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 Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 8:39 pm
So obviously by the name this is a poetry thread!!!
I know I love to write poetry and it's a great way to express yourself and the way you feel.
So starts posting your poems!!!
Here are a couple of mine
A Mental Suicide
Forever there in my head I cry
Remembering my past when
I wanted to die
Living and breathing always to be
Imprisioned deep inside of me
I feel the touching I feel the hate I feel the pain
Forever there in my head I cry
Just a child asking myself why
Breaking and taking all of me
Cant open my eyes without the pain I see
I feel the lost I feel the tears I feel the hurt I feel the fears
Forever there in my head I cry
Alone in the dark I lie
I feel the world I feel the knife I feel the cutts I feel the life
Forever there in my head I cry
Committing mental suicide
My heart belongs to you
And I want you to know
My faith instilled in you I will never let go
We've been through so much
The good and the bad
Emotions running wild
Sometimes happy, sometimes mad
Tears cried over nothing
Hugs and kisses just because
Memories to last forever
Of our undying love
And as we continue our quest into the great unknown
We'll go hand in hand
And never let go
So with this said I want you to know it's true
That I'll love you forever And my heat belongs to you
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 6:58 am
Many of you will remember my attempt at comedic poetry at around xmas time. So I figured why not post it again.
Twas the days after christmas...
Twas the day after christmas
and all through the stores
were many rich people
pimping cash just like whores
Their Visas were slung
from their wallets with care
In hopes that their limits
would not leave them bare
When up at the till
Arrose such a chatter
Ca Ching Bling bla bloo
Oh s**t what's the matter.
I'm so sorry sir
your limit has passed
so pull out some money
or you're out on your a**!
So out came some language
and I grabbed some hair,
the mall cops were pleasant
as they beat me right there
The moral of this
is to watch what you say
unless you like beatings
on this Boxing day!
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 2:57 pm
hey great poems poodle and ugly one biggrin
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:03 am
hehe thanks.... damn you people post your poems or else! lol
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 10:48 am
I'll try coming up with something 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:33 pm
I used to have a little talent with poetry but it's all gone now.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:35 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:00 pm
I am sure it will be good Miko....
I used to be good at writing poems too but I have lost the nack for it now.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 10:23 pm
I went looking for some old poems i wrote back in the day, i used to write all the time but now i've lost it too. But here's what i found, i was young when i wrote these so be nice lol.
I know we never lasted
that you think it better off
but when you touch me it seems like you feel different
that you have feelings for me
When we were together i wished
we would never part
I told you how i felt, i told you that i cared
but you didn't listen you thought we didn't make a good pair
I used to lie in bed and cry over you,
but those tears washed those feelings away
and now i don't want you anymore but i still have the memories
when we were together and i will have them with me forever.
Tired
I'm tired of sitting around doing nothing
I'm tired of sitting around waiting for your call
I'm tired of daydreaming of things that won't happen
I'm tired of thnking good things will happen when they don't
I'm tired of being so nice and shy
I'm tired of people thinking things about me
I'm tired of things going wrong
I'm tired of the way life is so hard
I'm tired of just being me.
(I must have been depressed when i wrote that one.)
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 12:45 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 10:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 9:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 5:45 am
I need to find my portfolio and then I will post some more poetry from my dark days...I was a moody kid...
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:34 am
I was an evil/happy kid...more pissed off than anything though!
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:53 pm
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