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 Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:55 am
Roses are red, violets are blue, I haves some fantastic poems for you!! ok, ok, I know its corny, but i know we have alot of talent out there, so get your creative side going and post your work. Share what you know and give pointers. let your works be heard!!!
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:18 pm
true love
in ones life they try and expreanse the emotion called love but wat they dont now is that that same emotion is wat keeps then alive and kicking... for its love that powers the mind and heart.... not thoughts. many years ago i had my first experance with love and i thought its was the best thing ever... that was until i found out the trueth about the one i loved... and so my loving expeace left and i was alone once again. but after a while i tried to retreave that same lost emotion the one that really saved my life. the feeling of True Love. unlike regular love which can help u keep urself safe ... True love keeps u living . it keeps u safe and keeps u happy no matter wat happens... were regular love just makes u sad. there is alot of ppl out ther that think that love can only cause pain and they chose to stay away from it... but wat those ppl dont now is that as much as they try and keep it away the more it will draw u in and make u crazy ... i should now i was once one of those ppl and i tried for the longest time to stay away from this emotion calling it pethetic... but wat i didnt now is that even though i tried staying away from it i had it everywere around me jsut waiting for me to give in and to let go of the pain. and if u do keep love out well then u will always life ur life in not nowing wat life can really give u .... and that is True love and happyness. True Love is wat most ppl call a dream but its not ... for if u look hard enough and u alow other a chance one day u will find the feeling of True Love and one day u will also now wat it means to really be happy. so jsut think if u keep ur hole life bottled up then u will never see wat life can really do for u and u will never now the experence of wat of true happy can make of u. for wat is life really for but to be happy .. well i can tell u its not to stay away from love because it will one day get u and that will be one of the biggest steps u can ever take. so remember the wise words of the poet and dont ever try and stay away from love.. for if u do then i will never find out wat True Love and happyness is and u will never find out that love and happyness is wat keeps u from ppl.
by
Joseph R. Thompson
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:19 pm
the days of darkness
the days of darkness was loney and deppressing ... it was harsh and missurable. long ago they days used to not be so dark and deppressing ... but they ppl started hating others for they way they truly r ... and so those ppl starts gets worse ad worse about acting like something there not ... well i can tell u ... if it comes down to it ... i will never change ... and if someone dont like it ... well then i will jsut leave them alone and not speak to them .... not trying to hurt them or anything but if they cant except someone for who they truly r then they shouldnt even now them. or atleast that is wat i think..... i guess i will truly never be welcomed into this world because no one will truly want me to be me ... i jsut dont understand y ppl want u to act like something ur not ... its pethetic really .. but hey that is humans for u ... that shows that were really not well for this world ourselfs.
they darkend days r ruff for someone with darkness within them ... it is hard for someone like that to live life so well ... wanting to die some many time thinking that there not worthy for this world or thinking htat its wat everyone want.... but i woulndt now muchy about suicideds because i myself dont even have the guts to try ... i guess if i did this this world would be a lil better ... better from my mistakes and not having to worry aboyut me acting likle who i truly am ........ they say that something u have to live through pain a lil jsut to get through life itself ... well i dont think they mean the pain that i have gone through for the past 6 years ... but if they do ... well then i guess that. well i jsut dont now...its like ppl jsut dont want who i really and ... its sad really .. its hurts nowing that ppl dont want the real u but some imatation... but hey thats wat we do right ... we imatate others jsut to get higher in life.
wat is life for anyways... i now it cant be for use humans to be happy... there really isnt happyness in this world ... i mean if u r happy with imatating othere and trying to get in with the right crowd or something then that really isnt u ... they only way i would go into a crowd and talk to ppl that suposedly r my friends r if they except me for who i am and wat i can be... but there r very few that can really do that.
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:23 am
Um, I didn't start this thread but I thought I might add that it should be grammatically correct? If you care enough to write it, you should at least write it out, and other such things. It makes it was easier to read. It also presents it a lot better, and you will get better opinions.
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:28 am
Final Farewell
I cried out
But no one heard me
I wanted to shout
All I wanted was to be free
One Final Farewell
Time for this last goodbye
No longer to be imprisoned in this cell
A few moments till I shall fly
Life is too demanding
The time goes by too fast
Society is too judging
Everyone in their ways too set fast
Soon I shall leave this cage
I will leave this foul land
Full of pain and rage
I will take my final stand
Now I shall make that last cut
The blood wells, the pain is never ending
And now I see all other doors are shut
Never again to deal with pretending
The way is before me
A shining white light
Darkness envelopes me
And I give up the final fight
My Final Farewell
Time for this last goodbye
No longer imprisoned in that cell
Finally I can fly
Copyright: Fallon (FatedDestiny)
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:04 am
The Unborn
I am he who never sleeps, nor dreams… I am he who is always forgotten but is always in memories... not many no my name in this world … not many at all for there is no name for me... I am the unborn I was once alive but am not anymore so no one now who I am or what I am but that is what happens in life sometimes right …. I mean within ppl even though they might not now it... u ppl might call it bazaar or crazy but what we r is not like u beings on this world I am one of them that were but in a time not know of … so u most always learn beyond what u r and what possibility rout there and stop sitting there.
In the days of creation incidents happen that just twist the mind sometimes but not many understand it until experiencing it. Most of you would call what I am a lie or jut in my head … compare to my other way I act … but that is because we r 2 complete different ppl so plz … understand … we are who we are… don't underestimate who we are… because one day u too will understand how it feels if u let it down and u will not what to do.. But there will be those who will help... those who are there for you... those who understand what you are going through … so plz listen and open your mind to see what we are like compared to others… someday it will hit.
One day this world will understand us... and who we are... but never all of us
For there are so many and yet so little time. Once the spirit awakens there is only one thing but u must now what it is and how it is created onto this world... or how it was brought her.
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