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Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 9:27 am
 If you have poems or lyrics you want to post for us to read, stick them in here. Opinions and constructive critizism is welcome. If it gets insulting it will be deleted and you will be banned. Please do not repost poetry without permission from author.
thank you.
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 11:41 am
:The Reaper:
And in my darkening shroud
Covered carefully in death's own cloud
Vigilantly watching the on-coming crowd
Waiting patiently for my names reknown
And as I leap forth the only sound
Is that of their mournful souls
As mine forces their's unwillingly down
Into death's life to only drown
In their own enclosing pound
They wait for nightmares untold
comments? yes?
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 1:48 pm
Oooooo nice I like it. You should enter it into the contest.
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 5:48 pm
ooh really?? sweatdrop haha I think I might ^.^ thnx for the comment
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:05 pm
Ok.. I entered this in the poetry contest, but I wanted to see if everyone can find out how I've made this a suicide. And it's not by slicing her wrists. If no one gets it, I'll just land up telling it anyways. But other than that, give me your thoughts on it please. whee
I Put My Life In Your Hands--
I put my life in your hands -- tonight While I'm stuck in desperate misfortune Just take the one way, crash course turn To my heart filled with revolting dreams And keepsakes that bleed eternal lies In this hearse that holds an ebony mirror That reflects our damnation to soulless abyss Because we all were brought to our knees By cotton candy caresses, but brought to an end With poisonous Black Widow kisses This was told through all the hearts you break I'm treading deep water than runs scarlet And we can see your pain engulf your essence Just like a flame, but of depression It just seems so much better to follow A false hope of star-crossed lovers I put my life in your hands -- today 'Cause I'm drowning in your promises It must be, by far, the worst thing That you could possibly say, so leave me here And put an end to this burning obsession Of affection to our colliding mistake of lust Let's just say goodnight, right now, so long Shut up with your pleading misconceptions They aren't the true feelings in your chained box It's your heart that doesn't know the truth Not anymore, but I'll stay here frozen To be a statue, or a shadow that you think little of But I never said I'd come back to you Only that I'd wait forever, if need be These will be the things I never tell you I put my life in your hands -- forever
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:42 pm
" Dark Symphony " Lyrics and music written by Starfireshadow
You've become so distant now... ( Leaving me all alone) Shunned me away now... ( Leaving me without a home) An I'm trying to show you now... ( just left me ..left me all alone) ..that I can't make it on my own.
( Chorus)
and now I'm falling, falling away... ( Into the darkness I fade) Left with the mistakes I've made... ( Into the darkness I fade) ...And now I'm reaching out to you ( Cause now I can see the light ) ..maybe you can pull me through ( ..an hold me in your arms tonight )
Now I'm wandering through the dark... ( No place to call my own ) Keep winding back where I start... ( No place to call a home) I close my eye sand slip away... ( Can't give up, but I can't hold on..) ..and pray for better days ( I'm sinking fast and I ain't got long...)
and now I'm falling, falling away... ( Into the darkness I fade) Left with the mistakes I've made... ( Into the darkness I fade) ...And now I'm reaching out to you ( Cause now I can see the light ) ..maybe you can pull me through ( ..an hold me in your arms tonight )
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 9:23 pm
this is improv so if u don't like it nIm sit and spin
1 2 i look 4 u 3 4 i'm at ur door 5 6 the clock ticks 7 8 i seal ur fate 9 10 i kill u again
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 12:46 pm
Lyrics by me. I dunno, there not very good. sweatdrop
Wounded
Deep inside I'm wounded Bleeding from the heart Yet you just leave me lieing Right here from the start
Here I'm lying, Here I'm dying Calling for a healer But no one's coming nearer.
All will fade away. All will fade away.
I'm crying now, Leave me sitting here I'm dying now, Keep me feeling fear,
How can you just leave me all alone?
Here I'm lying, Here I'm dying Calling for a healer But no one's coming nearer.
All will fade away. All will fade away.
You tell me you are coming You tell me you are near Still you see the sitiuation It could never be more clear.
Here I'm lying, Here I'm dying Calling for a healer But no one's coming nearer.
All will fade away. All will fade away.
From in the heart I'm bleeding With never ending pain. I'm someone who needs heeling, Lieing by the slain.
Here I'm lying, Here I'm dying Calling for a healer But no one's coming nearer.
All will fade away.
Bleh, I'll write a better one later...
~Ebony_Wings~
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 1:35 pm
Poem:
Slowly creeping, reaching, wrapping Open clutches come still near Wrenching, grasping, clawing, trapping Every sense overcome with fear
Hand of Darkness reaches Encasing heart in ice Hope from soul it leeches Until no love will suffice
Cast into despair Thrown into misery Nothing can repair Darkness' a worthy adversary
Hope turned to fear Faith turned to doubt Rent soul with shattered spear Emotions can't break out
Reaching hand plunders soul Tears open wounds so deep For it will have it's toll And victim enters endless sleep
~Ebony_Wings~
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:24 pm
-Untitled-
I am nothing but a scrap of flesh, billowing in the wind. I am nothing but a wandering soul, roaming about the abyss. "Freak!", they shriek, I know it's just a name, words shaped out of sticks and stones I bleed just the same. "Don't shoot up the school, Columbine kid!", I have none of these intentions, don't give me ideas. Path of poison thorns i walk throughout my life, waiting to succumb to myself. "Creepy", they mumble, I know it's just a name, why am I they person that they seem to blame? I am myself and they are the same they all conform whilst i differentiate. This path I walk, it is just me, thorn upon thorn, aching bleeding pain. "Goth", a title, perhaps thats me. Sin is my name for I am he. I am nothing but a scrap of flesh, billowing in the wind. I am nothing but a wandering soul, roaming about the abyss. "Freak!", they shriek, i know it's just a name, words shaped out of sticks and stones, I bleed just the same.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:08 pm
"pain" Pain is another word of all heartbreaks. Pain is what others cannot take. Pain is what hate makes. Pain causes sorrow to others And to our sisters and brothers. Pain does let you know your still human, In every man and woman. Pain is Mendless. Pain is endless. Pain ends a cold heart.
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 1:40 am
"The Lost" Could not sleep, late at night. My mind begins to wonder into different thoughts. Tired, restless, I took leave of my warm bed and took a walk into the chilly night. Streets are desolate, quiet and alone. From the constant pacing of mankind. Never stopping, never slowing down. I head to my secret place. Into the woods, the heart of a circle. There stands the abandoned I once played before. Broken swings, and crooked slides. The roundabout rusty, the falling jungle gym. I felt nostalgic in its silence. An ancient ruin, a valued treasure. I did not care of its outside. I did not care how it looked. For this is where dreams were first made. And nightmares end. Children of long ago come here. They walk forever in these woods. Not knowing love, dignity, and happiness. Crying for eternity to be back home. Only to be aswered in errie ehcos. Some of them murdered, some of them neglected. And some did not want to live at all. I used to play with them when I was little. Laughing, playing. I showed what they shoudn't have missed. But now Ive grown. Too mature to see them through a child's eyes. I took my leave quietly in sadness. Leaving my memories and gravestones of my friends of long ago.
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:20 pm
Rayith the Archangel i love your poem. very thoughtful. it has a kind of.. sad mysterious forboding tone to it. i think its simply beautiful heart
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:45 pm
Poem Only a Wish
Day and Night How I wish I could end it Stop the yelling Stop the fighting How I wish I could end it It would be so easy Grab the knife say goodbye Watch the crimson fall to the floor How I wish I could end it Stop the hitting Stop the dreams The dreams of a better life I know they will never come true How I wish I could end it Stop the lieing Stop acting Just grab the knife and end my life.
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:48 am
Figured I'd enter this in..
Cursed Lullaby
Hush My sleeping darling, dont speak or utter, let the demon craddle you, please dont scream or shutter..
Hush my sleeping darling, dont sob or cry, this poison dosn't sting as much as a lie.
Hush my sleeping darling dont make a sound, the monster under your crib is bound.
Hush my sleeping darling, sweet dreams, be carefull not to scream....
By Thunder Mistress Reureann
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