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 Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 6:16 pm
Name: Ayato Shikimori
Aliases/ Nicknames: none so far
Age: 25, died 22
Seat: unassigned
Height: 6' 0''
Weight: 170 lbs
Personality: Loyal, honorable. He always follows order unless it interferes with his own code of honor. He would throw away his entire life to keep to his code.
Theme Song(s): none
Physical Description: He is Japanese heritage. He has bright green eyes. He has brown hair about 4 in. in length. Most of his hair is combed to the side but he has a bit the falls down the center between his eyes. He has a reassuring smile on his face at almost all times. His most notable feature is his missing right arm.
Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Kanaria, a long katana with the blade a bright silver. The handle is black with a dark blue fabric wrapped around it. The guard is a bright gold.
Zanpaku-to Sword Type: katana
Zanpaku-to Element: physical
Shikai: Fly, Kanaria! The sword morphs into a large bird claw (About the size of a normal arm and has only three talons, or fingers) that replaces Ayato's missing arm. It can shot it's nails out but for the most part it is close range. It is very tough and can not be cut easily. Due to the fact that Kanaria attaches to Ayato's nerves, Kanaria can take over Ayato's body. Due to Ayato strong will though, he can only do it when Ayato is unconscious. When Kanaria does take over, Ayato's strength and coordination weakens. Also due to it being connected to Ayato's nerves, if it gets cut, Ayato will still feel the pain from it.
Bankai: Ascend to the Heavens, Buru-Kanaria. He grows large blue wings and his left arm mutates into a half human half bird mixture. (Just like his left arm but instead it has the shape of a standard human arm but made out of the material of his right arm.) This evolution gives him great speed and strength. He can use a large portion of reiatsu in his wings to allow him to make a large dash that can even break the sound barrier. Once again because the sword is connected to Ayato's nerves, if he is knocked out Kanaria will take over his body.
Kidou: none
Bakudo: none
Hado: #4 White Lightning
Other: none
Skills: His intelligence and inventive mind is his best advantage. He also is very fast.
Bio:Born in America in the 20's. He moved back to his families home of japan in secret, in order to escape the internment camps during the 2nd world war. He joined the Japanese air force but was shot down in the battle of Guadel Canal. He survived and managed to get back to friendly territory but he lost his arm in the crash. Near the end of the war he volunteered to go on one last kamikaze mission. Since his death he has regretted his previous life.
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 9:32 pm
Interesting. If you could maybe go a bit more in depth with your Shikai and Bankai, that will be greatly appreciated. Also, you only start off with Kidou 1-10.
Also, it's spelled 'reiatsu' and if you could improve your grammar that will get you very far, very quickly.
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:41 am
I have never been to good with english so I apologize on that one. I'll get to work on the changes.
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