinghim with gone

TheRiversDepths


TheRiversDepths

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:51 pm


CONTESTANTS
1. Nisora
2. Koishii No Kotonashi
3. Sylvesterine
4. Pouring_Blood_In_My_Heart
5. luvinghim
6. SavagePhase
7. icepriestess375

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EVERYONE WHO GETS DISQUALIFIED WILL END UP HERE!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 2:49 pm


Nisora

So Jealousy May Disipate

hands held high above me -
garbage bound with a heavy head
i'm pleading, take this restraint;
wind it around my neck instead.
miserable, writhing, crying,
i'd sell myself for anything
to compliment my pain
with something physical.

carve over ribs with a seringe
so spite can trickle out from me
and jealousy may disipate.

my wounds are the only things
that cared enough for me
to stay since the beginning.
I'll keep telling myself that
they are the reason
it hurts so bad to breathe.
I'll keep telling myself that
they are the reason
it hurts so bad to live on,
and on, and on, and on
and I can't believe that nobody
has used their fists and pumbled me
into a state of sedated submission.
make. me. bleed.
it's not cruelty if i'm willing,
think of it more as a mercy beating
i'm craving the sensation of injury
so hurry and let your fury fly
while i'm willing to take it.!

TheRiversDepths


Cyrviana

PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:10 pm


Colors Unwanted
Virginia Johnson

Bright yellow sunshine
forest green hedges
brick of multicolor
Let color fade to black

Peacock feather bright
Rebellious raven hair
Golden ring symbolizing
Let color fade to black

Red fire apples
A mask of green and blue
A pale green rose dying
Let color fade to black

I don’t want to see these things
So let color fade to black
PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 8:33 am


I guess I suck at dark poetry, but I hope you may smile a litle.

Emptyness

My life is like an empty shell
Nothing ever seems to go well
Everyone I have loved
Is dead

I am just walking around
Like a shadow nowhere bound
Everything that meant something
Is gone

There are questions I don’t dare
And what are they all about
I don’t care
The battery of my MP3 player
Is out.

Sylvesterine
Crew


mythological irony

Blessed Lunatic

PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 2:07 pm


Yes! Depressing poems! My fav! I got a whole bunch of these, though sorry to say a bunch of them suck! But this one I likey a lot!

Bleeding Moon

In the wavering darkness,
In the utter blackness,
In the pitch black sky,
The moon is bleeding.
Crimson red blood
Flows down upon the earth.
Upon me
And my upturned face.
Staining my skin
Covering my tears
With its own shame.
So I cry out into the night
Searching for the one
Who will heal the moon.
But the moon is bleeding
And no one is there.
So I’m left here standing
All alone
In the darkest night.
My cheeks are stained
With tears and blood
But still no one has come.
So, I continue to pray
That one day
We will all be saved.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:28 pm


this is probably the first time i wrote a dark poem ...so i hope ya like it

Gone

i sat in the rain
waiting for you to come home

no sign of you
i feel incomplete

in the dark i look up in the sky
i felt wetness in my hair

i started to cry
drip by drip

are you in heaven
with chirping birds? i asked

i thought you said that you loved me
i thought you said you never leave me behind

i trusted you
i guess i was wrong

SleepiiHeadd


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 9:59 pm


Waiting for You

Deep in the depths
My heart aches
For you to return, to
Correct the mistakes

Where are you now?
Could you be near?
Are you thinking of me,
Through the unclear?

Come back to me
Through blood and gore
Return to me,
Lost soldier of war

But keep up the fight
Though I'm alone
Waiting for you
It chills to the bone

Desperate for feeling
Unsure of fate
Willing to cry out
The entire wait

But a letter came
Today in the mail
It said you were gone
Dead as a nail

So I'll join you now...
The wait was too much
Missing your warmth
At your hand's touch

After all,
I never could tell:
Was war worth it,
If they sent you to hell?

Although things were bad
And getting worse
Sending you to war
Was my eternal curse
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:48 pm


SavagePhase
Quote:
Face of Stone

My dearest child I come to see you now,
To view that pretty little face of yours.
It’s such a change from what it was back then,
And still I sit in bed and wonder how
Could anyone believe the lies of men,
They told me they would never make you soar.
The wounds were so much deeper, that I know.
I remember all the stories you had made,
While watching your demeanor start to fade,
As if it were just all some nasty show.
Dead blood would cake your face and stop the flow.
I knew then this was not something you made,
But you look much more beautiful in Jade,
There are no bruises on your face of stone.

TheRiversDepths


mythological irony

Blessed Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 11:54 am


Yes! I made a place! Delayed response, but I never checked. I'm too pessimistic and thought I lost! xp
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:38 am


Is it safe to move this to closed contests now?

Zenai_Metos
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