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 Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:15 am
I'm generally a rhyming poet, and lately I've been attempting to include rhythm.
The subject matter varies greatly.
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:17 am
Sin went to visit College
To torture all the boys
They think they have a chance, but
They're really all just toys.
First was First, the easy one,
Who squirms at every tease.
He likes lollies, cats and Sin,
She brought him to his knees.
Then was Second, tough as nails,
But Sin is such a flirt,
He came in and said hello,
She unbuttoned his shirt.
Off he went, and there was Third,
He won't let Sin have her fun.
He resists, as he is the
Mature, responsible one.
'Who else?' Sin thinks to herself,
Looking around the room
'Ah yes,' she thinks, 'Fourth and last'
He feels impending doom.
But this young man has found out
How to tame little Sin,
Lucky he, to know such things,
At this game he can win.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:26 am
Very good. Now let's see some more. biggrin
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:57 pm
One last curtain call,
Before we're done it all,
Turn off the lights and go home.
But, wait, what's that sound?
I stop and turn around.
Don't want to face this all alone.
Don't let it end,
Don't let it end.
Don't make me be myself again.
I will be Juliet
And I will win him yet,
This is how love should be.
But this time we won't die,
We'll let Death pass us by.
I was never one for tragedy.
Don't let it end,
Don't let it end.
Don't wanna be myself again.
Don't let it end,
Don't let it end.
Don't make me face life again.
I will play any part
And learn it off by heart,
I'll never forget a line.
At the last curtain call,
I will smile and stand tall,
Forget the passage of time.
I'll play [insert several famous
female characters' names here]
I'll set up the lights,
Regardless of heights.
I'll run the whole show,
Or lay my head low.
Whichever you please.
- I'll even beg on my knees,
Just don't.
Don't.
No, Don't
Let it end.
...
Don't wanna have to face life again
'Cause this broken heart will not mend
It all turns out the same in the end
So please, let's play pretend
Don't make me be myself again.
Don't make me
Let it
All end.
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 11:10 pm
i like that last one, could be a good song =D
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 2:48 am
I was thinking the same thing. Its a lyrical feel to it.
Maybe Rinja will become a modern day Sappho. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 12:12 pm
quite possibly so Cap. I have to agree with the two above me.
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:02 am
Oui, c'est ça que j'ai pensé aussi.
Yeah, it was kinda my intent. I just lack any vocal skill or the patience to write music to it. ^^;
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 10:50 am
Well, you did a pretty good job of it then.
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 7:50 pm
~♠♣♥♦~
Those were real good!
They're missing titles, though.
And that bugs me so much.
I like to look at the titles, reflect on 'em, and then read the poem.
It's fun to guess at what the poem will be about, and it's also fun to look back at old memories the words may trigger.
So titles, perhaps?
<3
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 6:53 am
Usually I can come up with titles.. but those two, I dunno.
Sin... and Don't let it end, prolly.. but I dunno. I wouldn't really title them, most likely.
<3
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 5:26 am
Work In Progress Hunk o' Junk
Promise Ring A promise from me to you: A promise to stay true. Never to wander To always grow fonder Even when we disagree. To not let our love wane To avoid the mundane. Simply and solely - To be one another's wholly.
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