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baal101

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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:42 pm

tell me if you think its good
and give me suggestions on it

Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:43 pm

Can’t you see we are the same

My father was a rebel
They wouldn’t leave him be
He was trapped like a dog
And they couldn’t set him free
That’s why I hate him
For doing the same to me!

Chorus: why can’t he see!
He is exactly like me!
They could not control him
How does he think he’ll do it to me!

He fought his parents
And begged them to let him free
But he does what they did
I laugh when he tries it on me
What would happen if we didn’t disagree!

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~zzang~
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:47 am

Well... I'm not one for emo music but that sounds like it could sell.

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:55 pm

~zzang~

Well... I'm not one for emo music but that sounds like it could sell.

well aren't u nice rolleyes

Emarzec
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~zzang~
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:54 am

Hey I was honest and didn't attack him. I basically said it's good but not my cup o' tea.

Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:59 am

tea is nasty. i have to load mine with sugar

Emarzec
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baal101

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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 8:05 pm

dont stat with the sugar thing again

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:43 pm

k, NOODLES ARE GOOD!!!! and your sounds good, i will need to hear the tune cause that could mess it up

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