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skipper12321

PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:12 am


Emos are awesome. And they write awesome poetry. So now, we can all be like emos and write emo poems! Oh yeah! So get writing emos and poser emos!

PS. I have no idea what qualifies an emo poem, so just post any poems that aren't happy.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:17 am


Ooooo! I got one!

"It is"
The child said to its mother
Shunned for generations to come
"It is"
The slave said to its owner
The logic benefitted none

The child was an outcast
The slave beaten hard
The child spoke his mind
The slave belived in his heart

What has the world come to
To expell this knowledge wholly
They say it is irrelevant
Taking it slowly

It is
The knowledge from a lifetime of work
To be stumbled apon by those sound in mind
It is
A philosophers dream
Used among its kind
It is
A childs voice
Crying in the night
It is
Outcast of those
Who can't use it's might

skipper12321


RainStar12321
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:40 am


Bravo, Skip.

Here's one of Kiko's that I had saved from January:

I was loved like never before,
Then hurt beyond my wildest dreams.
I thought we had it all,
The love, no secrets, everlasting,
Then you broke my heart.

I walked into the room,
To see you with my friend.
I ran out,
You did not follow,
That was all settled then.

I saw you passing by,
But not a glance for me,
Just walking and talking,
Two things you can do.
About the only things.

Then you come back,
Begging and pleading,
For you and me again.
I know you will hurt me,
Deep inside,
But still I let you in,
What a fool am I.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 1:53 pm


I haven't written a poem in a month and a half, considering how happy I was. Well, sad and hurt again, so time for more poems.

Poinsettias
By Kiko

The blade dug deeper,
twisting and turning
into the abyss of her heart.

Poinsettias blossoming from her shirt,
schock spilled across her face
as a single tear from his eye
landed on her
heart.

She couldn't comprehend
how he could do it
yet she still loved him,
as he tore out the blade,
leaving her on the concrete
floor.

She lay there, broken,
but she had no choice but to love him.
Didn't he care enough to stop the pain?
Didn't he care enough to stop before it killed her?
Although, it didn't kill her, but he left her there for her to
die.

~1.20.08~

Please don't steal or copy any of my work, or I will report you. Also, these are very close to my heart.

kikomimo727
Vice Captain


kikomimo727
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:30 pm


Honestly, this poem is rather short. I felt like everything was fine, but apparently not. I wrote this while he was there, and we were at a friend's house. I never bothered to name it.



The candle's flame long extinguished,
the wax hardening, forming a shell,
so easily peeled away.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:42 pm


I wrote a small poem yesterday also, a couple minutes after the candle poem. I think you can tell that I wasn't very happy yesterday. Also unnamed.


Vines creeping around her heart,
enclosing it in a wall of solitude.

kikomimo727
Vice Captain

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