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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:00 pm
Name: Iime Orylyl
Age: 346
Race: Dark Elf
Class: Psion (Telekinetic)
Religion/Alignment: Follower of Llolth/Neutral Evil
Appearance: Average for a drow male though slightly on the slender side, his deft hands are calloused from years of needlework. The most defining feature of the male is the faintly glowing scar that mars the right side of his body from the waist up and the upper portion of his right arm.
Background History: The less hostile brother to Mayolin Orylyl, Iime took to an odd love or caring for others, his heritage though force dhim to bypass the expected careers in healing or caretaking and instead landed him as an acclaimed tailor, jeweller and beautician. It was at around the age of 112 when his Psionic powers began to manifest through uncontrolled bursts of telekinetic energy. Since then he has been training himself and focusing his Telekinesis to aid him in his chosen trade, giving him much more versatility while serving a customer. Much of his famed skill was obtained through several years of travelling with his sister, her being a former priestess of Llolth, Iime fell into the roll of tending to her day in and day out, it is this firsthand experience that has made him specialize somewhat in tending to other such females, and thusly kept him alive ling enough to not make any mistakes....yet. He still keeps in close contact with his sister though he does not share her zeal for ressurecting their birth house, all for the glory off the Spider Queen, preferring to serve his divine mistress by tending to her chosen clergy. His spellscar was obtained through a chance encounter with his sister's new lord and sometimes causes him to lapse into periods of telepathic foresight. During these periods he is vulnerable while he unknowingly accesses the future of a random individual in his vicinity. These "visions" are broken and often little more than a confusing jumble of mismatched and pointless images.
After his psionics attracted the unwanted attention of a rather unfriendly Aboleth, Iime has packed up his spa and headed to Ullorbbath in the hopes that business will be better on more familiar (and more secure) ground.
Items: Trade items Onyx Crescent pendant (Unenchanted) Ring charged with Greater Ray of Entropy (5 charges per day) Bracelet charged with Summon Chaos Shard (once per day)
Weaponry: Rapier + Dueling dagger
Skills or Powers: Powers Basic Telekinesis Orb of darkness Levitation Faerie fire
Skills Master tailoring Expert leatherworking Skilled Fencer Speaks Undercommon, Common, Drow and Goblin
Physical Weakness: Relies more on speed than power to survive, is fairly easily overpowered. His control of his psionics is basic (lifting and moving things with his mind), aside from the random bursts of telepathy, wherein he is defenseless and relies on hired muscle for defense.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:49 pm
twin rapiers?. really?. B|
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:00 pm
Rapiers don't really dual wield very well...at least not with another rapier. They have been known, however, to be used with a dagger or dirk as a sidearm.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:51 pm
Ah probably should've been more clear about those, he doesn't dual wield them, he likes to keep a spare blade on hand though. might add in a main gauche on th eside though now that you mention it
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:14 pm
i may just be getting petty here, but that still seems... iffy to me. i don't know how many people keep SPARE SWORDS on them. i mean, we're not talking a care tyre here.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:01 pm
Psionicists are pretty complex by themselves, Iime seems like sophisticated individual. I would like to see more in the Background/History of the character, and perhaps some more commentary on things like what type of enchanted rings he wears.
The one thing that I would definitely like to hear more about is his following of both Lolth and Correlon. There could be some issues with that. An example of how this has gotten him into and out of trouble might be in order.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 6:10 pm
Made several changes/revisions based on suggestions and concerns.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 6:27 pm
I'd also like to point out that yes, I'm terrible at writing bios for my characters XD.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:00 pm
Approved I like your revisions, well done. Again, I think this charcter is very intriguing. One thing that did catch my attention is that you mentioned his alignment as "chaotic evil". That dosen't seem to be a good fit with this character though. Perhaps more like "neutral evil".
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:08 pm
Yeah I spent quite a while working on just that actually, I decide don Chaotic evil to match hi sfollowing of lolth. will change to neutral, glad someone agrees with me on that point XD
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