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General
Name: Tathdorl Omartyrr
Age: 172
Race: Drow
Gender: Male
Profession: Shadow Hunter of Vhaeraun
Where do they live? Au Shinduago


Appearance
Complexion: Classic Drow
Hair Color: White
Style: Long
Eyes: Red (Covered by mask)
Height: 6'
Weight: 150 Lbs
Build: Slim and powerful
Distinguishing Features: Really strange red scarring on his chest
Health? Good
Disabilities? None noticeable
Clothing: A green cloak, Assassin's leather, and a black half-mask.
Prized Possessions: His mask and cloak, gifts of Vhaeraun.

Background and Family Relationships: Unknown

History in detail: A proud Dark Dagger of Vhaeraun, Tathdorl has many accomplishments under his belt. He aided in the reconstruction of Au Shinduago, guided the redemption of a Quell'ar Aleanrae, and has survived several encounters with his god's servants mostly unscathed. As a young man, he had always suffered a distaste for Lolth and Ulorbbath as a whole, and eventually assembled the means to escape. He left his family and old life behind, and never looked back.

Equipment, Abilities, and Spells:

Equipment:
Dagger of Graceful Striking (In D&D, adds dexterity instead of strength to attack. For Gaia, just assume that it packs a lot more punch than your average dagger.)
Hand Crossbow
Blowgun


Abilites:
Drow Racial Abilities
Rogue Abilities
Immunity to Poisons (Gift from Vhaeraun)
Shadow Blending (Gift of Vhaeraun)
Body heat masking Serpentskin Cloak (Gift of Vhaeraun)


Personality:
Greatest Fear/Phobia: Being caught by Lolth's priestesses.
Pet Peeves? Loose tongues, people that ask too many questions
Most at ease when...: Lurking in the Shadows
Most uncomfortable when...: He feels exposed
Most embarrassing moment(s): Being whipped nearly to death by a Lolthite priestess at a young age, and having to beg for his life by kneeling and kissing her feet.
Darkest Secret: The fact that he still has the scars of many of "errors in judgement" from his past.
Greatest Strength: Stealth and tactical thought
Greatest Weakness: Somewhat overconfident
Good/Bad habits: He lies. Like a friggin' rug.
Biggest accomplishment: Recieving Vhaeraun's gifts.
Biggest regret: Not going to him sooner.
Mental Disturbance? As above, so below: Liar, liar, pants on fire.

Interpersonal Skills
Relation to others? Use them for the cause.
Perceived by others? Manipulative, but he doesn't forget a favor.
What do others like? He's often there when you least expect it.
What do others dislike? He's often there when you least expect it.
Goals: Show Undergaia the glory of Vhaeraun, and survive comfortably.

((Just wondering, should I post any blessings from Vhaeraun here, or should I keep them as surprises?))

Gladly. Hope this version is a bit better. Also, resubmitted and awaiting approval.

Heh... I don't know much about the D&D skill sets, so I'm not really sure, but he's very sneaky. One of his primary talents is getting around undetected, disguises, etc. He's also a decent hand-to-hand fighter; he won't beat a dedicated warrior face to face, but he's good enough to take out mages, clerics, etc. Also, due to his first set of skills, he's not often caught face-to-face, so he usually doesn't have to worry about that, hence his lukewarm strength.

Does that help?

So that'd be sneak and disguise.

If he's good enough to take out clerics, then he's pretty much up there with a dedicated fighter. Clerics are not weedy little things, they are heavily armoured tanks with divine power. A good cleric can make mincemeat of any number of rogues in a fair fight. The big advantage of rogues is that, if they do their job right, they never, ever fight fair.

Mages are another matter. You can slate their fighting prowess, but the average mid-level mage will eat absolutely anything else for breakfast - played correctly they are, without a doubt, the most powerful character class you can find (unless you start going into the silly specialty stuff).

I'd say that by the sound of it what you're going for is a murderer/assassin.

If you've got gifts of a deity, I would like to see details of where they are coming from. What was done to earn them? Why does he have them? How exactly were they acquired?

Equally I'd like to see the same for any magical items, such as the dagger of graceful striking. I don't have any problems with the character concept, and mostly approve of your assassin, however I do not like to see magical items without stories attached, certainly not in the numbers you have. Can we get a bit more background on the items?