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 Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:41 pm
The basics is to follow this tutorial:
http://glittercandy.deviantart.com/art/Mary-Sue-Tutorial-48101443
then when that's done, I'm sure someone will help us along. Maybe they'll ask questions or something.
So here's me going through the tutorial:
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Step 1: Female, since I am
Step 2: Appearance
Hair
Her hair is a curly golden waterfall-like cascade, with natural red, orange, yellow, blue, indigo, and violet highlights. She can also change her hair colour at will.
Eyes
Her left eye is normally blue and her right eye is normally hazel. However, they change colour according to her moods, and she has the power to change them at will. They glitter like gems and she can see in the dark. Her eyes emit ambient lighting and she can use them to create exciting laser shows, using the colours of her hair.
Body and diet
She has the perfect body despite gorging on junk food and not exercising. She's the greatest fighter ever!
Nails
Her nails are unbreakable, but she still manages to keep them short.
Don't ever break. Thanks to her nails, she has the power over all the elements. Let's ignore the whole unstable thing.
Race
She's half elf, half kitune, half drow, half unicorn, half vampire and half human.
Clothes
The most fashionable ones, ever, DUH!
Step 3: Skills
She's the best ever at everything, duh!
Step 4: Background
Here's her tragic past:
A week after she was born, a very tragic past ensued. On Monday, her father died. On Tuesday, her mother died. On Wednesday, her eldest brother died. On Thursday, her eldest sister died. On Friday, her youngest brother died. On Saturday, her youngest sister died. On Sunday, her twin sister died.
She's secretly the queen of the unicorns but doesn't know this, since like all mary-sues good characters, she has the trendy A-word.
She's also rich beyond imagination.
Despite her tragic past, she is a happy, healthy and well-adjusted person.
Step 5: Personality
She has the best ever personality. To make her realistic, however, she needs flaws.
As an MS, she can't have proper flaws. Thus, I propose the following:
-Everyone hates her because she's a hybrid
-Everyone hates her because they're jealous
-Her guardians hate her and abuse her. That's a flaw, right?
Step 6:name
Her name is:
Sa'pp'hi're'-Bl'ue'-Se'pt'em'be'r-K'aw'ia'ii'-Ch'oc'ol'at'e-O'ra'ng'e-S'no'wd'ro'p-T'in'fo'il'-Cu'te'
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And now it's your turn!
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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 6:45 am
Gender: Male
Hair: It changes colour like oil on water because I'm magic, and can grow any length at will.
Eyes: One pure white and the other pure black. They can pop out to walk around and spy by themselves, in which case they turn invisible. They also control night and day (hence the colours, duh).
Body: Toned, without working out. Also, with angels wings that can be made to disappear at will.
Nails: Can grow over the entire hand to form a pair of magical gauntlets.
Birthmarks: One in the shape of a dragon on his back between his wings. It can turn into a real dragon when he is in danger.
Age: 666 (but looks 18 )
Race: Half-angel/vampire/dragon/fairy.
Clothes: Magic tunic with leather trousers that act like armour and cannot be damaged, apart from when he wants to tear them in which case he can make a diamond hard rope out of them.
Skills: Good at everything due to a magic amulet that is invisible so no-one can steal it. Also, can speak ANY language, but is super-amazing at Japanese, and is also super-amazing at ninja skills.
Bio: Secretly a ninja who was raised by an evil queen and king who he killed, only to find out later that they were the people who killed his real ninja parents, who were called Sasuke and Sakura, and ruled all of Japan.
Personality: Tough and kind, everyone likes him even if he has in the past foiled their evil plans. Likes poking kids with sticks cause it kawaii lol
Name: Lord Darkglamour~desu
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Questionable Autobiographer
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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:01 pm
Gender: Female
Hair: Big and buoyant, despite no hair spray in sight! Also, contains all colors including octarine!
Eyes: Her eyes can imitate any luster of any gem, and have an unusually high refraction number, thus having shining eyes all the time, even in pitch black!
Body: She's chestacular and isn't afraid to show it! Her body is perfectly formed and she never exercises because she is magic.
Nails: Hers are like gems, glittering and pretty but ready to cut through anything! She's just that great!
Also, her skin is is full of birthmarks! Keeping with the gem theme here, they're all various colors and can do cool magic stuff!
Age: Went to school with dirt, but looks a flirtatious 16! OMG!
Race: She's half-pixie, half-elf, half-dinosaur, half-volcano goddess, half-alien, half-gem, half-chest, half-human, and all woman (despite looking 16)!
Clothes: The magical chain-wear bustier and bikini bottom that protects her from everything! Also, an awesome cape that never gets stuck on anything ever!
Skills: Can construct gems from anything, can heal automatically in the off-chance that her magic outfit doesn't protect her, can speak any language after hearing only 3 words of it, and is totally a samurai-ninja-knight-CIA worker-type warrior. She can use any weapon if she's seen it. Has the ability to use and make up spells on the spot that never backfire. She also bakes a damn good pie.
Bio: Her parents (supposedly) died in a large battle to end all evil and ugly in the world. Their bodies were never found, so our heroine never knew what they looked like. Later on, she discovers that her parents are alive and never died, they just pretended so that she could be raised by various people around the globe. Turns out her parents are actually the emperor and empress of the whole universe! Cool, huh? And that she will now rule because she is so full of goodness and light and other sweet things.
Personality: Although she has slain many people and robbed a good deal more, these were for the greater good, thus a good thing and not evil. Everyone loves her for doing these, except those silly jealous people who will meet their death for the good of the universe, right?
Name: Empress Kitty Gem Shiny Kiriban Neko Spirit Rainbow Flirty Emerald! Yeah!
...this was too much fun.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:06 am
Warn your warmth to turn away
Here it's December every day
Gender: Female
Hair: Her hair is brown (Rachel, you fail! Try again!) bright blue and she always wears it up in pigtails. It has bright pink tips at the ends of it. And no matter what she wears, her hair never seems mismatched or weird. It always looks combed, of course. And she also has cat ears on top of her head.
Eyes: Her right eye is pink and her left eye is blue. But her pink eye will turn to florescent optic yellow when she is angry. Her angry glare can pierce into souls.
Body: Even though she is young, she has a decent chest. She has a toned tummy because she is a totally 1337 fighter. She should be bulimic judging by all of the food she eats compared to her minuscule weight. But she isn't!
Nails: Her nails are so strong, they scratch diamonds. They can turn to cat-like claws that can rip out almost any vital organ in seconds.
Birthmarks: She has two that are shaped like fairy-wings on her backs. They can turn into real wings when she awakens her secret powers. She also has two birthmarks on her hands that can turn anyone into a pile of candy when she touches them when her powers are activated.
Age: 11,010,010 (OMG, binary code!) but she looks 13. It's not magic, it's because she's from another planet. Duh!
Race: Half alien, half fairy, half elf, half cat (but she has no body fur, only kitty ears), half Japanese (because we all know Japanese people are demigods, not human), and half netherworld taco.
Clothes: She wears a pink, white, blue and gold dress. The dress is primarily white, with a pink and blue ruffled trim that seems to multiply in frills. She has white and gold arm warmers. And it always looks cute, never gets wrinkled, and is totally easy to fight in despite the fact that it's a dress that has more lace and ribbons than she has body mass.
Skills: She is a half-kitty, so she has all of the grace and agility of a cat. But she has none of the bad traits, like the need to eat dead mice. She can turn almost anything into sugar, she can fly, she has the most 1337 magic evar, she can wield a sword made out of sugar that will never dissolve. She is also a black belt. When her powers awaken, she can kill anything by poking it in the stomach and can fly and breathe underwater and wield the powers of earth, wind, fire, water and heart! And she does it without getting blue skin or green hair!
Bio: She is from an alien planet called Kyandi. But tragically, Kyandi is dying off because of a terrible monster taking over the land. This is because the king and queen died when she was four, leaving her to be the soul princess of the land. She was then sent to earth by a talking teddy-bear to go to Earth for help. But the evil forces from Kyandi followed her to Earth and wiped out her memories and put her in the body of a thirteen-year old girl (she's really in the form of a sexy 18 year-old girl). The evil forces then decided to kill her since her memories were gone. But a sexy man saved her and the talking teddy-bear gave her the ability to fight back by turning into an uber-kawaii super hero! But she is unaware of her tragic past, of course. Because who doesn't have amnesia? Remembering is so last year.
Personality: She is bright and cheery and ditzy and strong and cute and fun. She is also a crybaby sometimes but everyone loves her anyway. She is really smart and good at school, too.
Name: Miku Mitsune Neko Kawaii Ai Toyota Mitsubishi. But everyone calls her Miku. And she is so totally AZN! OMG, kawaiii!
That was awesome fun! Miku is the best evar! xD
Press your lips to the sculptures
And surely you'll stay
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:13 pm
Gender: Female
Hair: Long glossy ribbons of pure velvet night flow from her elegantly rounded scalp, twisting and curling like the midnight sky through the clouds! Interspersed through out the rich satin locks are fine silk strands of opalescent pink, glorious gold, deep blood-red, and purest ice white!
Eyes: Her liquid pools of utter beauty radiate the prism beams of the sunlight filtering through the spray of the tallest water falls. So dazzling are her eyes that the very stars at night are shamed by their twinkle!
Body: Her form is perfect in every way, with breasts soft as sable and succulent as fruit. Her minute waist expands in to full lush hips with a gently swelling posterior and creamy white thighs. Her pale ivory skin has only one mark, a pink heart on the upper portion of her slender arms.
Nails: Small half moons crowned with marble white tips.
Age: Timeless and ageless, she was perfect at 18 and her body never changed
Race: Shes a goddess, and an angel, and a fairie and a siren; her charm crosses all races.
Clothes: Her delicate body is clothed in robes of purest white silk, which floats loosely and ethereally about her perfect tiny feet
Skills: She's the perfect hero, the perfect wife, the perfect daughter, and the perfect saint. And a fantastic money-making porn star!
Bio: Given to a poor man with no children of his own, she shined and brought joy to the thousands of people in her hometown.
Personality: She is all that is good and sweet and divine.
Name: Fifi Trixibelle la Radiance de Victoria Ruby Bunni-Bear Koneko Hikari Himeko Leanna Dumbledore
It burns eek
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