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H.R.wolf

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 3:59 pm


these are works of mine that involve a song in the story line, weather the song would be sung by the characters or just playing in the backround as the story unfolds, hope you like them mrgreen heart
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 4:04 pm


FOREVER WAS IN YOUR EYES
Fruitsbasket song-fic
Cry from “A walk to remember”




It rained like there was no tomorrow. Like the rains that started the great flood. It poured, but they still came. Yes in the past they all had hated him, in the back of their minds they knew; within their souls they believed it was his fault. They had blamed him all his life, it only escalated when his mother died. That was his fault; it was so drilled into his head that he even believed it. But now, now they realized how wrong they were. How much they now believed they themselves were at fault, they miss judged him. It was too little too late now. He was gone, and the one taking it the hardest was not master, it was Tohru. As she walked down the dirt path, grave markers shining in the sun, hiding their age, she remembered, the first time she met him.
I’ll always remember
It was late afternoon
It lasted forever
And ended to soon


She remembered when she had found his ‘secret’ spot, the roof. And the conversation they had shared there.
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
And I was changed


But now, he was gone. The family he left behind would never know him like Tohru had

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside


The first time she saw him for who he truly was, she knew, she knew who he was.

It was then that I realized that forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry


At school, he was the same. But Tohru knew what he really felt.
It was late September
And I'd seen you before
You were always the cold one


At this point she began to wonder, how she felt. His emotions, after you get under a few layers, were understandable, and she knew what to do with them, but her own emotions scared her, how did she really feel about him? The haunting question would not leave her alone.
But I was never that sure
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
I was changed


Now it was too late. He was gone, never coming back. Cut down in his prim, for her. That night it rained as well. When she held him in her arms for the first time, and watched the crimson stream flow and ebb, she realized how she felt.

I wanted to hold you
I wanted to make it go away
I wanted to know you
I wanted to make your everything, all right

Now she touched the mahogany casket that held him, placing a single lily, she whispered.


I'll always remember...

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 1:45 pm


Most of my characters sing short little songs that come from off the top of their heads just to pass the time...or something. They also have longer songs that tell stories. Much like Tolkien. I just can't get the hang of it.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:41 pm


Ive written three of them. I dont know how, I just listen to a song, get the lyrics and add a mini story to have the readers understand how I think this applys to something, usualy an anime.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 1:32 pm


*He’s out of my life (a revision of She’s out of my life by 98degrees)*

Kyo was just taken to the room by Akito, but Tohru didn’t get a chance to tell him how she feels. By orders from Akito she is to never see another Sohma again. She rents the old apartment where her and her mom lived. Tohru is so depressed; she has turned to cutting herself.

~He’s out of my life
I don’t know weather to laugh or cry,
To live, or die
And it cuts like a knife
He’s out of my life~

She thinks back to when she first saw his true form, how she held his arm for dear life even when he tried to throw her off. How she held his cat form all the way back to shigure’s house.

~He’s out of my hands
To think for all these years, he was here
And I took him for granted
Now the way it stands
He’s out of my hands~

She knows now exactly how much she cares for him and how blind she was to hold that love inside.

~So I’ve learned that love is no possession,
And I’ve learned that love won’t wait
Now I’ve learned love needs expression
But I’ve learned much too late~

But now it’s too late, she will never see him or any of the Sohmas again.

~And He’s out of my life
D***ed indecision and cursed pride
Kept my love for him locked deep inside
And it cuts like a knife~

The knife slipped, she won’t have to worry now, she will see him again, in the next life.

~He’s out of my life. For now…. ~
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