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Lord Ryu I-Eclipse-I

PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:00 pm


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Name: Ryu Shi

Aliases/ Nicknames: N/A

Age: 192 (appears 16

Seat razz ossibly Captain of squad 10

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 136

Personality: Ryu is stubborn, but will compensate

Theme Song(s): 'Guitar Vs. Piano' by Goukisan

Physical Description: (refer to Avi) Ryu has Color changing Eyes, He is 6'2", Has short-medium Black Hair, his hair covers his left eye sometimes.
He Wears the traditional Shinigami Uniform, his Captain's Haori is Black with with a white 10 Division symbol on his back, it is slung and tied over his right shoulder covering his right arm. Ryu has scars that cover the right side of his face. Ryu Wears his Zanpaktou either on his side, Strapped sideways on his back-waist, or on his back.

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description:
Name: Negai
Sealed Description: Brown Hilt, Black Wooded Blade with a carved in image of a dragon
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Zanpaku-to Sword Type: Bokken
Zanpaku-to Element: Wind with sealed and Shikai. Bankai is Darkness and Light.

Zanpaku-to Spirit: It takes the form of a Human size Black Dragon, when summoned can grow to a Dragons normal size.

Shikai: "Lead them into the Light, Negei!"
Once the command is said the the bokken transforms into a sword, The Hilt is Onyx Black, with 2 sharp ending points at the bottom. The Tsuba is in the shape of 4 dragon wings each on opposite sides of the blade is long each side is sharp. Ryu also gets a White wing behind his right shoulder.The Sheath is Black With Kanji written on both sides. One side reads "The Light Leads to Mercy.", the other side reads "The Darkness leads to Death". Once invoked Ryu can utter a second incantation that will give the Sword a power boost, "Lead them back into Darkness, Negei!", once uttered the Tsuba opens up, and the blade grows to about the size of a Claymore.

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Bankai: "Hmmm...Junbi Dekite Imasu Ka?, Bachiatari Negei!" (lit. hmm...Are you ready?, Condemned Prayer!"
Once this command is uttered Ryu grows a Demonic Bone wing behind his left shoulder. His sword transforms into a Black Scythe, he holds it in his Left hand, then a white ball of energy forms in his right hand and it takes the form of a white Scythe. User ImageUser Image



Kidou: Doesn't really use Kidou til he really needs to but he has trained alot
Bakudo: Knows all 1-99
Hado: knows all 1-99


Skills:
Shikai Ability's:

* "Kuro Denkou" (lit: Black Lightning)

Black lightning erupts from the tip of the blade, if direct hit opponent is paralyzed for 10 seconds.

Bankai Ability's:

* "Mugen Kuro Denkou" (lit. Infinite Black Lightning)
20x more powerful than the Shikai's, this Black Lightning erupts from the Scythes tip. It can cause Death if direct hit. Since it so powerful it eats up Reiatsu and can only be used once a Fight. (used as a Last Resort)

Reapers Scythe (Black Scythe)

* "Kurai Suritto" (lit. Dark Slit)
The Scythe slashes at the air created a rift that Ryu can Teleport thought and once activated can be used over and over without saying the name. (similar to the Arrancar's rift from Hueco Mundo).

* "Kurai Bunshin" (lit. Dark Clone)
The Scythe can create a Clone made of Pure Darkness. So far Ryu can only make 1 due to the amount of Reiatsu it needs.

* "Kurai Dangan" (lit. Dark Bullet)
The Scythe slashes the Air like Kurai Suritto and instead of a Rift, it looks just as a slit. It fires bullets that can attack the opponent or eat their Reiatsu. The commands are "Attack, Kurai Dangan" and "Eat, Kurai Dangan".


The Angel's Prayer (White Scythe)

* "Shiroi Suritto" (lit. White Slit)
Just as its Brother Kurai Suritto it creates a rift but the effect of this attack is it sucks in the Opponent then closes. Once inside the Opponent will be force onto a Crucifix and teleported back to the Battle where Ryu will Attack them over and over.

* "Taiyou Furea" (lit. Solar Flare)
This Attack admits a Blinding white light from the tip of the Scythe and can blind the opponent for over a minute to a few days.


Bio: Ryu has been a Soul Reaper since he was a young boy, he died at the age of 5 due to sickness, once Ryu was in the academy he moved up in ranks like clockwork. He was always at the top of the class showing unique sword ability's. Ryu had his first Lieutenant position when he was 6 years old, he was lieutenant of Squad 13, then moved to Squad 1 which he kept his rank then when he was 10 he received Captains rank of Squad 11. He was know then as "The Prodigy". Only after a few months of his Captainship, Ryu asked to be Captain of Squad 10 and is now waiting for a reply...
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:25 pm



Interesting. But there are still things that you are going to have to change.
If you want to become a captain, then you must apply to do so after your profile has been accepted and after you have been accepted into a squad.
I am not quite sure about your special eye, so I will have to see what Yomi-chan says about that.
You need to list out the kidou you know, being 1-10 as you are a recruit.
In this, the Shinigami don't actively take part in real world problems, so you have to rework your bio. It should list out how you died and a short history on being in the Soul Society.
Your appearance is lacking, greatly. I suggest you try and be more descriptive or just use one of the images that you posted.

But most importantly, you need to remove anything pertaining to captainship until you become one.
Also, do use the skellies we've provided, they are quite useful and cover everything that needs to be known about your chara.





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Aku Kami Kurayami
Crew

Dangerous Genius


Lord Ryu I-Eclipse-I

PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:36 pm


Sorry ^_^'', I just used a Profile that i already had from my Guild, I thought it would be faster just to copy and paste. I've already talked to Yomi-sama she said just put "Prospective Squad 10 Captain". If she says Yes or No i will start doing some changes.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:47 pm


|-_Vaizard Yomiko Shihouin_-|
|-_A Former Captain currently in exile. What's new?._-|
"When you deal with a man, deal with his most valuable possession, his life. There's play and there's the deep flow. I like to take things to the deep flow of play, because everything is a game, serious and nonserious at the same time. So play life like it's a game..."
-Huey P. Newton


Aku... I told him to place that on there for the time being...
-pokes new guy-
I do agree with Aku on alot of things about this profile...
So, please, can you make these changes now...
It would be greatly appreciated...
As for the eye thing...
I'm sorry, but you're going to have to remove it. sweatdrop
As for the age thing...
That's a little bit too extraordinary to be someone's real age.
If you are that age in the SS, you'd be old and wrinkly... not 16...
So, if you could please change that as well. ^^;;

^^ You will be informed about the position in a few moments...



They said I couldn't play football I was too small.
They say I couldn't play basketball I wasn't tall.
They say I could'n't play baseball at all.
And now everyday of my life I ball.


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Aku Kami Kurayami
Crew

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:48 pm



Okiedokie then, just wanted to make sure.

The only other thing that bugs me is that you want to have your captain's haori be inversed. If Yomi says that's fine, then so be it.
Personally, I think of them as symbols given by their government and the correct one must be used, given that they can be altered as long as it's the original material.

But, meh.





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