Help me, please =)
So basically here's what I got,
So-and-so bent in and their gazes held like (BLANK), each man glaring at the other, cruelly.
At first I had 'held like magnets' but that made me make an ugly face so it didn't really fit for me.
I'd be up for a metaphor, too, I suppose but something like a simile to put in that blank spot would be really helpful. The sentence needs a ~zing~ (<- If that's such a thing).
You're thoughts or ideas??
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