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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:53 pm


Alright. Here's a RP I recently got an Idea for. Lets hope its good!
PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:56 pm


Story


Many time in this world, we lose something that is dear to us. Whether it be an important item, a family airloom, or even a life of a loved one. What ever it may be, it always means the world to that person. Sometimes people will do crazy thing to get back what was lost.

They say there is someone, or something, out there. It has the power to return what was lost. Animate or inanimate. No one truly knows if it exist or not. They say it will only contact you by a mysteriously worded letter. All it ever says is, "I have what you want, seek me out, for I have retrieved it for you." The letter soon dissapears.

Now, think. What has been lost? What's most important? What are you willing to do for it? Where are you willing to go? Decide quickly. Time is not on your side. There are forces out there wanting to preserve the lost and keep them that way. They will do whatever it takes to stop you.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:02 pm


Setting


The World of Dyon. A place of many terrains. Inhabited by many monsters.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:09 pm


Profile Skeletons


[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Character name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b] (Pic or words. If pic, link it, so it doesn't mess with loading itme.)
[b]Bio/Personality:[/b]
[b]What you have lost:[/b]




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[b]Username: [/b]
[b]Character Name: [/b]
[b]Age: [/b]
[b]Race: [/b]
[b]Gender: [/b]
[b]Description: [/b]
[b]Bio/Personality: [/b]
[b]What evil do you control (Group of monsters or emotion):b[/b]



Please post profiles.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:16 pm


Profiles


Username: Thunderfang_Rentoraa
Character name: Ren Rotomaa
Age: 17
Race: Elemental (Ice)
Gender: Male
Description: (I'll put it later.)
Bio/Personality: Ren's an enigma. He can be a real jerk, or a real friend. He doesn't like to get involved with people to much. He lost the life of his girlfriend, Orchid, in a tragic accident, that he doesnt like to talk about.
What you have lost: The life of his girlfriend, Orchid.


Username:watchdaw2g77
Character name:Adalia
Age: 18
Race: Fallen Angel
Gender:Female
Description:Adalia's Pic
Bio/Personality: Adalia is a smart, quiet girl who doesn't like to be told what to do. Because of this she had gotten into a relationship with a Human which was forbidden by her family and because of this she was cast out of her family and left with nothing...including Dero, whose memories of her were forgotten. Now, Adalia hopes to find him and restore their relationship before it's too late.
What you have lost: Dero



Username: AileeNami
Character name: Arlette Dufour
Age: 23
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Description: Arlette
Bio/Personality: Arlette is a chef fresh out of culinary college, always ready to greet the town children with a cookie and a smile after school. She lives in France, and cannot understand why people find it odd that she, an ex-American, would be so nice to children for no reason. What people don't know is that she was abused as a child, and never had a childhood of her own. The only things she could take comfort in during the long nights alone were her self-made meals and her doll, the only one who would listen to her.
What she has lost: Her childhood doll, May.
(Edit: Translations for Arlette's French are in parentheses. If having the French there bugs people too much, I will stop.)



Username: -_-_-Paula Koala-_-_-
Character Name: Triste (Sad in spanish, nifty huh?)
Age: 402 appears 20
Race: Demon
Gender: Male
Description:
Demon:Demon Triste
Human:Human Triste
Bio/Personality: He has a great and long past, he has existed in the world as a controller of Sadness and manipulation of peoples depression often driving them crazy. He has no other emotion but that
What evil do you control (Group of monsters or emotion): Sadness




Username: Chief Johnny Thirteen
Character Name: The Retriever
Age: Older than the Earth
Race: Unknown
Gender: Unspecified
Description: Appears different to everyone who seeks him out.
Bio/Personality: Retrieves lost items in return for those foolish enough to seek him out.
What evil: The darkest thoughts


Username: Zan_Cloud
Character Name: Beast
Age: Well over the amount that any living thing should live. (A long time)
Race: Beast-Creature/Human
Gender: Male
Description: A grizzly beast in human form. Takes human form.
Bio/Personality: An evil force that is a fierce fighter. Controls the beast creatures and they do as he wants.
What evil do you control (Group of monsters or emotion) Controls the beast monsters of the surrounding area.


Username: Berzul
Character Name: Jake Morin
Age: ???
Race: Pygme Dragon
Gender: Male
Description: Jake... about that, yet only 2 and a half feet high.
Bio/Personality: Jacob (He perfers to be called Jake) is one of the world's older dragons. He pretty much hates all other species for destroying the world that he loves, so he plays havoc with them by stealing whatever he can. He loves solitude and can't stand working with others. He was an outcast to other dragons because of his side and the fact that he cannot breathe fire, instead his body secretes a poison through his spikes and teeth.
Evil Controlled: Small shadow demons (only the ones with an IQ lower then 70)


Username:magicwielder
Character name:Fayt Aburame
Age:15
Race:Elemental(electricity)
Gender:male
Description: Fayt Aburame
Bio/Personality:Fayt is semi quiet but when involved in a conversation with friends it's kinda hard to get him to shut up.Fayt lives alone since his parents died in an accident when he was very young so he doesn't remember them at all.Fayt once had a dog that meant the universe to him but one day that dog got shot by robbers that were trying to brake into a neighbors house.The lose of the dog sent Fayt into depression and made him quiet and unfriendly but around friends he can get like his old self temporaily.Once Fayt got the letter saying that what he had lost was recovered he set out to get the dog back.Fayt will do anything to get what he lost restored to him.
What you have lost: Fayt's dog Shino.



Username: retarded_kid
Character name: Bane Cannon
Age: 134
Race: Shapeshifter
Gender: male
Description: http://s17.photobucket.com/albums/b52/caunster/?action=view¤t=kamuro01_kal.jpg
Bio/Personality: Since the lose of his loving family Bane has lost respect for elementals who were responsible for their disappearance. Bane is mostly a kind man even though his hate for elementals can get the better of him, He's usaully always their for friends. Bane has been searching for about 50 years for his family once receiving the letter from the Retriever, and so far has had no luck.
What you have lost: His loving wife Kristy and his darling children Tanya, and Dante
PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:23 pm


Ren sat there confused. "Retrieved it for me?" He wondered what is was. "What I lost, something I want....." Ren wasn't sure what to think. He thought and thought and thought and thought, but still nothing. He tossed the letter on his bed and went to a dresser, where a picture of a girl sat. "Orchid.....what does this mean? A letter out of nowhere, then that weird message." Suddenly he had it. "Orchid....." He said quietly. Ren was almost brought to tears. He had heard tales of things like this. A mysterious letter, a retriever, and what was lost being returned. A determined look came across Rens face. "For you Orchid, I'll go to the ends of the Earth."

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:34 am


Username:watchdaw2g77
Character name:Adalia
Age: 18
Race: Fallen Angel
Gender:Female
Description:Adalia's Pic
Bio/Personality: Adalia is a smart, quiet girl who doesn't like to be told what to do. Because of this she had gotten into a relationship with a Human which was forbidden by her family and because of this she was cast out of her family and left with nothing...including Dero, whose memories of her were forgotten. Now, Adalia hopes to find him and restore their relationship before it's too late.
What you have lost: Dero
PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 12:43 pm


Adalia read the letter again quickly before setting it down on the cafe's rickety table. 'Does this mean that I'm able to get him back?' she thought, closing her eyes as memories of him clouded her brain.

"okay." she said, putting the envelope in her jacket pocket and standing up. Next she withdrew a few crumpled dollars and tossed them on the table, before turning around and retreating out the door, the bell jingling as she left.

She could remember as if it were yesterday, her parents and her arguing over her fobidding romance with a human. Adalia pleaded with them to let her stay with him, but to no avail.

"Please Father....he has no idea about me...our family. I hide my secret well, I promise you." she begged.

"I don't want to hear it!" Adalia's Father yelled, " A filthy human contaminating my daughter...I simply will not have it!"

"But...I love him!" she blurted out, eyes shining with tears.

"Enough...I hearby banish and disown you! Never return to us, is that clear?" he said, outraged.

"Father, I..."

"You are not my daughter anymore...leave here at once!" he demanded, nodding to the guard to escort Adalia out of the large throne room.

Adalia tried to stuggle against them, but it was no use and she was left alone, the slamming door echoing around her.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 1:46 pm


Ren knew what he had to do. He packed his stuff. Some food, a canteen, and Orchid's picture. He didn't know where to go, but he knew he had to. Ren didn't need to tell anyone that he was going or where. He was an orphan living on his own.

He wondered if anyone would miss him. Orchid had been the only one to ever love him, and now she was gone. Ren had nothing else to stay for; that was his final decision. It seemed rash to him at first, but soon disregarded that thought. All he cared about now, was taking care of Orchid.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:20 pm


Username: AileeNami
Character name: Arlette Dufour
Age: 23
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Description: Arlette
Bio/Personality: Arlette is a chef fresh out of culinary college, always ready to greet the town children with a cookie and a smile after school. She lives in France, and cannot understand why people find it odd that she, an ex-American, would be so nice to children for no reason. What people don't know is that she was abused as a child, and never had a childhood of her own. The only things she could take comfort in during the long nights alone were her self-made meals and her doll, the only one who would listen to her.
What she has lost: Her childhood doll, May.
(Edit: Translations for Arlette's French are in parentheses. If having the French there bugs people too much, I will stop.)

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:27 pm


Arlette heard the music from her alarm clock. 6 AM, time to wake up and start the day.

"Bon matin, ma cherie," she said to her little puppy, Tamlin, as she got ready to open her bakery downstairs. "Je t'aime." ((Good morning, my dear. I love you.))

Tying her apron around her waist as she descended the stairs from her loft to the bakery, she heated up the ovens and was about to begin making cake batter when she noticed that the little silver flag on her mailbox was up. A letter? From who?

Leaving her baking unattended, she left the house and opened the mailbox. Just as soon as she read the letter, it was gone from her hands. Found... what? May? she thought, her mind slipping in and out of French. Je'n sais pas... but if I don't... je ne peut pas... Tamlin, and the bakery... ((I don't know... I can't...))
PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 2:19 pm


Ren left his little one room appartment that he had in the city. It wasn't much and leaving it behind was worth it. He set out to the outskirts of the city. He brought along his main weapon, a chain. He knew that the world of Dyon was inhabited by hostile creatures, so he had to protect himself somehow. Ren wondered where his adventure would lead him. But where ever it was to, he hopped it would all lead to Orchid.

(( I don't think the french will be a problem. Just a little extra reading, and that never hurt anyone.

I think the most annoying thing is Ren's obsession over Orchid. He's like a love sick little puppy! XP))

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:15 pm


((*gasp* @_o OH FUZZY SOCKS! I forgot we're not on Earth! And I put myself in France! I'm sorry! crying I will fix it somehow!))

Woof! woof! woof! Tamlin hopped down the stairs, nose in the air. He sniffed, following his nose towards the cake batter on the counter. Being an exceptionally small puppy, he had no hopes of reaching it.

"Oh, Tamlin. Stop fretting, I'll feed you..." Arlette poured out a small measure of puppy food, setting it on the ground for Tamlin to eat. What am I to do? Where is this Dyon? Is that where I am to find this stranger with May?

"Bon matin, Arlette!" the neighbors called. "C'est l'anniversaire de petit Julien aujourd'hui!" ((Good morning, Arlette! It's little Julien's birthday today!))

"Je sais," Arlette replied. "Je fait son gâteau maintenant..." ((I know. I'm making his cake now.))

Arlette went back inside to finish making Julien's cake, pondering to herself.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 1:20 pm


When he arrived at the outskirts, he wondered where he was supposed to go next. Ren had no idea what lie beyond the outskirt. Orchid and him had always stayed close but far enough to be alone. He walked along and was attacked by these small rabbit like creatures. Ren waved his hand by them and they were frozen solid. He quickly kicked them and they shattered. "Scum." He muttered as he continued to walk.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:17 pm


((Okay, I'm getting confused. I'm starting to get the feeling already that this RP is a tad futile since we don't have someone acting as the Retriever or the evil force, whatever that may be.

It just feels too easy, since we have to create the problems ourselves. There's no one to direct us to wherever we're going, and no one to create any specific obstacles for each of us to individually overcome. Does that make sense? There's no one to stop us from automatic success, no one to fight against. There are monsters, sure, but monsters are obviously not the problem, as you've demonstrated.

Also: Will there be a point in time when all our characters meet up? Will we be able to interact with each other, or are we all on our own?

Sorry, that was kinda rant-y...))
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