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 Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:38 pm
...So here! Some other bits of art I've done in the past while. XD Tell me what you think, criticism is appreciated!   
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 4:43 am
oh, first i must say very nice biggrin
now lemme butcher them with tiny litttle things that are wrong xD
1) the first one is good, but when you get it on the comp, try to clear a little white in his mouth for his teeth and whatnot. just lighten the mouth up so you see the teeth. also, even if guys and especially dark elves have skinny bodies, gice the waist below the belt a bit of an outstretch. robes naturally go out a little, so just make that part a little wider. and for the hands, very nice, i like them ^-^ bu if you can make it good, drae the muscle from the thumb, the one that extends a ways from the palm.. if you don't know what i mean i can give you a pic or something. and for his face, near line of his motuh, put a little depth into that. it's really good, but it's too smooth and neads a little more character.
2)this one is really good! but, the dude is waaaay to skinny, for any normal human, that is. make him just a little bit...fuller i think is the word. that and make his neck a little smaller to fit his body type. the position is really 1337 so congrats for that. the katanas are good. but on the hand where you can see fingers, make his thumb go over them and try to add that muscle that breaks from the thumbs. i love his freaking sandals and the way his rob-cape thing (forgive my un-knowledge of the word) sways in the movement. very nice the muscles are good, somethign i can't draw right, and most the other things are good. yay i like it!
3.) i like his eye :0 that is the first thing i wanna say. it caught my atention in the second and i foudn my6self staring at it xD i really like the way the armor intertwines, too. but his waist is just a little too skinny. just a little bit. because of that the legs are a little skinny for his muscle build. you did the thumb on the hand holding the sword good. you got it over the other fingers with that little swerve of muscle from it. i likie *touches the pic* try to put more hair covering over the side of his face where you can't see his eye, cuz in that position you'd see just a little bit of it. everything else looks good ^-^
you're getting 1337 sephy, stop getting better than me! lol jk. i'm gonna have to work extra hard to catch up now. my few latest, which i might show sometimes, aren't as good as yours are.
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:59 pm
Yup, you're right. XD
Everything you said is right. And very much appreciated!
Right now, you're realistically the driving force of my improving drawing.
1) The teeth thing on the first one was quite a biggy. I noticed that when it was on paper and thought, oh well, rough enough... XD (A bad habit of mine.)
The hips are right too. I didn't notice until you said so, but when you did, it was quite obvious. Will remember that for future for sure.
The had muscle would've looked good too. (Never thought of it either XD)
2) Yeah, he is too skinny. lol
I didn't think he looked quite right. XD
3) I did think his legs looked too small, but I didn't really see why because preportion wise, they were the right length. (roughly)
But when you raised the hips point, that solved the problem.
Also, yours are great!
The one in your sig looks good.
The look on the face of the dude on the right looks really good. Very well captured!
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 5:03 am
lol, side veiws are my killers. i had to redraw the faces literally over 20 times to get it right >.<
and i still couldn't get my avi's face right. i outlined too hard and messed it up xD
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Asmusei -Faceless Hunter-
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:31 am
KuraiKozo lol, side veiws are my killers. i had to redraw the faces literally over 20 times to get it right >.< and i still couldn't get my avi's face right. i outlined too hard and messed it up xD Heh, profile views of people's faces is about the only thing I can draw. sweatdrop ck: I love the third one the most; reminds me a lot of Morrowind and some of the Dark Elves that can kick almost anyone's a**! The second one I'm picky about; his left leg, the one pushing out behind him, isn't right; does your ankle really bend that far when you run? Also, the hip joint doesn't articulate that far back either; it's all in the knee. ((I love the two swords; great job!)) The top one, I'd only change his mouth to being closed and with a bit of a smirk. But, I can't draw worth crap, so don't take anything I just typed seriously.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:36 am
silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^
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Asmusei -Faceless Hunter-
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 2:41 pm
KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:50 pm
Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:15 am
HellsAbyss Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD Lol, I found that very funny... Really Asmusei, looking on those things, you're right. Thanks for all this stuff guys, it's definitely helping!
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 5:36 am
sephiroth-ck HellsAbyss Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD Lol, I found that very funny... Really Asmusei, looking on those things, you're right. Thanks for all this stuff guys, it's definitely helping! i never took classes ^-^ if i become great i want ppl to know i got that way on my own without anybody tutoring me.
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Asmusei -Faceless Hunter-
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:13 pm
KuraiKozo sephiroth-ck HellsAbyss Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD Lol, I found that very funny... Really Asmusei, looking on those things, you're right. Thanks for all this stuff guys, it's definitely helping! i never took classes ^-^ if i become great i want ppl to know i got that way on my own without anybody tutoring me. I think he may be talking more about Biology classes than art classes.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:33 am
Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo sephiroth-ck HellsAbyss Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo silly asmusei, you don't have to be a good drawer to know when you see a good drawing ^-^ Well, I still feel like a kid who has a hard time with simple biology and is having Quantum Physics described him... sweatdrop You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD Lol, I found that very funny... Really Asmusei, looking on those things, you're right. Thanks for all this stuff guys, it's definitely helping! i never took classes ^-^ if i become great i want ppl to know i got that way on my own without anybody tutoring me. I think he may be talking more about Biology classes than art classes. i'm in biology cuz i skipped science last year! so i'm in biology next year i got physiology biggrin
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Asmusei -Faceless Hunter-
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:21 pm
KuraiKozo Asmusei -Faceless Hunter- KuraiKozo sephiroth-ck HellsAbyss You are not alone my dear brother. lol I have yet to take those classes xDD Lol, I found that very funny... Really Asmusei, looking on those things, you're right. Thanks for all this stuff guys, it's definitely helping! i never took classes ^-^ if i become great i want ppl to know i got that way on my own without anybody tutoring me. I think he may be talking more about Biology classes than art classes. i'm in biology cuz i skipped science last year! so i'm in biology next year i got physiology biggrin Too bad they don't have an optional choice for science for Theoretical Sciences! I'd join that one immediately! Tunneling through space, Quantum Physics, Renaissance Cascades, I'm loving the sound of this kind of class!! mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:27 am
One girl I know is going to a school where math, english, etc are not compulsary and she is taking philosophy. eek
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Asmusei -Faceless Hunter-
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:01 pm
sephiroth-ck One girl I know is going to a school where math, english, etc are not compulsary and she is taking philosophy. eek Philosophy is dumb; it's just mental and theorizing bull about the way we humans comprehend the world. I like the sciences because it depends on itself completely and ignores the capabilities for comprehension that our minds can achieve.
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