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im a fiction writer. not the best, but i would like it if you would be a sounding board so i can please more people with me writings. i also write a little philisophy but that isnt to please you people.

here is something i wrote for a report. its basically some random thought about certain things. srry if it streches the page.
War
It is inevitable, it will always happen. No matter where you go it will happen there. It is war. There is no stopping it. You will have wars as long as there are two people left alive. Even if we get a central government for the whole planet you will have either uprisings or aliens will attack. No matter what those social scientists say, humanity will have wars till the end of its days. And wars are destructive to every one involved. America is borrowing lots of money putting us in extreme debt. And the whole war in Iraq was started for a stupid reason. There was never any concrete proof that Iraq had Weapons of Mass Destruction. Plus it wasn’t WMD’s that destroyed the Twin Towers , it was airplanes. And President Bush blamed Al-Quida, they didn’t say they did it. And Al-Quida is in Afghanistan , not Iraq .

God
If there was truly a god why would he allow people to die of cold, starvation, disease, and war? If there was a god wouldn’t there be something that allows us to know his existence? And in the bible it says God is all forgiving, but why didn’t he forgive the devil, Lucifer? Also isn’t the devil supposed to be the opposite of God in all ways? If so then the devil has to be a female cause God is male. Or if the devil is male then God is female. One thing that annoys me is that everyone thinks Jesus is a white, blonde haired, blue eyed, man. But because he grew up in the Middle East it was more likely that he was black, or Arabian. Either way Jesus wasn’t white with blonde hair and blue eyes.

Life
Too many people are concerned with the meaning of life. The problem is, is that there is none. Life exists because it does, there is no meaning to it. And a lot of people need a reason, which means too many people just sit around do nothing and think up reasons for life. Personally I think it’s because if they don’t have a reason for life then they don’t have a reason to live. It’s kind of dumb because even though I don’t think there is any meaning to life, I will still enjoy mine. Just like how some people need to believe in something higher then themselves (god), they need to believe that there is reason to live.



Death
Too many people are concerned, or afraid of death. We are all going to die anyway, so why be afraid? I think a reason why in almost every religion there is some kind of after life is because of that, not the only reason but one of them. In Christianity you go to heaven to be with God. In Islam it’s the same thing, except that God is called Allah. Hindu’s believe you go to be with their god. The Vikings went to a god depending on how they acted and died. Like if they died in battle they went to Valhalla with Odin to be hero’s when Ragnarok, the end of the world, came. I find that it’s kind of scary trying to envision nothingness for an afterlife. I have tried and that has to be about the only thing that scares me. So I see why and how people can come up with these afterlives because they are afraid of nothing.
Our Modern Life
I think life is too concerned with time, intelligence and many other things. I mean why does time matter so much? I think it just makes life more stressful. And school is a real pain because so many people are trying to find a group for themselves and keep everyone else out. I know that not everyone has the same interests, but why be such a jerk about it? I mean if I when out for some sport, first most people would doubt me and maybe call me names. And I happen to be a scapegoat quite often. If I mess up batting in base ball I will get blamed for screwing up the next guy because he had to work harder to pick up the slack. And that has happened to me. That’s why I don’t play baseball anymore. I got tired of being blamed for everything. And worse was that one of the kids dad was coach so he though he could get away with anything. No one is nice to another anymore. And I blame the high stress life that most people live. Add that to the fact that kindness isn’t taught anymore and you get real jerks who don’t grow up and stop being jerks.

They're all a little simple... but that's life. while I agree with some things you said, I dissagree with others.

light taker,
life breaker,
warrior with no past,
who left his future.

i came up with this walking my dog. a street lamp went out when i walked under it. funny how inspiration works.

I'm just gonna say something real quick, it dosnt really matter in the long run, as it's your story, so it's your lore... But Dwarves, are an earth bound being. They hail from the mountains and underground. They're the greatest smith's in any land. Metal work.

They dont reall use that much fire... like ever...

and the creation of the world bit dosnt really flow, maybe work on that a bit.

A bright orange moon shown down on a cold night. Dark running, light sucking shapes rushed through the field after their prey. The messenger ran on, his horse long left behind dead, stumbling in his attempts to reach the town just ahead. He trips on a gopher hole and the Lightrunners fall upon him, ripping his throat out in a fountain of blood. The people of Plemsberry hear the monsters howling in victory, and the messengers scream. They hide in their homes and cower under their blankets.

Far away a princess on the eve of her forced wedding prays for her messenger to get help from Prince Donovan. As she falls asleep she whispers “Ride like the wind Stephan…”

Acalard was preparing for war. The good King Moridrin was dead and his daughter was to be married to the killer, Koridirith. Now Koridirith was assembling the old Kings armies to conquer the world of Asgonard. The High King Bethlam, elected ruler of Asgonard, went missing in the night of Koridirith’s rise to power. The rest of the Twelve Rulers were to busy fighting over who would take the throne since High King Bethlam’s son, Prince Donovan, was missing with the High King’s armies on their march back to the capital, Ak-buthe. Thus Koridirith is free to assemble his armies and conquer the world.





It was raining again. The fat, heavy drops common around the east coast of Asgonard were falling thickly. Donovan could hardly see five feet away in the rain. He did not have to see to know were the tents of the Kings' Army were, all hodge-podge under trees for secrecy. They were marching towards Acalard, country of the murder king Koridirith. He noticed a dark shape walking towards his tent, as it came closer he could tell it was who he was waiting for in the middle of the woods.
“Ho, Father how are you today?”
“I am fine my son.” The High King replied sadly. The High King was once a great man in character and girth. Now the King Koridirith, how that title was bitter on the tongue, had cast a spell on him so that all saw the High Kings as a monster. One of Koridiriths monstrous Lightrunners, but without the abilities which left the King looking like a huge, wet, shaggy dog shoulder height.