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A comfortable literate roleplay based on the series Bleach. Non-Stat based. 

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Kaore Ryu Akira

PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:29 pm


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Name: Seiya Ikitsurugi
Aliases/ Nicknames:
Age: 18 (at tod) 218 (now)
Seat: none
Height: 6'9
Weight: 189
Personality: easy-going and friendly but gets depressed quite easily by thoughts of love. Wish's for nothing more than to find a girlfriend.
Theme Song(s):
Physical Description: He has short black and red hair with one red eye and one purple eye. He has slightly tanned skin, no facial hair and if had found you look in his eyes you can see his depression deep within them. He finds the best way to ease his depression is to fight.

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Kaore Ryu. It looks like your average katana
Zanpaku-to Sword Type: combat
Zanpaku-to Element: fire/ice

Shikai: (Burn through a frozen hell) His sword becomes two swords one with a blue blade that controls fire by focusing his reitsu into the blade and swinging it he can send out a wave of fire that will light anything on fire, metal, rock, cloth or flesh. The other is a black blade that controls ice by focusing his reitsu into it and swings it he sends out spike made of ice, and if he stabs it into the ground he creates a massive wall of spikes erupt in front of him to protect him from most attacks.

Bankai: The blades vanish becoming black armor that covers his arms and hands giving him claws and connects between his shoulders where two six foot long necks sprout with dragon heads attached to each. The necks are connected by Reitsu so they cannot be severed and can extend anther twelve feet. The left Dragons head is blue and breathes black fire that burns at ten thousand degrees. The other is Black breathes a mist that is minus 300 fahrenheit degrees and freezes anything it touches into a solid block of ice. By focusing Reitsu into his claws he can either send a wave of fire at his enemy or raise a shield of ice that can stop fire. However the reitsu required is quite large so until he can control the amount of reitsu used in combat he can only use it for five minutes before it returns to shikai, also the armor is quite heavy causing his speed to suffer greatly.


Kidou: N/A
Bakudo:N/A
Hado: N/A
Other sad spells and such that don't fit into the Hadou and Bakudou category) N/A

Skills: excellent swordsman and hand-to-hand fighter. He has massive amounts of reistu.

Bio: He was born on Okinawa in 1791 and had a brother and a sister. He spent most of his youth aspiring to be a samurai as he worked on his families farm as well as trying to court a lovely girl that often visited from Edo. He was about to leave to Edo to start his life as a Samurai on his eighteenth birthday but a group of murderous pirates attacked and killed the girl from Edo before he could save her. He managed to protect his family long enough to get to safety before being cut down. He spent the next twenty years wandering the earth trying to find the girl before learning she was in the soul society and being sent there only to spend another twenty looking for her and getting in trouble in the rukongai before joining the academy. He spent most of his time beating people in the training yard or reading in his room. His teacher said that although he was friendly he had a short temper when people teased him about not being able to protect a simple girl. He excelled in speed, swordplay and hand to hand when he graduated and hopes to get into eleventh squad so he can fight all the time.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:39 pm



You are only allowed Kidou 1 - 10 in the beginning.

Please read over the rules.




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Aku Kami Kurayami
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Aku Kami Kurayami
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Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:52 pm



You are nowhere near done.
Explain your Shikai and Bankai more completely, list attacks for each, and make sure your Bankai has a clear weakness.
You don't get Shunpou till you are taught it.
Expand your bio out, make it longer and more in depth.
And please use correct grammar, this is a semi lit - literate guild.




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PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:32 am


ok I fixed it up a lot but its up to you people to tell me if its any good.

Kaore Ryu Akira


Aku Kami Kurayami
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Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:18 pm



First and foremost: Fix the grammar.
Second, what temperature system are you using? Kelvin? Fahrenheit? Celsius?
Thirdly, it isn't feasible to get -3000 degrees in any temperature system. After you specify a system, fix it to a feasible temperature.




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PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:30 pm


I fixed it up the best I could but you should know that I only got a B- in english.

Kaore Ryu Akira


Aku Kami Kurayami
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Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:44 pm



I got a C in my last highschool english course and I failed my last english class in college. Your point?
Besides that, you are accepted.




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