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Okay...........This is the poem that I wrote for my story which you can't see because I'm too overprotective of it. But you can see the poem. Because.....................Um................My brain is dead and I felt like posting something compleltly random.

‘Six of them there will be.
Each must find their destiny.
Many a fist will fly and tear will fall
Before we reach the end of this all.
Our plans too often go astray
As they did on that fateful day
Cunning and cold
Strong and bold.
Smiling yet frowning
Living yet drowning
Shy but sweet
Young but elite
A dangerous mistake
Two equal paths to take
Against time one must race
Their worst fear another shall face
To the darkness one will go.
The last one, I don’t know.
Whichever side it does chose
That side will win; the other will lose.
Pass a day, pass a night
Then shall end the fight.’

And now for a link!
My deviantart page

I really liked it. The vocabulary you used glued my eyes to the screen until I was done reading. The only thing that I noticed was:
"The last one, I don’t know.
Whichever side it does chose"
I sat there looking at it for a minute, and I can see you were trying to make it rhyme. But I don't think it flowed very well, I can see that that line is extremly important and feel free to dismiss this, but I was thinking if for that line you went a little towards shakesperian language it might help the flow of things:

"The last one, I don't know.
Whichever side it hath chose"

Just thought I'd give my two cents smile Like I said, feel free to dismiss it lol