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 Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:27 pm
Post your ff and non-ff poetry here for others to read. Lets try to keep it non-morbid poetry please.
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:28 pm
Life Stream
With somber strides you move,
To glide over water
To dance your dance of death
And life. Lonely Beauty
Known only for her heart.
So dance your dance of death,
Send us to your far plane
So we may sleep as birds
in flight among a sky
of clouds and stars above.
Lift us with your staff please,
and set the spirits free-
The life you lead is not
Your own, but for the dead.
Your soul will belong for
The song will play for you.
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 3:19 pm
is there a certain length they have to be? Because I write songs, and usually record them, so I have the text version of some....
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:05 am
There is no required length. Songs are poetry, so post away! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:15 am
i think i might have a poem to say heart
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:39 am
its said as a song heart
time stands, still in my heart,
i dont know were u are,
holding wut i may find,
it seems as if i was yesterday!!!!
until you know, plz dont find a another lady,
until you know, i may give u baby,
until you know,i dont want to go lose you,
until you know,you know,you know--------
until you know......until you know........until you know.....until you know!!!
i dont want to go lose your heart,
please lets make a brand new start,
your always my number 2,
and you that i love you,.....
until you know...until you know....until you know....until you know,
you know, you know...
time stands, still in my heart i dont know were you are.....
holding wut i may find.....it seems as if it was yester day.......
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yuna gun smoke
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 9:52 am
This is a song a friend and I wrote together, non-ff related.
My friend:
Dear Mom and Dad, and everyone, I miss you badly, each day delivers death and schoolboy tragedies//
I'm too young for this crap, but can't reveal my fear to you, because I’m here and you’re there, there's nothing you can do//
It seems like last week, I was wild and free, but Uncle Sam told me this is where I have to be//
A year, 6 months, maybe more, maybe less. I'm an unwelcome guest trying to make the best//
Of a daylight nightmare, these enemies are monsters, if I survive to write you again, then my mission's accomplished//
Between snipers, and ambushes, and shot at by rocket launchers//
It's only gotten harder to fulfill my departing promise, "I'll be ok, guys...I'll be back" I was a young man then, but now I'm a target//
I don't care to choose sides, there isn't space in my mind, all I care is that I make it out of here alive//
Some days I pray to get shot, but not fatally wounded, so I stay in harm's way and try not to do anything stupid//
Tell my girlfriend I miss her, and to wait for me patiently, faithfully. Doing my duty gratefully, and tell Grandma to pray for me//
Tell my best friend to drink to my life's sacrifice. I pray for you ALL before I sleep every night//
Under this flashlight's glow, I just want you to know, I'm scared to be here, but I have to just roll//
Go with the flow, and pick my battles wisely, and if I stay alert, when I’m finally home, you might recognize me//
So signing off now, your son, friend, and this battlefield's Private//
You're in my dreams and my thoughts, till one way or the other, my service is final//
Me:
Dear Spence,
Ya brother Steve called, told me you was a soldier in Iraq
told me you didn't know when you'd be comin' back
I cried when I read the letter you wrote to all of us
Damn bro, you wouldn't believe my trouble tryna comprehend this
never thought that we'd go beyond our childhood stage of playing soldiers for pretend
I know we'll always have our friends but I saw the letter you had to send
Heard it's crazy over seas, with all the suicide bombing, heavy fire, constantly lit up at night
Not to mention all the disease, poverty, crying, and screaming, don't lose ya nerve, just fight
Keep cool, and flank left and right for diversionary tactics then when their weak go for a post-attack
Don't do anything I wouldn't do, jus' remember we go way back
Remember everything we used to do, sneakin' out, playing ninjas, and you'll come home
[Addlib: Damn, this is tough to write..]
Be careful bro, I love you and wouldn't want anything to happen, you're my boy, don't leave me alone
I drank one for you and another for your safe return last night after I read that
Be safe, open-eyed and when them rag-heads comin' at ya dog, aim fast
Sincerely Yours,
Patrick
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:34 pm
.:Another Cloudy Day:.
You wished she were here
You wished you could see her once last time
But you cant
It’s another cloudy day
You cry just to be with her, holding her hand
But you cant. Just cant
It’s another cloudy day
You wished on a thousands stars in the night sky just to see her
You never told her how much you loved her
But now she’s gone
You’ll never get to see her again
You stand near her grave crying, weeping, with mournful tears from your heart
Tears wont bring her back
Her beloved heart brought such good to you
You wont be able to hear her sweet voice ever again
But you’ve got one thing of hers. Her heart
And she’s got yours too. That’s never going to change.
It’s another cloudy day.
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SeiferTheDreamer
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:26 pm
Lone Wolf
Why am I the stranger?
I've been through just as much as you.
I've fought, and loved and lost,just the same as you.
Treating me as though it was I who betrayed you.
Truth be told, I was never on your side.
I'm not a stranger, you know me well,
You're the only one thats been through hell.
I conquered my dream, and found a new one.
You don't know what you want, which is why I can't stand you.
Make up your mind,you're a stranger to yourself.
Destiny has brought us here, you run from it, while I am
embracing what is given to me.
I walk alone,and everyone stands beside you.
That is why you are my rival.
You are my brother and my enemy.
Your lack of compassion suits you well,
Yet my compassion brings me hell.
Life isn't fair, it's not on my side,
Everything has been handed to you,Use it or I'll steal it from you.
You are my brother, yet I walk alone.
You are my rival, with everyone beside you.
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 9:29 am
This is just going to be off the top of my head..and it's not meant to rhyme, just so y'all know
You Don't Know Me:
I have my own memories, you aren't part of them
You don't know me, I'm only technically 7 years old
Who said a remnant can't love, hate, have friends or memories?
You don't know me, you claim to know yourself
But if you knew yourself, you'd know me!
You don't know me, I have friends, I've loved, and lost because of you
You make me feel like I can't help anybody, not even myself.
I'm not helpless, I just wish you'd stay in my memories.
You haunt me in my dreams, and every day I worry you'll show up.
I will always defeat you, because you aren't who you used to be.
You've become blind with power and hate, I have friends.
Leave me alone, because you don't know me.
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 8:13 pm
Kinda quiet... I'm sorry?
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:16 am
its ok. I've been busy with school. I'll have some poems to post soon. Starting on some sescond drafts.
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