I need your opinion on a story for a comic I am hopefully going to make. Its called Magical Witch Jenny. Also in this thread I have linked too I would like you to rate the apperance of my characters and see if they would be interesting enough or I would need to change any of them ? Tek Teks are also included of what the characters might wear.
Also would you be interested in a story like this if it was in a book store or Web comic ?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=23432375#345862663