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 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 4:40 pm
I thought I'd post this... It's a totally random, weird, romanc-y poem xd Like I said, I don't write poetry very often, nor am I any good at it, but I thought I'd post it, anyways...
Don't critique too hard! lol
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Those warm summer memories
How we used to love that sea breeze,
Ruffling our hair with it’s racing fingers
As we charged the cresting waves, peals of laughter
Ringing
I still hear it ringing, somewhere.
I miss the way you smiled wide,
No cares of the stares that we received,
Walking along, hand in hand;
Two parallel worlds, yet hand in hand
Breathless when we’d stand so still
Hearts content with young love’s fill.
I won’t forget that blissful thrill.
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:34 pm
It was good in my opinion, but I know very little about poetry....
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:52 pm
Thanks smile And same here...
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:54 pm
That was so pretty I liked it alot Joy ^_^. So we really need to write some lyrics together.
cya
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:45 am
We should ^^ And thank-you smile
But can I write a song in Japanese without driving you nuts? lol
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:50 pm
Weeell...
XD
No, I liked it.
It was cool and stuff.
Since I've been readng about a billion thousand of your poetry already, which is a total exaggeration, since I've been going through this list, I think it's one of the good ones.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:57 pm
Heheh, thank you smile I don't write poetry that often so to see me going on a spastic writing spree like this is rare razz lol
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