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MrAsianK
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:33 pm


Table of Contents
1. Intro, and guide (your here)
2. contestants
3. contestant 1's poem
4. contestant 2's poem
5. contestant 3's poem
6. contestant 4's poem
7. contestant 5's poem
8. contestant 6's poem
9. contestant 7's poem
10. contestant 8's poem
11. contestant 9's poem
12. contestant 10's poem
13. contestant 11's poem
14. contestant 12's poem
15. contestant 13's poem


it simple, entry is only 600, all entry money will go to the winner, so the more people who enter, the more money the winner gets. Judging will begin next saturday (september 16, 2006) judging has now been moved to september 23rd 30th (since right now there is only one contestant) judging will be held until there are 5 contestants
the Poetry can be any kind you like (haiku, free-verse, diamante, rhyming,etc.) send entry money to me, if there are enough entries u may get a donation letter whee Poems connot be more than PG-13 rated

Iwill judge this contest, i will not join
poems will be judged upon the following:

meaning
spelling
Grammer (,.'"etc)

each thing will be rated 1-10, with a total of 30 points the poem with the most points wins.

ALL POEMS MUST HAVE A TITLE AND POEMS MUST HAVE THE MAIN TOPIC BE DISNEY RELATED!!!

i will show u a poem i have made, its a free-verse.



I Thought...


I thought...
This relationship would last
I thought...
We would be in love forever,
I was wrong.

It seems,
that every relationship I have,
ends up breaking my heart.

Why is my life so cruel?
Why must I suffer so much?
These are questions that,
I have been wondering,
about for a while.

I can’t take much more pain,
I have attached myself to too many things.
One day I fear everything will fall around me.

Things keep falling,
falling.

I struggle as hard as I can to keep myself up,
but before I can get to my feet,
something else comes crashing down apon me.

I can’t bear it anymore.

My heart hasn’t been ripped in two,
it has been ripped in eight.

It appears that no one is there,
no one in the light,
the light is gone.
I thought there was a light,
but there never was one.
I would have taken my life for you,
I would have done anything for you,
this is how I was repaid.
A broken heart,
and some tears.

My life will never be the same.
You destroyed it,
it is nothing but dust.
I have been reduced to nothing.

I am now surrounded in my own sorrow,
my pain,
my misery,
I fear they may be there forever,
no one can save me.

I wish I could start over,
to the time we met,
to the time we fell in love,
to the time we kissed.
But I can’t,
no one can turn back time.

I heart is merely an empty shell,
I gave all my love to you,
and you left me.

My soul has turned black
my heart is no more,
I shall never love again,
it only brings pain.

I can’t believe I thought you were the one,
I thought of the future,
us getting married,
having kids,
but now it is over.

You shredded my heart,
then through it in a blender.

We had such good times together,
they were the best I will have,
for u ripped me apart,
I am left as a single tether.

I wished,
hoped,
and I dreamed of us,
staying together,
but it seems they were futile.

My heart is now black and shriveled,
and my soul a meer shadow
they used to be full of life,
but you ripped them up,
and they will never recover.

Love is dead to me,
it is a lost cause,
you showed me that.

I guess I should thank you,
but the pain is unbearable much,
and I still wonder why.

I thought...
This relationship would last
I thought...
We would be in love forever,
but...



I thought wrong.


one last thing IF U USE A POEM THAT ISN'T YOURS U WILL KICKED FROM THE CONTEST, AND UNABLE TO JOIN OR PARTICIPATE IN OTHER CONTESTS
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:59 pm


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MrAsianK
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:02 pm


The Nightmare After Christmas
A Prelude to Tim Burton’s The Nightmare Before Christmas
by Jack_Skellington182

Twas Not long ago since our story first began.
In this Town of Halloween Land.
Where Jack stopped Oogies Treacherous planes,
and his love for Sally first began
yet this did not stop Jack from being tired of Halloween Land.
He still found it quite boring and bland.

Jack missed the new feeling of Christmas He could not grasp,
“But WAIT there is more than one door” Jack said with a gasp.
Jack got up and started to walk towards the woods.
Where he would walk all day and all night
until he would get to the circle of trees
that would take him out of his hatred of Halloween.

He took a good look around at all the doors
and tried to pick one that he adored.
He stepped inside one shaped like an Egg
walked around to only see a statue of the one and only Easter Bunny
that was no Mistake.
“Where do I know his face”
said Jack feeling disgraced.
I have no choice but to find out about this ruler they call the Ester (a-steer) Bunny
so Jack went off only to find something funny.
A little bunny
sitting on a throne
only to see Jack
and jump into a hole,
and that’s when Jack remembered the cowered
when Lock Shock and Barrel almost got fired
for getting not Sandy
but none other than the Easter bunny.
“I’m sorry if you have been scared,
I’ll leave this Holiday as quick as A heir”
and Jack being true to his word left that holiday
and never returned.

Out of the tree Jack stepped
feeling glade nothing was wrecked.
Yet he still felt sad.
Looking for another door quick
he stepped into one that looked like a fat bird’s foot.
Down he fell downwards he spiraled towards what looked like sand
until he landed in St. Patrick’s land.
This Place was so green he could not see straight
and he thought to him self this will not be great
he tried to get back to Halloween
but couldn’t see and opened the door to Thanksgiving.

He found himself face down in the sand
of a land he did not understand.
He got up and looked around
and saw people with funny hats and buckles on.
One grabbed a gun
and that’s when Jack decided to run.
Up on the hill he ran and opened up a door that was pink,
and looked rather streaked.

He fell this time landing on his feet
and started to walk only to see red and Pink.
He looked past the hearts and cards.
And started to see little baby’s with what else on their chest but a tiny little heart.
And then he saw these babies have had weapons.
That’s when Jack said to him in a tone that was mean
“by god this is just like Halloween"
and that’s when Jack started to remembered
That he was the king of Halloween
He could make it scarier just as he foreseen
that he could still go back to his home
and forget about all these places that he roamed
he ran back to the trees past the sea or pink
and looked at all the door’s but couldn’t believe what he was seeing.
There was no Halloween door
only one shaped like a tree he stepped in side
and found it to be the last thing he wanted to see.

Jack was in Christmas land
there was no doubt about it.
Jack ran and ran but could not find the door
and at that moment he felt very poor.
He started to give up
as he rest his head back in the snow
only to look up and see a glowing little nose.
He noticed it was Zero
and without a hello he asked “Zero can you help me find my way home”
and with a bark
Zero guided Jacks way home in the dark.
Jack was now at the circle of trees
and walked back in to his beloved town of Halloween
where he would live in peace with out a tear in his eye.
At least until another holiday arrived.






((Note: all characters are based off Tim Burtons the Nightmare Before Christmas I do NOT take credit for the brilliant art that is Jack Skellington))
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:03 pm


reserved for contestant #2

MrAsianK
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reserved for contestant #3
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reserved for contestant #4

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reserved for contestant #5
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reserved for contestant #6

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:07 pm


reserved for contestant #7
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reserved for contestant #8

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:10 pm


reserved for contestant #9
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reserved for contestant #10

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:12 pm


reserved for contestant #11
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reserved for contestant #12

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