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sweet if i can ever write a good song i'll put it up

i collaborate on the songs we write in d.t.s. theyre all written on paper and i dont wanna type them all up. xp

I've written a few that I don't consider great by any means. This particular song isn't meant to be sung all the way through. The singer would speak the verses and the band would sing the chorus.

Purge

[Spoken]
You're a thin blonde haired rich girl
Who always gets her way
You'll never gain a few pounds
You'd rather throw them all away
After every meal you go to hock it up
Sick ******** bulemic

[Sung]
Purge your food
And purge your pounds
And purge your soul
It's purging you!
Purge your food
And purge your pounds
And purge your soul
It's purging you!

[Spoken]
Get over yourself you vain peice of trash
You're not impressing anyone
All your friends talk behind your back anyway
Your gossipping little friends all do it too

[Sung]
Purge your food
And purge your pounds
And purge your soul
It's purging you!
Purge your food
And purge your pounds
And purge your soul
It's purging you!

ah wth, i wrote this song a while ago. its what the quote on my profile is from. but heres a song for my band. if i had to describe how it sounds, it would be a mix between strike anywhere, the unseen, and msi sweatdrop and in the stanzas, on the lines where it says "now i must digress" and "for god and country"those lines are really slow while the rest are fast, so for the first half of each stanza the words are fast and then it gets to that line and slows down, and pick right back up again as soon as the line is over. and the bridge is really light and alot slower than the rest of the song.and after the stanzas the words dont slow down it just ends suddenly and so does the guitar after each stanza, and it has about a 4 second long drum solo and then goes back to guitars and words and everything else after the 4 seconds into the chorus

Red Stripes

(1st stanza)
For selfishness we fight!
To further our demise!
Now I must digress!
On the fact that we can’t progress!
We still slaughter our own kind!
Causing our own to die!

(Chorus)
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
WE DON’T NEED TO DIE!
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
With all those who now lay dead!
OUR FLAG WOULD NOW BE COVERED IN RED!

(2nd stanza)
We’re born and taught that its’ ok to die!
“There’s no other way” they lie!
For god and country!
For patriotism they sacrifice!
While we accept the death in our own minds
We continue to send our own to die!

(Chorus)
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
WE DON’T NEED TO DIE!
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
With all those who now lay dead!
OUR FLAG WOULD NOW BE COVERED IN RED!

(Bridge)
Stand out in these days of sacrifice!
Don’t let them lay your lives on the line!
For a selfish dream they hold inside their minds
All they want is your allegiance, to control your MIND!
Don’t let them control you!(YOU,YOU,YOU!)
Start a new kind of war for a better point in time!

(Chorus)
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
WE DON’T NEED TO DIE!
Red tears are falling from the sky
Every drop of blood we spill should widen our red stripes!
With all those who now lay dead!
OUR FLAG WOULD NOW BE COVERED IN RED!

Rebel- I ******** love that song! "Our flag would now be covered in red!" Awesome.

Thanks

That sounds pretty good