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 Posted: Tue May 15, 2012 3:00 pm
ShadowClan
Shadowkit
RiverClan
ThunderClan
Foxshadow
WindClan
Breezekit
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2012 3:18 pm
Warrior of ThunderClan
Username: Holo Fox
Name: Foxshadow
Age: 15 moons
Gender: she-cat
Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: n/a
Kin: n/a
Appearance: Orange she-cat w/ dark orange eyes
Personality: Quiet and loud at the same time, she loves to stare at the clouds and watch them go by. She doesn't like to fight but she will fight, harshly, almost like a fox.
Bio: When her mother told her about foxes, Foxshadow has always thought of foxes being pretty and she has always wanted to see them or one at least. So, when she was 5 moons old, she snuck out and saw a fox kit. When the warriors found her, they almost thought she was the fox's kit but good thing they saw that she was smaller than the fox and she meowed. They scared away the fox kit and brought her back. Her mother renamed her Foxkit and she lived a happy life with her mother and brother until they died. Foxshadow and her brother were close so she was really sad and she is still sad to this day.
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2012 6:32 pm
Her history doesn't really make sense. How could she think foxes were
pretty if she'd never seen one before? Or how could the warriors found her
with a fox and taken her back without anyone being killed? Just seems like a
bit of a stretch.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 4:29 pm
Her mother told her stories about her as a warrior, watching the older warriors fight foxes. Her mother also told Foxshadow that she thought foxes were beautiful (if that makes sense). The fox was a cub and the warriors scared it away. Dose that help her story?
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 2:17 pm
Kit of WindClanUsername: Holo Fox
Name: Breezekit / Breezefeather
Age: 4 moons
Gender: she-cat
Kin:
Appearance: Brown/gray tabby with a white chest and green eyes (KIT)
As warrior
Personality: quiet and shy. barely speaks and never joins in when the kits are playing. always feels like she doesn't belong.
Bio: Breezekit's whole life changed when her mother was killed. When Featherfur was alive, Breezekit was happy, carefree, and had a lot of friends. But, when Featherfur was found dead beside a river, Breezekit cracked and became sad, shy, and quiet. She hasn't spoken a sentence that is 5 words long ever since that day.
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 3:19 pm
Kit of ShadowClanUsername: Holo Fox
Name: Shadowkit / Shadowfeather
Age: 5 moons
Gender: Tom
Kin: n/a
Appearance: Black tom w/ bright green eyes
As warrior
Personality: Dark, quiet, and distant. Never speaks unless he feels like it and when he does his words aren't always nice.
Bio: Before Shadowkit joined (I should say found and forced to join) he was the kit to a loner named Feather. Shadowkit had a brother named Stone but Stone died a moon old. After his brother died, Feather kept him so close their pelt rarely didn't touch. But, when Shadowkit was 3 moons old, Feather was run over by a monster. Sad and had no where to go, Shadowkit walked on and on. He was found in a hollowed-out tree by a ShadowClan patrol. The patrol took him to the camp and forced him to join. He was put in the nursery and given a mother. His "mother's" name was Sweetflower. Sweetflower and Shadowkit became friends but she died from greencough when Shadowkit was 4 moons old. After Sweetflower died, Shadowkit became more and more distant. Many cats tried to get him to be their friend but failed. Right now, Shadowkit doesn't have friends.
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KittySongLUVsJONASBoys Crew
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 8:12 am
Could you please find different Bio's for your kits?
It is not likely that almost every cat would have "joined" the clans from being a loner or kittypet.
Most cats need to be clan born.
As for Foxshadow.
Since I'm not sure what to make of her Bio, run that by our captain.
Also, please Do Not Post anywhere with your cats until they have been accepted by one of us.
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 9:45 am
Our captain has already accepted them though PMs. I told this to WhiteWingtip as well. He said Foxshadow's bio was fine and so were the others but I will change Breezekit's bio but not Shadowkit's.
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 11:54 am
Her and I have talked about her characters, and I've decided to let her keep them with some minor adjustments to the bios.
As of right now they are accepted.
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