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Rigormortis Metamorphosis

PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:00 pm


Like the title say, this was just a random Idea that I might make a fic...I'm not so sure...

"This one is...odd...But she is a looker..." A man said lefting a girl up by her hair that only reached the nape of her neck. Her brows nitted together as she felt her own body wight be held by her hair. She let out a small squeck of pain.

"All the same just finish her off and lets get moveing, the mothers scream may have woken the house next to us..."

"Fine." He the other growled. Removeing a kunai from its holster. Placeing it at the girls neck and pressing in, sliding it a long her smooth ivory skin. The red substance known as blood fallowed the line of cut skin as she fell too the floor gripping her neck trying to stop the blood.

"Lets move, she'll be dead in no time." Another hateful voice said. All three of the men nodded and walked off.

"Such a shame thought...It would have been nice to hear her scream..."

When she knew that they were gone she made it to her feet with the help of the wall. 'Mother...Father...Kyo!?" She looked around. Soon to be hit by the distasteful stinging pain. 'I'm going to die...Aren't I?' She asked looking at her hand. 'His home isn't far...I just want to see him...one last time...Sasuke-kun...' She thought.

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Sasuke was laying somewhat awake, slightly asleep. A feeling of uncomfort circled him. Like he knew that something was wronge...He just didn't know what. All he could think about was someone close to him. Someone with bubble gum pink hair and burning green eyes, Sakura.

Feeling something drip on to his face he turned over with the thought of maybe some ran got in from an open window. Turning over he saw a hand hovering over his face. Quickly he sat up. " Who the hell are you?" He asked.

"Auke...un." They stutter. "H..El..p...Me..." Looking closer Sasuke relized who it was and that her lightly color skin was covered with blood. A rag was tied lossly around her neck.

"Sakura!"

To be continued...Maybe...XD
PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:15 pm


If you like it just say so in the poll and if I get around 5 yeses, I'll put another chapter up.

Rigormortis Metamorphosis


tenshinohana-chan

PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 3:39 am


Can't say for sure till you post the next one... so that's a definite continue till we see a snag. But I like it so far... not much grammatical error and there seems to be a solid plot. (Being a SasuSaku writer myself I'm always on a lookout for potential writers. blaugh )

Anyway, if you explain things in the post, then maybe I'll like it even more. 3nodding keep it up!
PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:26 am


tenshinohana-chan
Can't say for sure till you post the next one... so that's a definite continue till we see a snag. But I like it so far... not much grammatical error and there seems to be a solid plot. (Being a SasuSaku writer myself I'm always on a lookout for potential writers. blaugh )

Anyway, if you explain things in the post, then maybe I'll like it even more. 3nodding keep it up!


Okay,I'll post another part tonight.

Rigormortis Metamorphosis


Rigormortis Metamorphosis

PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:44 am


Sasuke was now sitting in the hospital waiting room. Looking at the floor because it was the only thing in the room that wasn't bright or was he just trying to hid that he was scared? Soon Sasuke could hear Naruto screaming for people too get out of his way and Kakashi yelling at him saying to slow down and be quite.

Naruto stoped when he saw Sasuke looking up at him. For once Naruto could swear that he saw some emotion in Sasuke's coal black eyes. " How is she?" Sighing Sasuke looked at the floor. " She's...She's dead isn't she?"

"No...She sleeping...Sakura got her throat slit..." Naruto walked futher up too him. Seeing that his navy blue shirt looked like there was purple dye on the back, Were Sakura was carried to the hosplital. "Tesunade...Was out here a little bit ago..."Looking back at Naruto feeling that he needed to tell him the truth. " The cut would have been deadly if we gotten here later, but...The part that is the worst out of all of this..."

Kakashi put down his book and stood next to Naruto looking at Sasuke who was looking at the ground again. Hearing him say something. " What was that?"

" She's going to be a mute..."
PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 5:01 am


OOH! She's going to be mute? Gawd, I've never heard THAT twist in ANY SasuSaku fanfic I've read (and I gotta tell you, I've read a LOT) and that's what makes this story appealing.

I want to see what comes next now - you gotta put this up at Fanfiction.net! And tell me if you've got it up there... I'm going to be looking for it.

One thing though - you have some spellchecking to do, but that's okay. Normal people (unlike me) won't notice it too much.

Keep it UP!

tenshinohana-chan


Rigormortis Metamorphosis

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:27 am


Okay, There's going to be more to the real fic then here.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 2:03 pm


yay!

Sunshine_Sincerity


tenshinohana-chan

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:55 am


Don't forget to give us a linky!
PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:21 am


tenshinohana-chan
Don't forget to give us a linky!


I will don't worry.

Rigormortis Metamorphosis


Rigormortis Metamorphosis

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:17 am


Just so everone knows, I won't be posting for a week....Sorry.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:03 am


Cuite_little_devil
Just so everone knows, I won't be posting for a week....Sorry.

But by the time you come back make sure you've got the whole chapter up and going! blaugh

tenshinohana-chan


Brittney-chan

PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:22 pm


:3 It sounds like a really good idea!

I can't wait to see more. -squee-
PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:37 am


Okay, the link is in the fan ficcy topic.

Rigormortis Metamorphosis


norngpinky

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:18 am


Coolie.. I like this story.. Gotta go read now XD
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