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readyysetgox3

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 11:37 am


Looking throught the glass,
watching you walk.
I call and scream your name,
but you can't hear me.
I can almost feel you
hugging me again.
But i tried to convince myself
that you not dead

im all alone
i tried to fake a smile
but iu'll see you in a while
with one move of the razor gripped tighter in my hand
i'll be with you again

should i stay here?
or should i leave?
it isn't that hard to me, though,
that is how it seems
i loved you and no one understands
you were my one and only man

i'm all alone
i tried to fake a laugh and i try to smile
about seeing you in a while
one sharp move of the razor gripped even tighter in my hand
will send me there with you again

it wasnt fair
you left me here
is this what you really wanted?
me crying and bleeding
waiting as the time slowly runs out...

i'm all alone
i tried not to scream
i'll see you soon
that sharp move of the razor
now gripped loosely in my hand
is sending me......
to see you again......
 
PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:19 pm


Looking through the glass,
watching you walk.
I call and scream your name,
but you can't hear me.
I can almost feel you
hugging me again.
But i tried to convince myself
that you not dead

I'm all alone
i tried to fake a smile
but you'll see you in a while
with one move of the razor gripped tighter in my hand
I'll be with you again

should i stay here?
or should i leave?
it isn't that hard to me, though,
that is how it seems
i loved you and no one understands
you were my one and only man

I'm all alone
i tried to fake a laugh and i try to smile
about seeing you in a while
one sharp move of the razor gripped even tighter in my hand
will send me there with you again

it wasn't fair
you left me here
is this what you really wanted?
me crying and bleeding
waiting as the time slowly runs out...

I'm all alone
i tried not to scream
I'll see you soon
that sharp move of the razor
now gripped loosely in my hand
is sending me......
to see you again......

i spell checked it

readyysetgox3


readyysetgox3

PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2006 9:14 am


dude we really need to find more people to join
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