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.]Inner.DarKness[. Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:29 am
.:.Roleplay Samples.:. Alright, I'm sick of getting invites from people who want to join this village and tell me they are literate but when I tell them to give me a sample of their work they can't even post one sentence worth. I can't stand being called a b***h any longer because I keep having to reject so many people.So from now on, if you come here and you haven't recieved a personal invite from me, .]Inner.DarKness[.
asking you to join our guild, (You will know the invites from me because it will say my name in the reason for inviting you box) you will be asked to provide a sample of your work.
I have the right to polietly decline your offer if I see you are not literate. If you're already a member of the Village Hidden in the Storm, don't worry, this new rule is only for people who haven't picked a village yet and are thinking of joining mine.
As a sample you will post a detailed example of your work, you can post anything as long as it is truly yours.
* I want to see detail
*Describe the things around you
* Illustrate your characters emotions
*Be detailed*** I can't stress this enough  (If you have recieved a personal invite from me, it means I have seen your writing abilities in a rp that I have lurked into, so you don't have to provide me with a sample of your work whee )
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:25 pm
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.]Inner.DarKness[. Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:17 pm
neutral I don't get why your confused.
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 9:46 am
((Well...I haven't completed my character, but I sure can do one post. *cracks knuckles* Alright writer's block time to leave.))
Shinobi sandals crunched on dirt as a kunoichi walked along. She wasn't too worried about making noise, she walked through here nearly every day on her way to and from her training spot. Her black hair with red bangs blew gently in the breeze that felt good after a long work out. The kunoichi kept half of her face hidden behind her red scarf. The article of clothing was one she kept to help her hide any emotion that refused to stay hidden. Shinobi shouldn't have emotions, but Togeko couldn't help but feel them. It was just who she was. Light that filtered through the leaves in the trees reflected off of the lenses of her glasses. The glass in the metal rims did nothing to change the sight of the wearer, they were usless, yet she still wore them. It was a part of her look and she wasn't quite sure why she wore them.
Togeko hummed to herself slightly, enjoying the walk home. Suddenly, she stopped. Something, she wasn't sure if it was a noise or a figure that passes just outside of her vision, caused her to stop in alarm. Yellow eyes glanced around as her hands hovered near her kunai pouches. The fingers twitched in anticipation. The hairs on her skin tickled, knowing that something was out there, but what...she did not know.
((How's that?))
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.]Inner.DarKness[. Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 9:54 am
Tokusie ((Well...I haven't completed my character, but I sure can do one post. *cracks knuckles* Alright writer's block time to leave.)) Shinobi sandals crunched on dirt as a kunoichi walked along. She wasn't too worried about making noise, she walked through here nearly every day on her way to and from her training spot. Her black hair with red bangs blew gently in the breeze that felt good after a long work out. The kunoichi kept half of her face hidden behind her red scarf. The article of clothing was one she kept to help her hide any emotion that refused to stay hidden. Shinobi shouldn't have emotions, but Togeko couldn't help but feel them. It was just who she was. Light that filtered through the leaves in the trees reflected off of the lenses of her glasses. The glass in the metal rims did nothing to change the sight of the wearer, they were usless, yet she still wore them. It was a part of her look and she wasn't quite sure why she wore them. Togeko hummed to herself slightly, enjoying the walk home. Suddenly, she stopped. Something, she wasn't sure if it was a noise or a figure that passes just outside of her vision, caused her to stop in alarm. Yellow eyes glanced around as her hands hovered near her kunai pouches. The fingers twitched in anticipation. The hairs on her skin tickled, knowing that something was out there, but what...she did not know. ((How's that?))
(It's more than amazing! You have no idea how happy I'm to see you're literate! Welcome to the Storm Village <3 )
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:59 pm
((Please note that this was done for a Bleach RP I'm in. It's still Tameko, but he's adapted to fit that universe.))
The calm afternoon air was hardly disturbed by the soft sigh of the turquoise-headed youth perched carelessly in a tree. The black-clad figure idily watched the people moving about below him with just a hint of boredom. He knew he shouldn't be on earth, but it was the safest place for the other Shinigami for him to be... Emerald eyes glanced skyward as he thought he saw a faint shadow flit by overhead, and suddenly widened in surprise as a voice began speaking to him. He instinctively flinched back, but in the unexpectedness of it, he forgot that he was sitting in a tree. His balance forsaken, the young Shinigami plummeted towards the ground, followed by the black swallowtaill that had startled him. It alighted on his shoulder once he'd muttered a quiet "Ow..." and sat up. Sighing once again at what he heard, Tameko nodded and shooed the hell butterfly away as he got to his feet. Well, at least a fight with a Hollow would take his mind of things.
It didn't take Tameko long to find the Hollow he'd been ordered to dispatch. The creature had a greenish-yellow body with odd, frenetic designs sketched throughout its hide. It's torso and arms were thick and powerful, and it had reddish strands of hair prodtruding off the top of its head. When it finally sensed Tameko, the Hollow whirled around to reveal a white mask with similar designs covering its surface, and let out a scream of rage. It shot its fist straight at the Shinigami, the sheer force of the attack causing a small twister in front of its knuckles. Just as it looked like he was about to be smashed to bit's by the monster's punch, there was a flash of silver and a splash of red. Using only one hand, Tameko held off the fist with his b*****d sword-looking zanpakuto, which had carved a deep gash in the Hollow's fingers. Tameko sighed, and before the Hollow could even cry out in pain and draw its arm back, he seemed to disappear. None but the most trained of eyes would have seen him dashing up the Hollow's arm. As he did so there was another brief flash as he unsheathed his longer, thinner zanpakuto and its blade caught the light. The instant he set foot on the Hollow's shoulder, Tameko jabbed his katana down, allowing his own momentum to keep carrying him forward and up and over. For a moment time seemed to freeze and his body and blade lined up perfectly straight, and as his legs came down once again there were two more brilliant flashes. A light tap could be heard followed by two more gushes of liquid and Tameko landed softly on both feet, Zanpakutos re-sheathed, and the Hollow's X-shaped cut, cleanly dividing it into four sections, spurted blood. This only lasted for a second, though, as the Hollow soon began to fade away and disappear from sight. Sighing yet again, Tameko cooly brushed back a stray strand of purple hair and murmured, "Not even a warm-up... I wish he'd been stronger..."
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:50 pm
Silent. That was a good word to describe the frost haired male perched upon that high tree limb. He was staring off into the distance, barely taking noticed of passerbies below. He just stood still, silent, concentrating. He then fell forward, but managed to stay connected to the tree as thought there was glue on the bottom. He was hanging upside down from the limb, his hair falling from his face, still starng forward. He stayed in that spot for several minutes before righting himself, and leaping off into the other trees.
His name was Rikutsen. He was a proud shinobi of the Village Hidden in the Storm. He had been practicing since the early morning, and it was beginning to grow dark. He was hungry and tired. He made his way home, where he'd cook up some food, and take a short rest. Then he'd return to his training. That's pretty much all Rikutsen did in his spare time. Train. Unless someone wished for his presense, he would be training. It's all he liked doing. He slunk through the door into his small home, and grabbed a random piece of fruit. He ate it, still quiet, as he made himself an actual dinner.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:02 pm
Gooood! Great! You both are amazing<3
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.]Inner.DarKness[. Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 11:17 am
I figured I'd put one up just because this was my last post in a roleplay I had been in on another account of mine that I never go on anymore ;p
Hageshii was not done, no the code word had been said to make him stop for a short amount of time but he wasnt' done, the words spoke into his ears.
"Rage..."
He went through the same stage, the information leaked through his head, the true perpose was now clear, he was going to destroy the village a force like no other. The last child of a dead clan, he was going to take them all with him to death he sprouted chains, tearing through the ramen stand first. His eyes glazed over red, he began a series of handseals each one not of the normal kind of handseals used in shinobi combat, no these where quite different.
"Dansu no Gokuraku Mon (Dance of the Heavenly Gates)!"
The Heaven gates open, and now it was going to be thirty minutes of hell on Earth, he looked on the village going dark, the anger and hatred raging through him. The pain and sorrow it all fueled it, every fiber of his being put into this he began to dance, it was rythmic and sweet but then the white chains sprouted from his body, thats when the death started.
I am the hate you try to hide, and I control you...
He tore through a crowd, the gore caused several people to not even realize that they where being torn apart each passing moment, it was another hellish scene. It all flashed through his head like a movie, it was stuck on play it refused to stop it wouldn't end all he could do is continue forward. He kept hearing those words in his head, his eyes red with fire and rage each passing moment it built upon itself his mentallity was lost it was over for him.
I am the voice inside your head, and I control you...
He was surrounded by many Jounin each one using different jutsu to attack him, he began striking them down one by one, the blood mere seemed to fuel his rage. At the end of it he was covered in blood his hair was bleached more red then possible, his beautiful eyes stared around in rage. Each and every passing moment another second of his life's force was draining away he had a mission to complete he had a job to do and nothing would stop him. He kept his face straight though the wounds on his body hurt he tore through another crowd, ripping people limb from limb each one screaming to their death.
I am the bullet in the gun, and I control you...
He had to find his targets, each one more important, an old aristocrat the first target he tore through the shinobi guards from another country, the man was coming to make peace with Konoha. Hageshii cut him to ribbons, his wife and children screamed as he butchered the man and then moved on. Time was ticking down to a brilliant end but it was not over yet, his rage was still growing, consuming him like a disease like it was some sort of cancer. He moved on, he pushed through the shinobi the massive bloodloss was not making him flinch yet no his wounds where being ignored because of the mass strain of the technique. He cut through a young Genin, whom stood in front of his father one of the Jounin Head family members of the Hyuuga clan. The man put up quite a resistance but found his head removed in the end, the monster seemed to be unstopable the gates where just to much.
I am the truth from which you run, and I control you...
He passed through the gates of the old Uchiha clan, he set fire to the complex a bolt of lightning from his hand using an older technique from the Cloud. Behind him the Uchiha clan legacy burned to the ground the flames played along his back making him look demonic even though his chains where white and he glowed angelically. His hair whispy and floating in different directions his eyes had veins popping from them because of the view gate. His muscles thousand times the amount of strength of any normal human being due to all gates opening, he was running low on time though.
"I am a silencing machine! And I control you...
He made his bloodly carved path toward the hot springs, Nemei was there that sweet young girl who had been so kind to him, then that young boy that had tried to kill him. His eyes slitted as all the chains impalled a man that had been sitting in the tub, he just happend to be one of the Fire Country's Daimyo's advisers. Quite an important man but now he had five plus chains sticking out of his twitching body, Hageshii of course had kunai and shuriken sticking out of his own body. The chains had not managed to block everything the shinobi had thrown at him, and soon enough he was blasted through the hot spring by a Katon jutsu.
"I am the end of all your dreams...And I control you...
I take you where you wanna go!
I give you all you need to know!
I drag you down I use you up!
Mr. Self Destruct!
The young boy pulled himself to his feet once more his back was chared and his clothing was rather crispy, however he still managed to stand up, he walked toward the village gates. The shinobi followed him keeping a volley of kunai toward him not one managing to hit anything vital as he pushed through. Finally he was outside the gates he rose his hand to the heavens and with a single hand-seal he uttered one word, the name of a forbidden technique.
"TENCHUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Suddenly lightning struck his body and he was gone, he fell to the ground, his chains rusted and melted away and suddenly he was just a normal guy again. He had no chains, no bloodline, he wasn't a mass murderer he was just Hageshii Ikari, that nice boy that had walked through those village gates without a worry in the world. And he reached up toward the sky silently the mark of heaven burned into his forehead the sign of his doom iminant and before he closed his eyes and died he said one word.
"Ka-san..."
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:56 pm
I'm excited to be testing my self and to join the Storm Village, I think i'm going to use the RP I used to get into the guild for this as well... D's Rp The rain felt as if it was slow in falling, or maybe it was just his state of mind. It had been far too long of a day, sadly it wasn't even close to being over. The puddles just seemed deeper as he trudged along, daring one of the puddles to swallow him up. Maybe then he'd be able to relax, or maybe even allow the shadow of his eyelids to envelope him. With each step reality denied him his wishes. Somewhere along the road he had lost his strength. Had he actually gotten weaker than he already was? That couldn't be possible, could it? As he held himself up against the wooden sign, he found that the answer was irrelavent. He needed to rest... As the skys let up it's wet fingers from his body, and for the first time, his tears could be seen in his eyes. Still raining along his cheek, his eyes couldn't help but pour his weakness for the world to see. He was just a boy...not a prodigee ninja. He couldn't have saved them, he repeated to himself. Trying to fend off the nightmarish images and haunting terrors of his own mind. If it's not to your liking, just let me know and i'll dig deeper 3nodding
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.]Inner.DarKness[. Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:16 pm
Dbeast I'm excited to be testing my self and to join the Storm Village, I think i'm going to use the RP I used to get into the guild for this as well... D's Rp The rain felt as if it was slow in falling, or maybe it was just his state of mind. It had been far too long of a day, sadly it wasn't even close to being over. The puddles just seemed deeper as he trudged along, daring one of the puddles to swallow him up. Maybe then he'd be able to relax, or maybe even allow the shadow of his eyelids to envelope him. With each step reality denied him his wishes. Somewhere along the road he had lost his strength. Had he actually gotten weaker than he already was? That couldn't be possible, could it? As he held himself up against the wooden sign, he found that the answer was irrelavent. He needed to rest... As the skys let up it's wet fingers from his body, and for the first time, his tears could be seen in his eyes. Still raining along his cheek, his eyes couldn't help but pour his weakness for the world to see. He was just a boy...not a prodigee ninja. He couldn't have saved them, he repeated to himself. Trying to fend off the nightmarish images and haunting terrors of his own mind. If it's not to your liking, just let me know and i'll dig deeper 3nodding Ahh! Good good! I quite like it indeed. Nicely done. :3
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:18 pm
I have only one opinion...If you want to be considered literate stop using smileys in your posts O.o;; I also hope that you know that this village is...Evil...
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:21 pm
Zatoiche Blind Swordsman I have only one opinion...If you want to be considered literate stop using smileys in your posts O.o;;
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:24 pm
You had a shinobi smiley at the end of your post...You should also delete them from your profile it makes it look kinda...Illiterate use smileys in OOC not when your rping or making a character...You also need realize this village is evil and may not be the place for you...O.o;;
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